VN Ren'Py Where the Heart Is [S1 Rev1] [CheekyGimp]

[zajaz]

A part of me kinda wishes Monica turns out to be Dizzy. That would really be wild. Reading everyone's reaction here would be worth the wait , although I still have my doubts about her.

Bella is my # 1 candidate (for now, at least).

Lily... I don't know, it would feel kinda random.

Zarah would be 'meh' for me, from a shock value point of view.

Still, even funnier would be if the lawyer were to be Dizzy. Who says daddy dearest only played for one team? In fact, he struck me as a man who liked to have all bases covered . Now that I think about it, what if MC's daddy actually died of AIDS?

 

[BeingADikDik]

A part of me kinda wishes Monica turns out to be Dizzy. That would really be wild. Reading everyone's reaction here would be worth the wait , although I still have my doubts about her.

Bella is my # 1 candidate (for now, at least).

Lily... I don't know, it would feel kinda random.

Zarah would be 'meh' for me, from a shock value point of view.

Still, even funnier would be if the lawyer were to be Dizzy. Who says daddy dearest only played for one team? In fact, he struck me as a man who liked to have all bases covered . Now that I think about it, what if MC's daddy actually died from AIDS?

I agree that Monica would be the best choice from the storytelling standpoint of a sympathetic character that perhaps made mistakes in the past, for which the MC could choose to forgive or not. However, this would require that the lawyer's words about the GD being cold and calculating would have to apply to Elaine, not Monica. This is believable, but my memory of the context of that discussion led the reader to believe it was referring to the other / non-Elaine GD. If so, then Monica wouldn't be a good fit. In that regard, only Bella and Zarah would be possible IMO.

 

[Ninja of Death]

There needs to be a chart or something to keep track of all these characters. It would be hard recent but like 4 months later for those of us in our late 40s it's not possible to remember.

 

[Ninja of Death]

A part of me kinda wishes Monica turns out to be Dizzy. That would really be wild. Reading everyone's reaction here would be worth the wait , although I still have my doubts about her.

Bella is my # 1 candidate (for now, at least).

Lily... I don't know, it would feel kinda random.

Zarah would be 'meh' for me, from a shock value point of view.

Still, even funnier would be if the lawyer were to be Dizzy. Who says daddy dearest only played for one team? In fact, he struck me as a man who liked to have all bases covered . Now that I think about it, what if MC's daddy actually died from AIDS?

Is it too soon? Who dies of AIDS in the west nowadays? Or is it "Why did the chicken cross the road? Because he had AIDS."

 

[Construct]

I wouldn‘t categorize Lily as most likely. Why would she discuss being smarter than she acts with the MC if she had it out for his inheritance? Wouldn‘t it be smarter to keep up the facade and leave the MC in the dark? Unless we know the will conditions for Dizzy I don‘t think she is more likely than for example Bella who is suspected to work together with Jolina.

 

[felicemastronzo]

Uhm. Why? I think the point is each of them don't know the others conditions and Elain found out by investigating about MC's.

we don't have to believe it, but that is what the lawyer (Gregory?) tells us.

 

[felicemastronzo]

Simple, Bella is an option but not my choice for the GD. Reasons she is an option: How did Bella know where to bring the cloths? she try's to get the MC even when I choose to not pursue her as a LI, she constantly chases him. she helped with Elaine computer but we never get anywhere with info on her computer "yet" also when at beach House, LI or not she leaves her panties in the bathroom why? yes she wants MC but why the hard push when i choose to be friends only? when I choose to be friends only with Jenna she does not push as hard and content in game is diminished, but not so much with Bella. Bella still tries to have sex. so as of the last up date she is a Possible GD but i don't think she is the GD.

the behaviours you list make her a manipulative woman, probably with an ulterior motive, but if we go along with her they effectively push MC to inherit half of Donald's legacy (putting Elaine out of the picture and helping Mc to distance himself from Monica)

I wouldn‘t categorize Lily as most likely. Why would she discuss being smarter than she acts with the MC if she had it out for his inheritance? Wouldn‘t it be smarter to keep up the facade and leave the MC in the dark? Unless we know the will conditions for Dizzy I don‘t think she is more likely than for example Bella who is suspected to work together with Jolina.

but it's not that she only does it with MC, she's basically been doing it all her life waiting for Donald's inheritance? when she was already in high school?

