Ennoch

Conversation Conqueror
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Respected User
Oct 10, 2017
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oh..he's here all right..watching us..in his dark corner..steepling his fingers cackling as we are sucked hopelessly into the world he has created :D
Why do you have to be so honest! Throw in some white lie sometime, sheesh!
 

botc76

The Crawling Chaos, Bringer of Strange Joy
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Oct 23, 2016
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So time for my personal point...i see here lot ppl says the story is funny and good...i dont think is "SO" good...maybe for some poor fantasy ppl...i dont know why a neighbor ask a young man to be behalf with 3 femals who arent related first, second, the story dont move on if MC dont fuck that cock hungry neighbor slut, no choise here...so said, good story for poor fantasied ppl...and iam only at beginning...maybe stop right now and delete...just to say, reading posts in here arent so trustfull and most like time wast...there are much much much better writing stories so dont fool around...ty

Lol. Honestly, considering your English I doubt you can even recognize what constitutes good writing in that language.
I mean, I'm sure you understand better than you write, but you write damn bad.

So how would you recognize the humour, the wit, the different characters, how erotic the sexy times are written?


I'm not trying to attack or belittle you, but to see if a game has good writing, your language-skills need to be up to a level that you can recognize good from bad.
I see it on fanfic.net all the time, when totally inane stuff gets good reviews and ratings from a bunch of people who can hardly write one sentence in understandable English.
 

FaiRTaiL

Active Member
Nov 8, 2017
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really good update, thanks to the dev.. but this night would be the end with Katie.. just saying..
 

ultorem13

Newbie
Sep 10, 2018
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Lol. Honestly, considering your English I doubt you can even recognize what constitutes good writing in that language.
I mean, I'm sure you understand better than you write, but you write damn bad.

So how would you recognize the humour, the wit, the different characters, how erotic the sexy times are written?


I'm not trying to attack or belittle you, but to see if a game has good writing, your language-skills need to be up to a level that you can recognize good from bad.
I see it on fanfic.net all the time, when totally inane stuff gets good reviews and ratings from a bunch of people who can hardly write one sentence in understandable English.
so if you answered me, my english isn't so bad at the end...go on
 

poop

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Sep 14, 2016
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liked this game up until this episode. this last episode feels a bit too much like some loser is living out his way over the top revengepornfantasy. thats abit too much for me and i want to repeat that "for me" part.

if everyone else likes it then good for you.
 
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The long awaited party. I loved it! The tone was just silly enough for their little revenge plot to not come off as too vicious or vindictive. An overall fun scene with some great Lily and Debbie dialogue. Lily's bons mots were among the absolute highlights. I could almost hear her affect a ditzy voice and add a 'Teehee' after every burn :p

Here's a few typos I noticed in ep.8 (note that I considered most questions of capitalization to be artistic choice)
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WT for episode 8 anybody
Walkthrough to EP 8?
Walkthrough of the latest version?

Made a detailed walkthrough. Enjoy!
 
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