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I'm not really sure why, Monica was my favorite in the beginning. Wasn't meant to be.
Maybe someday you will change your mind about her. Like me about Elaine.
But with Elaine and Bella I'm on shaky ground yet. I don't trust them too much. Bella is hiding something for sure.. maybe she was the father's other woman? now she pretends to hate him. And now she's sticking to MC. I do not know.
In any case, I'm more likely to trust Elaine than Bella.
Although Elaine pissed me off a lot at first. That email from Elaine about MC having moved out and forbidding him to come back and to take his clothes or throw them in the trash bin pissed me off. Then a sudden change of behavior.. to a good woman who regrets treating him like that.. (I wonder why?) A little suspicious, but I will try to give her a chance later. :p
 
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I didn't really get a money grabbing vibe from Theresa, Bella being in the will would explain her behavior I guess.
 
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Even if we overlook the party scene there is the glaring plot hole of why Monica never tried to get in touch.

In the canon game it's because she had no rights, she wasn't his mother so what's her excuse when she is his mother and does have rights?

Why are the girls never mentioned by the dad?

The man screwed over everyone in his life from the MC's mother to Monica, to Elaine to Bella and anyone he comes into contact with. He was the very definition of a complete bastard. So he conveniently forgets he has daughters?

Why are they not in the will?

Why did Monica not contend child support like his actual mother did, it would have solved all her financial problems.

Why is she not contending the will, she has the right as his ex wife?

Elaine never married him so the only one with both children and family ties would be an incest modded Monica.

They do various things in public and incest is still taboo in that world so why are the people fighting to get his dads money not using the fact he's committing illegal acts against him?

The very plot of the game instantly becomes riddled with massive plot holes when trying to make them family.

I'm not trying to bash at you, I know you aren't asking for incest but Cheeky didn't set it up to be patched into an incest game so it takes a turn to nonsense when people try. There is only so much of the story a mod can change, it can't change the plot.
I assumed the plot holes were deliberately made to get around patreon rules by dev, only ever played patched.
if Monica was never intended as real mom by dev for real then it's a different game to play with maybe different decisions to make especially regarding the will, who to tell and who to be more suspicious of also depending on relationships newly made and the old established relationships, will the MC be betrayed by not mom? she seems to sweet.
will have to do new playthrough unpatched, see which makes more sense.
 

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Although Elaine pissed me off a lot at first. That email from Elaine about MC having moved out and forbidding him to come back and to take his clothes or throw them in the trash bin pissed me off. Then a sudden change of behavior.. to a good woman who regrets treating him like that.. (I wonder why?) A little suspicious, but he will try to give her a chance later. :p
Elaine seems to be motivated by money, I'm guessing her conditions have something to do with being in MC's life. I can live with that if she falls in love with MC after the fact. Bella could have the same conditions Elaine does, that would be really fucked up from dad's POV.

I never liked Bella much, even before I became paranoid. :)
 

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did i make a mistake with monica if i go to say good night and she says "i am glad nothing is going on between us and we can just get along" <concept of what she says
 

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I assumed the plot holes were deliberately made to get around patreon rules by dev, only ever played patched.
if Monica was never intended as real mom by dev for real then it's a different game to play with maybe different decisions to make especially regarding the will, who to tell and who to be more suspicious of also depending on relationships newly made and the old established relationships, will the MC be betrayed by not mom? she seems to sweet.
will have to do new playthrough unpatched, see which makes more sense.
Cheeky originally was going to skirt Patreon rules but didn't want to make yet another "boy comes home to mother and 2 sisters" cliche incest game so scrapped it an made her mothers best friend to avoid incest completely.

The game isn't intended for incest that's why it's a fan made mod and not an incest patch. Whoever made it changed the story to try and fit incest in but it leaves a lot of plot holes because they can't change the entire plot.

The canon game as the devs intend it is not an incest game though.
 