She's a precog...

 

[LionHeart 95]

the behaviours you list make her a manipulative woman, probably with an ulterior motive, but if we go along with her they effectively push MC to inherit half of Donald's legacy (putting Elaine out of the picture and helping Mc to distance himself from Monica)

as you write: The behaviors I list make her a manipulative woman, probably with an ulterior motive.
That makes Bella a possible GD. but putting Elaine out of picture? how? both Elaine and Bella ask MC to move back or make sure MC knows they want him to. that is probably a will condition for Elaine. Bella trying to get MC in trouble with Katie and her girls with the panty drop so she can get him away from them that makes her less of a GD so that is reasons she is only Possible not a likely GD. because if she is a GD then she wants him to be with Monica and the Girls. to inherit more herself..

As for Lily if she is the same age of Katie or MC then Donald could have been with her for the last 2 years! and a girl with rich parents would put her around rich families so contact with Donald is possible. this is eluded to in the conversation about her dad at the library so those who thinks she is too young its called a sugar daddy / man with power/ a womanizer young girls like older men, so her age is not a problem. even if you think timing is off its not clear how long the other GD was with Donald.

 

[Bonhomie]

It's still Bella
All these theories forget the Dad's tape saying: "Elaine would have killed me if she knew who she (my mistress/ the golddigger) was".
So Elaine knows her.
She's close to Elaine.
Need more?

 

[Construct]

If Lily was being sugardaddied by Donald I‘d expect more hints towards that. Even Angel is more likely in that theory, since she had something with an older guy, which she talks about ingame.
I don‘t remember the talk in the library too well. I need to replay the whole game again I think.

 

[Machete]

I think Angel gets hinted too strong. Even MC says 'this sounds like my father' when Angel tells about her older ex.

Jolina is super manipulative and she has a more compatible age then Angel and Lily. And maybe she and Elaine know each other. It might not have been a case if Elaine went to Cups of Jo to send the Email. If she did so. She could have gone there to negotiate at some level with Jolina who's double-crossing bot her and MC.

The reason i say Jolina is too easy is because she is, among all, absolutely perfect under every aspect. She has a reasonable role to be a LI both for MC and his father. She is smart. She's mysterious. She can pull some serious stunt. She's ruthless. She's a femme fatal. She literally is in the pivotal location of the main plot.

We know she recently opened Cups of Jo. Could she have opened it as a base of operation and part of her plot against the other heirs? Might she have known the wills to some extent before Elaine and MC?

That could also have explained the rage outburst when MC first asks here out. Ok, the "he's with Jenna" explaination works. But how does it works "he's the son of my late sugar daddy"?

Isn't it suspicious that if you refuse to walk to Jolie to ask her out it's game over?

 

[felicemastronzo]

as you write: The behaviors I list make her a manipulative woman, probably with an ulterior motive.
That makes Bella a possible GD. but putting Elaine out of picture? how? both Elaine and Bella ask MC to move back or make sure MC knows they want him to. that is probably a will condition for Elaine. Bella trying to get MC in trouble with Katie and her girls with the panty drop so she can get him away from them that makes her less of a GD so that is reasons she is only Possible not a likely GD. because if she is a GD then she wants him to be with Monica and the Girls. to inherit more herself..

As for Lily if she is the same age of Katie or MC then Donald could have been with her for the last 2 years! and a girl with rich parents would put her around rich families so contact with Donald is possible. this is eluded to in the conversation about her dad at the library so those who thinks she is too young its called a sugar daddy / man with power/ a womanizer young girls like older men, so her age is not a problem. even if you think timing is off its not clear how long the other GD was with Donald.

Bella continually puts Elaine in a bad light with MC, continually pushing him to suspect her, not to trust her, to minimize every gesture Elaine makes towards MC

this certainly doesn't make Elaine's task any easier as we know the condition of the will concerns both MC and Donald's house.

