- Mar 16, 2018
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Hi Ceesko,I really don;t understand the people whom want fewer choices and more grind.... I really don't
Very good. It does look more natural.Based on the inputs about the fit of Monica's dress, I've made an alternate look (less "figure-hugging" / more realistic). What are peoples thoughts ??
Thanks for the feedback. I think the third leg is almost inevitable. These are fantasy games (Fantasy as in never likely to happen, not fantasy as in you're going to f*ck an ORC in episode 6 ), so most people (well I would) prefer a fantasy where the MC is desirable and doesn't have a "prawn in a birds nest" behind his jeans. Shagging lots of hot women in a relatively short space is already a stretch, so having the desirable MC (with at least 2.5 legs) helps alleviate the stretch.Really good I must say. I didn't think it was too wordy like some said, I thought the pace was just perfect with the amount of text/renders.
Shame about the lack of incest though, but is understandable because of patreon.
Jenna is really cute, ridiculous big breasts but cute nonetheless. Also, Monica is hot as fuck, I love milfs and she's just perfect:heartcoveredeyes:. Here's hoping the MC won't have a third leg as a dick, but who Am I kidding since there's seems to be a rule when they(devs) make these games.
After checking the images I noticed that the MC put his hand at Monica's leg, I guess I chose something wrong at some point or maybe if I didn't kiss that would happen(?), but like I said before, I really liked what I've seen so far.
For example. In that scene, MC can choose to put his hand on her knee instead of breast? Or something like that.I like the render, so looking at options to get it in somehow. But will only use it if it makes sense, not just for the sake of it to avoid wasting a render (already have a virtual thrash heap full of cutting-room-floor renders, so one more won't bother me).
Yea, choice was going to be knee or boob. And if knee, there was a choice to move further up (not agreeable to Monica), but thought it was one choice too many and too forward. I'm actually considering breaking the bedroom scene into two. One that afternoon that stops just before the hand on boob and a second one later that evening after another couple of drinks..... I won't drag it out (won't be extra game time), but might put one or two scenes between to account for the extra "forward" behaviour. Just a though. Need to consider how it all flows into episode 2.....Dick is sorta your "ego" in these games. The bigger it is, the more "powerful" your MC seems. The more ladies love him, it can even hypnotize and dominate. At least that's what some people think. Though it is pretty understandable concept, it can be really funny. I do agree that MC needs to be desirable in that sense. But it's not the only quality i like to see in protag. I just like him to be attractive overall.
For example. In that scene, MC can choose to put his hand on her knee instead of breast? Or something like that.
Is it her smile with teeth? I don't know, it looked just a little bit strange (or not natural), but that might be just because of her face type.I think I seen a comment somewhere but cannot find it about Monica's smile not being natural.
Good to know that i guessed that one) Though i do agree that it might be a bit too forward, and your second idea sound more appealing.Yea, choice was going to be knee or boob. And if knee, there was a choice to move further up (not agreeable to Monica), but thought it was one choice too many and too forward. I'm actually considering breaking the bedroom scene into two. One that afternoon that stops just before the hand on boob and a second one later that evening after another couple of drinks..... I won't drag it out (won't be extra game time), but might put one or two scenes between to account for the extra "forward" behaviour. Just a though. Need to consider how it all flows into episode 2.....
Thanks for the pledge. I definitely plan on having an alternate version / patch at some stage. The current version is patreon friendly, but as you've probably noticed, it wouldn't take a lot of changes to switch over to the storyline to a more "family" version. And for the storyline I have planned, it would still fit. So watch this space!I liked that game so far. Great start.
I guess the not-really-but-close-to-incest-theme is a deliberate choice, but you know you would recieve more money AND made more people happy (including myself of couse), well, if SOMEONE made a nasty little patch ...
Anyway: You just got yourself a pledger.
This guy is right!I liked that game so far. Great start.
I guess the not-really-but-close-to-incest-theme is a deliberate choice, but you know you would recieve more money AND made more people happy (including myself of couse), well, if SOMEONE made a nasty little patch ...
Anyway: You just got yourself a pledger.