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I look at the game files in images out of curiosity about Monica and Zarah's new looks and I must say Monica looks amazing... :love: Zarah.. with her appearance it was always bad for me. But I admit that now it looks better than before.
I'm very pleased you liked them. Thank you.
 
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Here's my capsule review of Ep 18:

  • The renders have come leagues since the Ep 1-4, which always makes for an enjoyable gameplay
  • Monica looks stunning in Ep-18, her dimples and jaw lines are more accentuated. I hope she gets a hairdo, as she's the only one who had the same set of hair since Ep 1. I never had an issue with Zarah, as more than her body, I liked her attitude, which still is similar to dancing around a hot fire.
  • My major gripe since past few episodes has been the minor characters;
  • Old saves didn't work. Luckily, I started off from the stats screen, which begun the update. All 45 - 50 pages of my saves couldn't be seen in the new version. I think it has been reported by many here.
  • Overall, solid and stunning update in terms of story, character arcs and H-scenes. Looking fwd for the next one, Elain FTW!
 

Qmil679

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Elaine seems to be motivated by money, I'm guessing her conditions have something to do with being in MC's life. I can live with that if she falls in love with MC after the fact. Bella could have the same conditions Elaine does, that would be really fucked up from dad's POV.

I never liked Bella much, even before I became paranoid. :)
I don't know, I don't trust Bella. She sticks to MC, she suddenly likes him so much after her father's death. She helps as much as she can. I wonder why? I can't believe she had a crush on MC. It must be something else.

The only women I trust in this game are the ones the MC lives with (Monica, Jenna, Katie) + Lily and Debbie. the rest is one unknown, every woman hides something. :confused:
It would be nice if everything revealed already.. I would like to know the true face of Elaine, Bella and Jolina, that's what interests me the most.
 
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I don't know, I don't trust Bella. She sticks to MC, she suddenly likes him so much after her father's death. She helps as much as she can. I wonder why? I can't believe she had a crush on MC. It must be something else.
That's how I feel too, she's way too eager with our MC to just be a crush.
The only women I trust in this game are the ones the MC lives with (Monica, Jenna, Katie) + Lily and Debbie. the rest is one unknown, every woman hides something. :confused:
It would be nice if everything revealed already.. I would like to know the true face of Elaine, Bella and Jolina, that's what interests me the most.
I kinda trust Monica, Jenna and Katie. They have nothing to gain from the MC living with them as far as we know. Of course my paranoia strikes immediately and one of them could be in the will and their condition would be to have the MC living with them. o_O

Oh dear.
 
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Mabel was never supposed to have sex with MC, except flashing her tits, that was my self insert to a boring scene. But apparently someone else on the team liked the new look I gave her so much he decided to go for it, failing in the process...
 

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I don't know, I don't trust Bella. She sticks to MC, she suddenly likes him so much after her father's death. She helps as much as she can. I wonder why? I can't believe she had a crush on MC. It must be something else.

The only women I trust in this game are the ones the MC lives with (Monica, Jenna, Katie) + Lily and Debbie. the rest is one unknown, every woman hides something. :confused:
It would be nice if everything revealed already.. I would like to know the true face of Elaine, Bella and Jolina, that's what interests me the most.
your also forgetting that Elaine is also getting along right after MC's dad's death "trying to make up lost years" as she claims i bet its in the will to kick him out of the house then send Monica the email and then be nice to MC so he would lose everything
 
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That's how I feel too, she's way too eager with our MC to just be a crush.

I kinda trust Monica, Jenna and Katie. They have nothing to gain from the MC living with them as far as we know. Of course my paranoia strikes immediately and one of them could be in the will and their condition would be to have the MC living with them. o_O

Oh dear.
No no please no. Monica, Katie and Jenna, please don't have anything to do with that will. At least they. There are already too many secrets here in this game.. :(
 

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That would be doing them a favour, the dad hated Monica and wouldn't want her having money and the MC. If anything he would have given her the same conditions as him, to stay away.
Thanks for giving me a minute to enjoy my theory. It wasn't very good anyway. :D
 
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