VN Ren'Py Where the Heart Is [S1 Rev1] [CheekyGimp]

[MrFriendly]

But imagine the mess he'd have to clean up to make sure it was fit for the two best girls. Plus..maybe he just didn't fancy driving over there..traffic is terrible in that town you know

LOL, yes that terrible traffic... Makes him late for everything.

But when Monica says the girls plans fell through and now they have no place to fuck the first thing that he should say is "Let's go back to my place then"...

Especially if the player isn't also schtupping Zarah.

 

[Maviarab]

As for me, Mabel doesn't exist. When I left with Monica, I'm with Monica. I'm not leaving Monica alone, and I'm not going to a woman I just met. It's poor behavior to set someone up like this.

Well, unless someone doesn't like Monica and isn't in a relationship with her, that's another matter.

Bwahahahaha....who's Monica again?

LOL, yes that terrible traffic... Makes him late for everything.

But when Monica says the girls plans fell through and now they have no place to fuck the first thing that he should say is "Let's go back to my place then"...

Especially if the player isn't also schtupping Zarah.

Yeah I agree, I was just being silly. it does seem an oversight, even Monica leaving seems a little weird, she could have just waited outside the gates or something while we spoke to Mabel when we were leaving. Have to put that one down to plot...as you say, convenient if you're also after Zarah.

 

[Qmil679]

Bwahahahaha....who's Monica again?

hey hey, but about my beloved Monica, please don't say that!

 

[freedom.call]

As for me, Mabel doesn't exist. When I left with Monica, I'm with Monica. I'm not leaving Monica alone, and I'm not going to a woman I just met.

I like that.

 

[Maviarab]

hey hey, but about my beloved Monica, please don't say that!

I'm jesting even though I'm not a fan of hers, I'd never knock someone for liking a particular character though, should know my soh by now.

Only time I've done a Mon/Zarah run is on my man whore run..just so i can see what shit-storm Cheeky has planned for us when they all find out about each other hehe.

 

[MrFriendly]

I like that.

It's a good thing STDs and unwanted pregnancies don't happen in this game. LOL

 

[acewinz]

Would be nice if the MC could actually move into the beach house already. I was confused with the last update as to why Monica and the MC didn't just go fuck at the beach house? The whole "need to arrange for the girls to be out of the house" didn't need to happen. Of course then the MC couldn't slip it to Zarah afterwards but the fact that Monica and the MC never even considered it was odd.

He could be living down there on his own private beach (until he gets hit by the estate tax and the property taxes) and Monica could be driving over and having Subway for lunch every day.

You have a point about the beach house.

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[Maviarab]

It's a good thing STDs and unwanted pregnancies don't happen in this game. LOL

ALSO very true!

As much as liked her...loved her little scenes...when we were getting told about her by the fortune teller even I was thinking to myself 'ohhh jeeeez....' haha.

 

[acewinz]

It's a good thing STDs and unwanted pregnancies don't happen in this game. LOL

Haha. Just as a joke my rough draft for EP 18 included a line about the MC stocking up condoms at the beach house, even though he never uses em. Cheeky figured we shouldn't even joke about it though so it didn't make the final cut lol.

 

[MrFriendly]

You have a point about the beach house.

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I getchu, as I said, but at this point the MC needs to stop living off of Monica and become independent. He's not a kid and it would be nice to see that dose of realism win over the convenience factor. After all he's been sexual with 3 people (at least) in his bedroom in Monica's house. Not like that isn't getting stale either.

 

[Maviarab]

Haha. Just as a joke my rough draft for EP 18 included a line about the MC stocking up condoms at the beach house, even though he never uses em. Cheeky figured we shouldn't even joke about it though so it didn't make the final cut lol.

Think me might need a full hazmat suit in the future if Mabel gets in touch with us ;P

 

[Qmil679]

I'm jesting even though I'm not a fan of hers, I'd never knock someone for liking a particular character though, should know my soh by now.

Only time I've done a Mon/Zarah run is on my man whore run..just so i can see what shit-storm Cheeky has planned for us when they all find out about each other hehe.

