VN Ren'Py Where the Heart Is [S1 Rev1] [CheekyGimp]

[CheekyGimp]

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Looks like an issue with a menu branch within another branch. There was one choice (saying thanks to Katie after the "hot" comment) which results in the variable not being declared. Have updated the code and will update the download file shortly.
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[CheekyGimp]

I agree there just to dam big and make me sick but I will give the game a go just in case there are some smaller tits in the game..





Just as long as we get some 18-19 yo's I will be happy even though I love incest games the best.

There are some 18-19 yo's. And there will definitely be some characters, with smaller tits.

 

[CheekyGimp]

Just finished this version and didnt find this scene. Where is it?

Coming soon. Teaser pic, not part of this episode..

 

[SexyBASS]

Coming soon. Teaser pic, not part of this episode..

Very nice game btw

 

[CheekyGimp]

Just finished playing. A few thoughts:

* I'm not a fan of the action buttons being black on a black background at the beginning. Perhaps a more contrasting color?

* Please speed up the text display at the beginning. It's irritating waiting for it to display.

* This almost seems like a realistic or at least a plausible setup. I like that. It's a welcome change.

* I like that there are bad endings. Too many games like this are too easy. I didn't mind all of the decision points, as it made me feel like I was playing a game rather than reading some guy's erotic novel disguised as a game.

Overall, I liked it. There's some promise, and I can see it going in smoe very interesting directions.

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I agree the intro page needs some work. I need to create a better banner (multi-pic banner above was rushed) and a "game poster" page, which I'll use for the intro screen. And the text speed is a fair point. Will review.

 

[CheekyGimp]

i always like a good variety pack. don't get me wrong i love some milk cows, but if they're all the same it gets too, yawn, umm.... where was i? no incest, but thats fine. its close enough and read between the lines. honestly any dev that wants to make a patreon buck is smart to do exactly this. incest setup, but not explicitly.

looks like a job for some motivated modder now. =)

Yep. Initial idea was that rich Dad kep Mom and Sisters out of the picture after the divorce. (So no dead Mom). Made some changes to make it patreon friendly. But once all episodes complete, I'll make a F**-You Patreon version where Mom and Sisters get to welcome their brother when he cums home!

 

[botc76]

That was impressive for a game right at the start. I've played games several more versions in with less content.

I also liked the nuanced decision making, especially with Monica I got the feeling I could decide how forward I was.
Of course with the daughters, the options were a bit obvious, but that's better than making a completely harmless decision and meeting a game over.
Here it's pretty clear what will seriously get you into shit.

Also, while I have absolutely nothing against an incest patch in the end, it's refreshing to be able to go after a hot milf and her daughters WHO are NOT blood related to you.

I mean, seducing/being seduced by your mom's sexy friend is a trope all it's own.

 

[a1fox3]

Yep. Initial idea was that rich Dad kep Mom and Sisters out of the picture after the divorce. (So no dead Mom). Made some changes to make it patreon friendly. But once all episodes complete,:heartcoveredeyes: :heartcoveredeyes:I'll make a F**-You Patreon version where Mom and Sisters get to welcome their brother when he cums home! :heartcoveredeyes::heartcoveredeyes:

Well shit man I if I like the game after 2 - 4 more updates I may have to just support you then.:heartcoveredeyes:

 

[CheekyGimp]

Found a bug -

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 881, in script
$KatieL+= 1
File "game/script.rpy", line 881, in <module>
$KatieL+= 1
NameError: name 'KatieL' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 881, in script
$KatieL+= 1
File "/opt/WhereTheHeartIs-0.02-pc/renpy/ast.py", line 827, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "/opt/WhereTheHeartIs-0.02-pc/renpy/python.py", line 1764, in py_exec_bytecode
exec bytecode in globals, locals
File "game/script.rpy", line 881, in <module>
$KatieL+= 1
NameError: name 'KatieL' is not defined

Linux-4.4.0-116-generic-x86_64-with-debian-stretch-sid
Ren'Py 6.99.13.2919
Where The Heart Is 0.02

Thanks. Also noticed by another poster. Found the issue and will update the fixed version shortly.

