VN Ren'Py Completed Where the Heart Is [EP25] [CheekyGimp]

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Ill give my two cents on the game: i love it but I believe that the addition of some characters were not beneficial to the overall plot. I am specifically talking about Porshe (and sister), Captain Heart and to a lesser extent dog's boy mum.

Now the entire plot is based on the MC having to choose between the money or Monica's family and solving the mistery of who is plotting behind the MC's back. While the MC is trying to do that, he develops relationships with the other NPCs, who are more or less involved to the main points of the plot.

The characters I mentioned at the beginning of this post feel inconsequential to the plot as pursuing any of them poses no risk for the MC (inheritance vs Monica's family) aside from getting caught cheating on any LIs that he ended up with. For example if you date Bella and Kate you risk not only of losing one or the other (or both), but also the inheritance (yes according to the events of the last episodes you don't anyway but the MC and the player do not know that until ep 24). I used Bella and Kate but i could have made the same example with Monica and Joline or with many others. In addition these characters are somehow intertwined by the main plot points. Therefore there role and relashionship you develop with them feels more natural if contextualized in the overall story. Furthermore these NPCs you meet in the early episodes have had more character development and therefore by cheating on them or losing their affection, frendship or love feels more consequential for the MC.

Conversely Porshe (and sister) and Captain Heart do not have not role in the main plot, have had little development and feel more like some random people added to the mix at the last second for the MC to hump. Furthermore Wanda and Angel are already filling the role of characters not involved in the main plot, making not only Porshe and Heart superfluous but also redundant.

Personally rather than adding these NPCs I would have focused more on the main cast and/or tried to involve more Angela and Wanda with the other NPCs. For example there should have been scenes where the MCs risked to get caught cheating like when Bella visits the beach house while Kate Debbie and Lily are there.

All in all this game is great I played it alot but there are some areas that could be improved
 
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nab said:
Ill give my two cents on the game: i love it but I believe that the addition of some characters were not beneficial to the overall plot. I am specifically talking about Porshe (and sister), Captain Heart and to a lesser extent dog's boy mum.

Now the entire plot is based on the MC having to choose between the money or Monica's family and solving the mistery of who is plotting behind the MC's back. While the MC is trying to do that, he develops relationships with the other NPCs, who are more or less involved to the main points of the plot.

The characters I mentioned at the beginning of this post feel inconsequential to the plot as pursuing any of them poses no risk for the MC (inheritance vs Monica's family) aside from getting caught cheating on any LIs that he ended up with. For example if you date Bella and Kate you risk not only of losing one or the other (or both), but also the inheritance (yes according to the events of the last episodes you don't anyway but the MC and the player do not know that until ep 24). I used Bella and Kate but i could have made the same example with Monica and Joline or with many others. In addition these characters are somehow intertwined by the main plot points. Therefore there role and relashionship you develop with them feels more natural if contextualized in the overall story. Furthermore these NPCs you meet in the early episodes have had more character development and therefore by cheating on them or losing their affection, frendship or love feels more consequential for the MC.

Conversely Porshe (and sister) and Captain Heart do not have not role in the main plot, have had little development and feel more like some random people added to the mix at the last second for the MC to hump. Furthermore Wanda and Angel are already filling the role of characters not involved in the main plot, making not only Porshe and Heart superfluous but also redundant.

Personally rather than adding these NPCs I would have focused more on the main cast and/or tried to involve more Angela and Wanda with the other NPCs. For example there should have been scenes where the MCs risked to get caught cheating like when Bella visits the beach house while Kate Debbie and Lily are there.

All in all this game is great I played it alot but there are some areas that could be improved
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Facts. but out of all the NPCs that didn't make sense the carnival girl. That one just didn't get that.
 
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Of course. Oh my God. That damned woman deprives us of all pleasures.
This Monica looks like Hürrem to me, the wife of Sultan Suleiman the Magnificent, back in the 16th century. The poor man had a harem of more than 500 women, but the harpy would not let him sleep with any of them, except with her. Horrible woman.
By the way, all the women in the VN are not even 25, what a crappy harem. To solve this, I propose that the male characters be incorporated, starting of course with Sammy. Also Roger and his loudmouth friend and the guys at the party. Don't forget the carnies, including the old fortune teller. The maitre d' of the French restaurant. All the male attendees at Comicon, Scarlet's limo driver, the photographer, the bald guy at the theater. I don't forget the big-nosed comedian or the bartender at the joint. Ah! and of course, dog boy. I don't know if I forgot any.
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Also the lawyers (Greg and Sal), Chef Louise who catches you with Lily, old guy who watches you and Jolina streaking across the beach, Keith (who hits on Angel), Julian and Jesus at Keith's party.
 