I love Monica, but not too much Zarah.

For now, I'm playing as a man-whore anyway. But when I only play for my favorite woman, Monica and Katie are the best. Then I will have to playwith two saves.

 

[acewinz]

I getchu, as I said, but at this point the MC needs to stop living off of Monica and become independent. He's not a kid and it would be nice to see that dose of realism win over the convenience factor. After all he's been sexual with 3 people (at least) in his bedroom in Monica's house. Not like that isn't getting stale either.

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[Qmil679]

It's a good thing STDs and unwanted pregnancies don't happen in this game. LOL

Drama would begin that the MC brought the STD to home.

 

[acewinz]

Drama would begin that the MC brought the STD to home.

While it would be incredibly funny to have all the girls suspicion values peak if they all happened to catch the same VD at the same time. I don't think we will go that route...

Especially when having them all get knocked up at the same time would be sooo much more entertaining. LOL Don't take that last bit as a spoiler Especially given Monica would likely require some fertility treatments first.

 

[Maviarab]

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The way I see this...is that Katie is the best placed to take advantage of the MC running with the money.

Katie can wear a wig cap..diff wig style..wear a suit etc...even a trilby etc....meet the MC at the beach house...shake hands...she just couldn't stay there longer than say a 'normal business meeeting' would take.

The MC could go to any random hotel...park car up...leave his phone in the room..exit on foot to a diff hotel..spend the night with one of the girls....nothing stopping the MC buying a few burn phones that the 'detective agency' have to know about. if they trace his phone...it's in a hotel room for the night. He is only legally allowing them to put surveilance on him. They try to spy on any of the girls...there would be so much shit when it came out.

So even running with the money...with some careful forethought...the MC could make it work with one of the girls. Orrr...I'm just putting waaaayyy too much thought into how to get around the conditions rofl....

 

[MrFriendly]

Think me might need a full hazmat suit in the future if Mabel gets in touch with us ;P

The full body condoms from Naked Gun would work... LOL

I mean I am impressed that Katie wanted to fuck the MC after he had his dick in Natasha. She didn't even tell him to take a shower. LOL

I wonder how repulsed all of the women will be when they find out how many people he's been screwing... A part of me wonders if there isn't already a detective following the MC around.

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True, on the technical difficulties, I fully accept that as a valid reason. From a story perspective if the MC isn't with Monica or one of her girls (for some insane reason) then it would make sense for him to start distancing himself already. Especially if he is fucking other people who are the jealous type (Elaine wouldn't be cool with him screwing Bella for example). Obviously not my story but I just found the fact he isn't moving into the beach house/love shack a bit puzzling. Especially when you do have it that he can say in conversation with Elaine that he sees himself living there. Of course, I am not going to argue about it with you. I know you will convince of my wrongness eventually anyway

Drama would begin that the MC brought the STD to home.

That would be an interesting way for them to find out he's been fucking them all. Imagination that awkward dinner conversation...

 

[freedom.call]

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My personal pref would be him moving out before the reading but I see your point. Not sure which would be worse though.

 

[freedom.call]

The way I see this...is that Katie is the best placed to take advantage of the MC running with the money.

Katie can wear a wig cap..diff wig style..wear a suit etc...even a trilby etc....meet the MC at the beach house...shake hands...she just couldn;t stay there longer than say a 'business meeeting' would take.

The MC could go to any random hotel...park car up...leave his phone in the room..exit on foot to a diff hotel..spend the night with one of the girls....nothing stopping the MC buying a few burn phones that the 'detective agency' have to know about. if they trace his phone...it's in a hotel room for the night. He is only legalaly allowing them to put survelance on him. They try to spy on any of the girls...there would be so much shit when it came out.

So even running with the money...with some careful forethought...the MC could make it work with one of the girls. Orrr...I'm just putting waaaayyy too much thought into how to get around the conditions rofl....

Hmm, someone's done this before.

 

[MrFriendly]

My personal pref would be him moving out before the reading but I see your point. Not sure which would be worse though.

Same or right after as a way to try to escape the fallout.