Ren'Py Whispers of Desire [v0.30] [Mr_Fable]

[Mr Fable]

Well, it's simple Mr Fable
If Neil = cheating, then no Neil. (For Route 1 & 2 anyway)

However, if Neil comes up with some redeeming qualities (as in not being such a slime-ball), and can "get with the friends-only thing", not actually manipulating his way.....then maybe. BIG, really iffy, maybe....

But, currently Neil is just a jerk. Are you planning on "re-making" Neil somehow along the way?
Why would anyone that loves Sarah, or even a loyal Sarah, subject herself to that? Makes no sense.

And on Route 3 & 4, you will still have your "hero", so all good, what's your worry?

It's our choice and we are glad we have it. Thanks for that at least.

Are you really just saying we are going to suffer less content because of that, and that there won't be a proper balance between routes? And it is mostly just "The Neil Show"?

I was just joking . that's why i put an emoji. The game will be pretty balanced on all routes. But of course the more characters you avoid less content you will have. But that's true for any character.

 

[TonyMurray]

Great Tony. I know you are "closer" to the game than I am, but as you said, we ALL have preferences. Something everyone here is actually aware of, as the mostly positive comments show.
Glad you're happy mate, but being "able to play the gallery" is not the question here. I wasn't the one who raised the subject of missing content, Fable was.
Can you let the actual dev answer too? He was the one I tagged, thanks anyway for your statement of reassurance. Coming from someone "inside" it has some weight, I give you that, but there was a reason I tagged Fable. And I would like him to answer it here, for others to read too, otherwise I would have DM'ed him or got on discord. Must I really explain that? If he chooses to answer.
No offense meant, don't take it that way, please. Your comments are welcome, as are your "teaser" jokes. Keep it up.

Dude, I'm not "inside", I just do proofreading - I have no input on the game, or more knowledge than anyone else except for what I see early as part of my volunteer work. I'm just posting my own opinions, the same as anyone else. I'm not answering on behalf of the dev, or preventing the dev from answering himself. Anyone is free to comment on your post, regardless of who you tag in it.

 

[Joshy92]

So what you guys are saying is that right now Erik is at home building up his reserve of semen so that when he comes in Sarah it's the size of a tsunami?

Good, I want it to be memorable for my sweetheart.

 

[CursedByAll]

So what you guys are saying is that right now Erik is at home building up his reserve of semen so that when he comes in Sarah it's the size of a tsunami?

Good, I want it to be memorable for my sweetheart.

Dunno how you got that out of this, but if that's what gets you up.....

 

[xert13]

That's why I made my wording "the vast majority of comments I've read". I've got nothing against the people who like Neil lmao. I just find it neat that quite a few other people dislike him. It's purely personal preference on my part. Hell, I also fully intend to play the game where Sarah just cheats on Alex with the whole city... except without Neil. The dude is just insufferable in my book and that's a huge turn-off. You do you tho. In the end we all like the game.

Fair enough. Agreed, he is insufferable.

 

[blkcrow20]

Avoiding Neil is possible how ever it saddens me on the thought that you all are going to miss the hot scenes I am planning between him and Sarah .

Sorry.......not sorry. He's a piece of shit and an asshole. He deserves nothing and is not worthy enough to be with Sarah. shrugs

 

[nintendo9899]

Avoiding Neil is possible how ever it saddens me on the thought that you all are going to miss the hot scenes I am planning between him and Sarah .

I like every route.

 

[Innocent->Devil]

Avoiding Neil is possible how ever it saddens me on the thought that you all are going to miss the hot scenes I am planning between him and Sarah .

Mr Fable, listen to your heart and continue your quest. I am enjoying the content you have in this VN.

 

[Gicoo]

Avoiding Neil is possible how ever it saddens me on the thought that you all are going to miss the hot scenes I am planning between him and Sarah .

Neil isn't charismatic and affable. He behaves like a total douche. He isn't powerful on his own efforts, he just blackmails and acts cowardly rather then winning through his own efforts. Not someone that people want to see succeed.

There are roughly two sorts of corrupters (way more, but we restrict it on the office boss). Ugly bastards or casanovas. Neil ain't either of them.