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Goat Horn said:
Of course. Oh my God. That damned woman deprives us of all pleasures.
This Monica looks like Hürrem to me, the wife of Sultan Suleiman the Magnificent, back in the 16th century. The poor man had a harem of more than 500 women, but the harpy would not let him sleep with any of them, except with her. Horrible woman.
By the way, all the women in the VN are not even 25, what a crappy harem. To solve this, I propose that the male characters be incorporated, starting of course with Sammy. Also Roger and his loudmouth friend and the guys at the party. Don't forget the carnies, including the old fortune teller. The maitre d' of the French restaurant. All the male attendees at Comicon, Scarlet's limo driver, the photographer, the bald guy at the theater. I don't forget the big-nosed comedian or the bartender at the joint. Ah! and of course, dog boy. I don't know if I forgot any.
With this we reach about 50, I think. By the nails of Christ, what a shame for haren.
Long live Suleiman and die fucking Monica.
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....what?
 
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I'm going to play the game again to see if I can impregnate bella,the religious chick and the younger sister.
P.S. I mean at the same gameplay. I know individually you can do it. I want to do it at the same time
 
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Goat Horn said:
By the way, all the women in the VN are not even 25, what a crappy harem.
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Depends who you include: besides the 13 listed on the Stats pages, there's Mabel (carnival), Scarlett, Porsche, Evie, Bubbles, Fiona (at Natasha's party), the librarian, the older woman whose name I forget (Marika?) at Keith's party, 2 cosplayers and 2 LARPers at the convention, 2 strippers on the date with Debbie, the old woman who watches you streak across the beach with Jolina; and 4 cross-over characters from My Sister My Roommate/The Cabin. And no doubt I've forgotten some others.
 
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Rob229 said:
Depends who you include: besides the 13 listed on the Stats pages, there's Mabel (carnival), Scarlett, Porsche, Evie, Bubbles, Fiona (at Natasha's party), the librarian, the older woman whose name I forget (Marika?) at Keith's party, 2 cosplayers and 2 LARPers at the convention, 2 strippers on the date with Debbie, the old woman who watches you streak across the beach with Jolina; and 4 cross-over characters from My Sister My Roommate/The Cabin. And no doubt I've forgotten some others.
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Dear Friend.
First of all, my best wishes to you. Health money and love.
It is heartwarming to see the incredible accounting effort made to increase the number of women present in our harem. Thanks to your detailed count, I believe there are more than thirty. However, how far we are still from the great Turkish or Chinese harems. Suffice it to remember that the Jataka, the famous compilation of legends about the great lords before Buddha, assures that the harem of King Tamba of Benares was made up of more than 16,000 women. Given these figures, we must agree that our harem is poor.
On the other hand, there is one aspect to this whole matter that our dear VN writers have neglected. I am referring to the issue of eunuchs. Who will take care of our harem if we don't have eunuchs? This represents a huge logistical problem. However, I believe that if we ask with due devotion, the authors will gladly include a series of castrated characters that we can count on to guard the walls of our enclosure while we are away.
Without further ado, I say goodbye to you, sending you a cordial greeting.
 
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Goat Horn said:
Dear Friend.
First of all, my best wishes to you. Health money and love.
It is heartwarming to see the incredible accounting effort made to increase the number of women present in our harem. Thanks to your detailed count, I believe there are more than thirty. However, how far we are still from the great Turkish or Chinese harems. Suffice it to remember that the Jataka, the famous compilation of legends about the great lords before Buddha, assures that the harem of King Tamba of Benares was made up of more than 16,000 women. Given these figures, we must agree that our harem is poor.
On the other hand, there is one aspect to this whole matter that our dear VN writers have neglected. I am referring to the issue of eunuchs. Who will take care of our harem if we don't have eunuchs? This represents a huge logistical problem. However, I believe that if we ask with due devotion, the authors will gladly include a series of castrated characters that we can count on to guard the walls of our enclosure while we are away.
Without further ado, I say goodbye to you, sending you a cordial greeting.
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16,000 is *probably* an embellishment.

After all, i'll be generous and say let's assume he bangs 1-2 different ladies *every* 24 hours. Any day that he doesn't bang at least one, he has to make up for it in the next 24 hour period.

16000 / 365 = 43.8356, or 44 years

half that for 2/day:

43.8356 / 2 = 21.918, or 22 years.

So anywhere between 22-44 years to visit everyone in the harem with no skipped days.

Now, let's also be generous and assume he was able to assemble the harem and start this process at 20. Two a day for a 20yo? Sure.

But 22 years later puts him at 42yo. Two a day, every day? Never a day of pushing rope because you just needed a day off to recharge your batteries?

Remember, this would have been long before dick pills, so all that banging had to just be under his own steam power!

So at some point, only one a day will be more feasible, so that could push it out as far as 64yo.

[TL;DR: It was probably more likely that guy had a heart attack before he could bang every lady in a harem of 16,000!

Hell, he might have had the heart attack *because* he tried to bang them all! :ROFLMAO:]
 
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