If MC listens to Bella, will he ever allow Elaine to continue living in that house?

there is not a single action of hers that will take MC away from the inheritance, which we assume a GD would do


about lily my objection was to the suspicion that she's pretending to be stupid to take the suspicion off herself. it's a theory that doesn't make sense, she's been friends for a long time with katie and debbie, would she have been pretending all the time, since the firing, even with them? before the will existed, just to be ready to make fun of mc? really too forced

 

[zajaz]

I think Angel gets hinted too strong. Even MC says 'this sounds like my father' when Angel tells about her older ex.

Jolina is super manipulative and she has a more compatible age then Angel and Lily. And maybe she and Elaine know each other. It might not have been a case if Elaine went to Cups of Jo to send the Email. If she did so. She could have gone there to negotiate at some level with Jolina who's double-crossing bot her and MC.

The reason i say Jolina is too easy is because she is, among all, absolutely perfect under every aspect. She has a reasonable role to be a LI both for MC and his father. She is smart. She's mysterious. She can pull some serious stunt. She's ruthless. She's a femme fatal. She literally is in the pivotal location of the main plot.

We know she recently opened Cups of Jo. Could she have opened it as a base of operation and part of her plot against the other heirs? Might she have known the wills to some extent before Elaine and MC?

That could also have explained the rage outburst when MC first asks here out. Ok, the "he's with Jenna" explaination works. But how does it works "he's the son of my late sugar daddy"?

Isn't it suspicious that if you refuse to walk to Jolie to ask her out it's game over?

Not to mention Jolina has some less than subtle (possible) clues about her being the GD. Someone mentioned before the Dolly Parton song and how that could be applied to Jolina. I can see it happen, but for some reason Bella is still my number one suspect at the moment, although maybe she and Jolina are working together? Maybe Elaine knows her as 'a friend of Bella' *wink, wink* .

 

[Ninja of Death]

Who exactly were Bella and Jolina?

 

[LionHeart 95]

There are many reasons it could be any of the possible GDs we all have our Favorite choice that is for sure. I like things a little more neatly put together some like a mystery others want a complete topsy-turvy. I think it would be hilarious if a new Character was introduced as the GD. LOL

 

[cryhwks]

Simple, Bella is an option but not my choice for the GD. Reasons she is an option: How did Bella know where to bring the cloths? she try's to get the MC even when I choose to not pursue her as a LI, she constantly chases him. she helped with Elaine computer but we never get anywhere with info on her computer "yet" also when at beach House, LI or not she leaves her panties in the bathroom why? yes she wants MC but why the hard push when i choose to be friends only? when I choose to be friends only with Jenna she does not push as hard and content in game is diminished, but not so much with Bella. Bella still tries to have sex. so as of the last up date she is a Possible GD but i don't think she is the GD.

More reasons, she and Elaine were apparently not that close before the dad dying. But now all of a sudden she's trying to be Elaine's best friend, even going so far as quitting her job to be close to her.

Also pointing she's trying really hard to get with the MC, even when you turn her down. Clearly trying to hedge her bets that whomever gets this Inheritance she at at least gets a piece of it.

 

[lordofhirunds]

Doanald is dead and Elaine not yet aware of the conditions of the will, pushes Mc into Monica's arms, believing that this would exclude him from the will, Knowing that the house will not be completely hers, she seduces Mc and Bella who knows the conditions of the will, helps Ealine to seduce Mc and take him away from Monica, instilling doubt in Mc about who Monica really is (MC asks Jolina if it was Monica who used the PC to send the email).
Elaine tells Mc about Monica's advances to Donald. Elaine is trying to figure out how to learn about the condition of the other two MCs and dizzy her.
Bella is playing a well-researched role with Mc, backing Mc against her sister, but at the same time protecting her sister.
The perfect triangle MC BELLA ELAINE.
On the night that Mc is having dinner at Elaine's, when she asks him if he is willing to give her the whole house, take a look at the double reaction depending on whether Mc accepts or refuses.
Elaine is playing dirty with Mc.
Italian saying A hair of vagina pulls more than 100 bulls

 

[LionHeart 95]