My worry is how Eva and Abigail can continue to corrupt the husband, when they are part of Neils scheme. It makes sense if the wife falls for him, but if she refuses Neil, the two girls have no purpose messing with her husband. Ideally the two get agency on their own and can disregard Neil...

 

[PaxHadrian17]

Well, it's simple Mr Fable
If Neil = cheating, then no Neil. (For Route 1 & 2 anyway)

However, if Neil comes up with some redeeming qualities (as in not being such a slime-ball), and can "get with the friends-only thing", not actually manipulating his way.....then maybe. BIG, really iffy, maybe....

But, currently Neil is just a jerk. Are you planning on "re-making" Neil somehow along the way?
Why would anyone that loves Sarah, or even a loyal Sarah, subject herself to that? Makes no sense.

And on Route 3 & 4, you will still have your "hero", so all good, what's your worry?

It's our choice and we are glad we have it. Thanks for that at least.

Are you really just saying we are going to suffer less content because of that, and that there won't be a proper balance between routes? And it is mostly just "The Neil Show"?

Neil is not my first pick for Sarah But he is a legitimate pick for Sarah.

Neil - as Sarah's new employer - has every reason to have more time/impact on Sarah right now as she is in/near his shadow a minimum of 5 days a week.

Mr Fable is creating a story for all of us and the more constraints any one of us puts on a particular playthrough, the more limited that playthrough will be regarding hot scenes and even character development.

If, for example, someone said that Sarah will only do BBC in their playthrough, then they are - by definition - leaving a huge amount of content on the table... unseen.

That is not the dev's 'fault' - that is player choice.

We each get to choose our paths and who we will/will not spend time with but I would never blame a dev for providing content to all of us the way he said he would.

I like the way this AVN is set up and think it has great potential for all four paths with a variety of people.

I'm looking forward to seeing how, for example, path 4 shapes up if I want Sarah to be a cuckqueen, encouraging Alex with Emma and Rachel and eventually joining in.

For now, though, my primary playthrough is a jealous Sarah who is blind to the double standard she is setting with Alex - no other woman gets her approval - all while she is flirting and perhaps building a relationship with Neil, James and Louis.

Future playthroughs will include other paths and different/more people and choices for she and Alex.

Replayability of other viable paths is a great feature of this AVN and I am looking forward to seeing how these paths grow through time.

Cheers!!

 

[Mwaysinful]

Sorry.......not sorry. He's a piece of shit and an asshole. He deserves nothing and is not worthy enough to be with Sarah. shrugs

He is not worthy, but you must be aware that for the cucks on this forum that is precisely the appeal. The girl falls for the douchebag bad boy, he uses her for sex, and losers jerk off to it.

There is a more disgusting variant in NTR or NTS, and consists that the girl has to be blackmailed, raped or corrupted by the most disgusting fat old homeless toothless bastard. I do not like this last one.

No kinkshaming though. It excites me (in fiction) that the girl falls to the bad guy and the loser MC jerks off to it, so I am expecting hot sex scenes with Neil although I find him despicable.

Just a rambling to explain why a lot of us would expect hot scenes between Sarah and neil.

So do your thing and fulfill your vision, mr. Fable!!

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Neil isn't charismatic and affable. He behaves like a total douche. He isn't powerful on his own efforts, he just blackmails and acts cowardly rather then winning through his own efforts. Not someone that people want to see succeed.

There are roughly two sorts of corrupters (way more, but we restrict it on the office boss). Ugly bastards or casanovas. Neil ain't either of them.

My worry is how Eva and Abigail can continue to corrupt the husband, when they are part of Neils scheme. It makes sense if the wife falls for him, but if she refuses Neil, the two girls have no purpose messing with her husband. Ideally the two get agency on their own and can disregard Neil...

Agreed on both takes - I think Neil could be more charming, would make the antagonist role more believable. That and he needs a new haircut to look like a ladykiller and not an 80s music video stand-in


On Eva, I think it would make sense in future if there's some fork where their allegiances are laid bare. Where if not on a 'steal his wife under his nose' style ntr path, perhaps they confide in MC and they both team up to try and do something about Neil. Those kinds of story beats could still involve sexual hijinx without cutting him out completely - perhaps they try and seduce him or coerce him to get something Alex wants, etc.