 

[CheekyGimp]

Can i reject all the ones with artificially large breasts?

Oh wait, no,... I can choose between fake tit A or fake tit B, and if i choose a realistically proportioned human female, that means my selection as a man; or her proportions as a female are 'unrealistic'.

Thanks for yet another game which encourages human females to inject foreign cancer-causing agents into themselves in order to rise to the level of humanity.

You should be ashamed. If you aren't, it only reinforces the level of shame due you... What would your reaction be if she said, oh... only 7 inches.... Not going to remember this one...

This is the second forum that you have posted this comment on, so nice to know you plan on "shaming" me on every forum. I'll post the same reply to you as per the other forum:

WOW. Thanks for the feedback. I doubt if my game is going to encourage any woman to get a boob-job, but thanks for your optimism about my game's ability to influence the masses.
Am I ashamed ? No. It's a game that contains nothing illegal. And compared to other games, it's very tame (with future plans to become much less tame)
"Can I choose between fake tit A or.... blah blah blah..". The better choice for you would probably to have a look at the females in the pictures in the samples shown and if it is going to cause the heightened sense of outrage in you, you can "choose" to not download.
But in saying that, Thanks for the feedback, because for me ALL feedback is good feedback. The more I get a feel for what people like and don't like, hopefully it will aid my game's development.
Thanks. And say hi to all the folks you work with in the boob clinic . Although they probably shouldn't let you answer the phones.

 

[groove888]

There'll be a walkthrough at some stage to give the details behind the choices/consequences. At the moment, there's 2 variables per character (Relationship & lust) which are increased/decreased based on the conversation/action choices. Plus some within-scene choices that change options/outcomes within the scene.

Yeah I was mostly saying that because in the future it would be a pain to guess which choices are crucial and which aren't.

If you don't plan to show relationship point I think it might be good to give a little bit of leeway on the variable so that it doesn't hinge on you getting all the right note but on you getting the overall feel.

I think you were pretty good at "recycling" your render which I found pretty interesting.

 

[Rroarr]

Can anyone be kind enough to post the CG? Thanks in advance

use this

 

[Zippity]

You know you never see how people proclaim how everyone should get bigger breasts/asses in games with more realistic body sizes (everyone having the shape of a thin super model isn't excalty realistic either...) , but when it's the other way around people whine like crazy here...

There are just a lot of different folk with different tastes... Some tend to be more vocal then others when something doesn't meet all their needs and desires... I prefer small to medium, or at least body proportional... It's when they don't look like they belong on particular body style, or go WAY overboard that I begin to hoop and holler... I like to see at least some attempt/s at realistic sizes... Otherwise the immersion begins to falter...

 

[unevenrm]

@CheekyGimp:
Noticed at least 5 likes from you to my comments (they was just for fun)... Flatterer I'm not deserve those
But you're adecvate dev - listening to criticism (even from drunk people like me ): give them smaller breasts (not for Katie) and we'll have a deal Nah... We ALL 'll be happy (community of f95 I mean )

 

[The Punisher]

can anyone post a Mac version of this game ??

 

[unevenrm]

can anyone post a Mac version of this game ??

If i'm not so stupid as I am, Ren'py makes a copy for mac, android etc... So maybe dev will post them.... eventually

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[geddout]

use this

Did this actually work for you this time? I can't seem to find a majority of the images like the one sister changing.

 

[Rroarr]

Did this actually work for you this time? I can't seem to find a majority of the images like the one sister changing.

Yeah it did. including changing scene

 

[winter0s]

Damnit, I love the useful criticism.

To be honest, IMO you need to work a bit on the renders. The lighting and colors.

 

[DanMachiFan]

Liked the game so far.
True, there's lot of text, but it's a prologue and helps to understand and add immersion to the story.
Characters and renders looks good for me.
If I may, I would decrease a bit the choices we have to peek. In the long run this can become a bit annoying.
The most refreshing thing is that the older "sister" doesn't hate you. Finally a friendly family!
I'm looking forward for more.
Thanks @CheekyGimp @UncleVT