Doanald is dead and Elaine not yet aware of the conditions of the will, pushes Mc into Monica's arms, believing that this would exclude him from the will, Knowing that the house will not be completely hers, she seduces Mc and Bella who knows the conditions of the will, helps Ealine to seduce Mc and take him away from Monica, instilling doubt in Mc about who Monica really is (MC asks Jolina if it was Monica who used the PC to send the email).
Elaine tells Mc about Monica's advances to Donald. Elaine is trying to figure out how to learn about the condition of the other two MCs and dizzy her.
Bella is playing a well-researched role with Mc, backing Mc against her sister, but at the same time protecting her sister.
The perfect triangle MC BELLA ELAINE.
On the night that Mc is having dinner at Elaine's, when she asks him if he is willing to give her the whole house, take a look at the double reaction depending on whether Mc accepts or refuses.
Elaine is playing dirty with Mc.
Italian saying A hair of vagina pulls more than 100 bulls

hope you were looking for feedback on this. if not sorry!
Yes Donald is dead
Elaine might know the will conditions, Lawyer would not say who knows the other s conditions.
We don't know for sure who gave Monica the email, it could be Elaine but no proof yet. why was Elaine at cup of jo? (possible to confront Jolina or send the Email)
she can try to seduce the MC, but he can reject Elaine and Bella both
Jolina Did say it was not Monica and we don't seem to have a pic of Elaine to convenient to me. and we never take a pic to show Jolina.
Elaine and Monica have different stories on what happened with Donald. do we really think Elaine is correct. especially since there is a second GD.
Elaine wont discuss the will with MC no mater if MC pushes or not. so we again don't know what she knows.
Bella protects Sister only when MC is guilting her or not a LI to MC, if Elaine is a LI she trys to get in the way of MC being too close to her i dont see the perfect Triangle here, if Bella is LI then she want him for herself if not she still trys to get MC anyway
Elaine playing dirty well that would make her know the will conditions!

Fuzzy Wuzzy was a bear,
Fuzzy Wuzzy had no hair,
Fuzzy Wuzzy wasn’t really fuzzy, Was she?

 

[felicemastronzo]

Doanald is dead and Elaine not yet aware of the conditions of the will, pushes Mc into Monica's arms, believing that this would exclude him from the will, Knowing that the house will not be completely hers, she seduces Mc and Bella who knows the conditions of the will, helps Ealine to seduce Mc and take him away from Monica, instilling doubt in Mc about who Monica really is (MC asks Jolina if it was Monica who used the PC to send the email).
Elaine tells Mc about Monica's advances to Donald. Elaine is trying to figure out how to learn about the condition of the other two MCs and dizzy her.
Bella is playing a well-researched role with Mc, backing Mc against her sister, but at the same time protecting her sister.
The perfect triangle MC BELLA ELAINE.
On the night that Mc is having dinner at Elaine's, when she asks him if he is willing to give her the whole house, take a look at the double reaction depending on whether Mc accepts or refuses.
Elaine is playing dirty with Mc.
Italian saying A hair of vagina pulls more than 100 bulls

not really...

pushing MC to Monica's and then later trying to get him away from her, what would be the point?

Bella in no way protects Elaine, on the contrary she does everything to make MC not trust her, she doesn't help her in any way

Bella plays for herself, maybe for Jolina, but certainly not for Elaine.

 

[Machete]

Who exactly were Bella and Jolina?

Elaine = Dad's wife (or mate?)
Bella = Elaine's sister
Jolina = Blonde big boobs coffee bar owner

And to benefit everyone who gets confused with names:

Donald = MC late dad

Monica = Mother of the two young sisters
Jenna = Nerd sister
Kate = Sporty sister

Lily = Brunette dumb friend of Kate
Debby = Blonde bisex friend of Kate

Zarah = Monica's asian or something friend/business partner/photographer

Angel = Black wannabe model and agency secretary
Wanda = White wannabe model and professional asshole

Theresa = Dogboy religious nuts mother
Dogboy = Jenna's creepy stalker

Natasha = Kate's ''friend' and standard mean girl
Roger = Natasha douchbag boyfriend
Sammy = Official support gay personù

Mabel = Random slutty carnival girl

Francois = Fancy restaurant maitre

I don't remember the name of the wills layer and i'm sure i didn't leave out any important character. The rest are stuff like the carnival Gandalfs and generic workers, or the two trophy girls at the restaurant.