 

["WindDX "]

Agreed on both takes - I think Neil could be more charming, would make the antagonist role more believable. That and he needs a new haircut to look like a ladykiller and not an 80s music video stand-in


On Eva, I think it would make sense in future if there's some fork where their allegiances are laid bare. Where if not on a 'steal his wife under his nose' style ntr path, perhaps they confide in MC and they both team up to try and do something about Neil. Those kinds of story beats could still involve sexual hijinx without cutting him out completely - perhaps they try and seduce him or coerce him to get something Alex wants, etc.

Flip it around and turn Neil into the cuck lmao.

 

[xert13]

He is not worthy, but you must be aware that for the cucks on this forum that is precisely the appeal. The girl falls for the douchebag bad boy, he uses her for sexy, and losers jerk off to It.

There is a more disgusting variant in NTR or NTS, and consists that the girl has to be blackmailed, raped or corrupted by the most disgusting fat old homeless toothless bastard. I do not like this last one.

No kinkshaming though. It excites me (in fiction) that the girl falls to the bad guy and the loser MC jerks off to it, so I am expecting hot sex scenes with Neil although I find him despicable.

Just a rambling to explain why a lot of us would expect hot scenes between Sarah and neil.

So do your thing and fulfill your vision, me. Fable!!

You must be talking about path 3 the sharing/cuck path. I thought path 4 was Netorare where the husband does not know and is not present when she gets nailed. I, personally, am not a fan of cuck, and prefer Netorare, but you do seem to kinkshame those who like the cuck niche by calling them "losers." Stating you're not kinkshaming doesn't erase the original comment. I suspect you probably didn't mean it to come out that way.

 

[Mwaysinful]

And It

You must be talking about path 3 the sharing/cuck path. I thought path 4 was Netorare where the husband does not know and is not present when she gets nailed. I, personally, am not a fan of cuck, and prefer Netorare, but you do seem to kinkshame those who like the cuck niche by calling them "losers." Stating you're not kinkshaming doesn't erase the original comment. I suspect you probably didn't mean it to come out that way.

No, I did not mean it, let's move on.

 

[Eleanorduval]

Neil isn't charismatic and affable. He behaves like a total douche. He isn't powerful on his own efforts, he just blackmails and acts cowardly rather then winning through his own efforts. Not someone that people want to see succeed.

There are roughly two sorts of corrupters (way more, but we restrict it on the office boss). Ugly bastards or casanovas. Neil ain't either of them.

My worry is how Eva and Abigail can continue to corrupt the husband, when they are part of Neils scheme. It makes sense if the wife falls for him, but if she refuses Neil, the two girls have no purpose messing with her husband. Ideally the two get agency on their own and can disregard Neil...

Until the proof the contrary,the only one teaming with Neil is Dr Eva.Having sex with someone doesn’t necessarily mean they are accomplice. Not everyone in Mr Fable game are conspiring.There for example Louise.Some characters are just normal and Abigail was interested in Alex,even before Neil start scheming it have nothing to do with Neil.

 

[Pdr602]

Maybe Neil can make me a daddy

Erik is still first in that race, though.

Yes! Gotta be Erik!!

 

[CursedByAll]

There's a lot of tags in this game, that makes me happy, it means choices...yay
But...pregnancy ain't one of'em...not even in "planned" section, sorry fellas....'spose it's a nice dream for some...fantasies...that's what games are for, right?

 

[Joshy92]

There's a lot of tags in this game, that makes me happy, it means choices...yay
But...pregnancy ain't one of'em...not even in "planned" section, sorry fellas....'spose it's a nice dream for some...fantasies...that's what games are for, right?

You believe what tags say in an OP? I don't because I've been lied to hundreds of times.

And Fable has asked in Discord if people would like pregnancy. Now obviously that doesn't mean it will happen but don't just trust tags because plans can change.

 

[Eleanorduval]

You believe what tags say in an OP? I don't because I've been lied to hundreds of times.

And Fable has asked in Discord if people would like pregnancy. Now obviously that doesn't mean it will happen but don't just trust tags because plans can change.

men he asked for curiosity,don’t get your hopes too up.I doesn’t fit the game at,it is not a breeding game