Just played the Ch. 15 beta version, and I'm impressed by many things.
- Writing -- A highlight of the game ever since its inception has been the writing. Cheeky is just showing it off now, sometimes the wordplay seems to be overdone but for someone like me who likes wordplay, I didn't mind.
- Renders -- Again, with each updates they are getting better,
- Make or break -- Won't spoil it for you check it out yourselves
- Gripes -- You finally hit a milestone with one of the arguably popular character, again she may not be everyone's liking but Cheeky finally delivered on her, albeit in a slightly anti-climactic way. The built up was so much that the delivery felt a bit rushed, granted this being a beta yet I hoped it lasted longer . At least I was a bit disappointed, lets see how CheekyGimp would take it fwd. I also would like to see the MC's face as so far the game has been a POV and every time there's a 3rd person perspective, MC's face is hidden. Nothing against but at least in the long scene in the update, it would have been sensible to show his face.
Despite the beta, the only typos that I found was for
antagonize and that shows the quality of the writing. The renders are exceptional, I wish there's some subtle bg-music to complement the story throughout. A good example of this is 'The Way'.
Other than that, eagerly awaiting the full update. 35 pages of saves so far for me!