Ren'Py Whispers of Desire [v0.30] [Mr_Fable]

[Enlight432]

looks promising but not much content for now

Yes
However, that's because the game is only two months old
In fact, if you consider its content-to-time ratio, it's remarkably high

 

[Enlight432]

As with any game that has both NTR & NTS as long as NTR doesn't bleed into the sharing stuff I'll be happy.

Agreed
And don't worry:

 

[Filipis]

I think Neil is for the NTR route, I cannot see him becoming a 'love interest'. He has no interest in anything other than sex and manipulation. We need a better character for the NTS/sharing route.

My main concern was that Neil was going to be dropped at some point for another character. The boss fetish should be kept alive through to the end.

 

[Mr Fable]

My main concern was that Neil was going to be dropped at some point for another character. The boss fetish should be kept alive through to the end.

He is not going anywhere. I think "most of the main love interests " would have fit better.

 

[MeltingTeapot]

I have some ideas to make it all work, but let's see how it goes.

As an FFM fan, I'm totally rooting for Alex to be Jessica's top guy and her husband to play second fiddle to him. But I totally get that's not gonna fly in the early game. For the second half, though, Totally possible

 

[blkcrow20]

My main concern was that Neil was going to be dropped at some point for another character. The boss fetish should be kept alive through to the end.

I agree he needs to stay for the NTR route, he's perfect for that. A route I won't play.

 

[Eleanorduval]

I agree to needs to stay for the NTR route, he's perfect for that. A route I won't play.

I wouldn't play Neil path,but if we can bang dr Eva i will do it lol there is group sex a tag,i wounder if mc+fmc+ men/girl will happen (sharing/love path too)

 

[Enlight432]

I wouldn't play Neil path,but if we can bang dr Eva i will do it lol there is group sex a tag,i wounder if mc+fmc+ men/girl will happen (sharing/love path too)

The doc, with that look, her expression, and those glasses of her, has got a ton of people totally hooked

 

[Monty10]

He is not going anywhere. I think "most of the main love interests " would have fit better.

This game is something else.
This game has the potential to be the best NTR game in history.
Just a small note — there's no need to describe the wife and husband's daily routine in such detail, like 'she made breakfast, then went to take a shower, then used a towel to dry her wet body.' Man, you're wasting your time and making us wait longer for updates by doing this.
Speaking of updates, when will the next one be?

 

[Mr Fable]

This game is something else.
This game has the potential to be the best NTR game in history.
Just a small note — there's no need to describe the wife and husband's daily routine in such detail, like 'she made breakfast, then went to take a shower, then used a towel to dry her wet body.' Man, you're wasting your time and making us wait longer for updates by doing this.
Speaking of updates, when will the next one be?

Glad you enjoyed it. That narration is only for the intro. I thought going through the morning routine would make people more connected ( I might have been wrong). The next updates will have less of such narration.
And speaking about updates I am planning one every 1.5 months. So we have about a month left.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

I got the therapist idea after reading this. But I dunno if it is a true story.

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Maybe they can work as a team and bang the therapist together either with a strap on or just fingers, would love to see them in a 69 while the hubby is pounding both of them until he explodes all over thedrs face and then his wife licks it clean

 

[Enlight432]

Glad you enjoyed it. That narration is only for the intro. I thought going through the morning routine would make people more connected ( I might have been wrong). The next updates will have less of such narration.

You've expressed interest in critical feedback
My personal take on in-game narration is that it presents a dichotomy:
it either significantly enhances player connection to characters, atmosphere, and the scene, or it actively disengages and exhausts the player

Too often, games include narration filled with unnecessary, uninteresting, or unemotional content that completely misses the mark of its intended purpose

You didn't use a lot of narration, and in my personal opinion, that was a good decision. However, if I were to ever make a game, I'd use narration only for conveying engaging emotions and to highlight significant internal struggles, but I'd keep it minimal. This approach would allow players to breathe

 

[Mr Fable]

You've expressed interest in critical feedback
My personal take on in-game narration is that it presents a dichotomy:
it either significantly enhances player connection to characters, atmosphere, and the scene, or it actively disengages and exhausts the player

Too often, games include narration filled with unnecessary, uninteresting, or unemotional content that completely misses the mark of its intended purpose

You didn't use a lot of narration, and in my personal opinion, that was a good decision. However, if I were to ever make a game, I'd use narration only for conveying engaging emotions and to highlight significant internal struggles, but I'd keep it minimal. This approach would allow players to breathe

Yes, in the future updates most of the narration would capture internal struggles.

 

[Monty10]

Glad you enjoyed it. That narration is only for the intro. I thought going through the morning routine would make people more connected ( I might have been wrong). The next updates will have less of such narration.
And speaking about updates I am planning one every 1.5 months. So we have about a month left.

I don’t mind describing the routine in detail, but only once and not repeatedly.
I can’t wait to see Sarah with that Black man, Eric, in front of her husband.

 

[Enlight432]

Sarah with a BBC, right in front of her husband

That's far too soon for Sarah

 

[blkcrow20]

I'll pass on the BBC. Too arrogant.

 

[Mr Fable]

I don’t mind describing the routine in detail, but only once and not repeatedly.
I can’t wait to see Sarah with that Black man, Eric, in front of her husband.

All in due time.

 

[Filipis]

All in due time.

I want to say this as nicely as possible, but Eric looks too plastic. He’s not appealing to look at, at all.

 

[Enlight432]

I'll pass on the BBC. Too arrogant.

I doubt you dislike arrogant people more than I do
But what if he actually holds Sarah in high regard and doesn't show any arrogant behavior towards her? If that's the case, then my concern would be completely resolved

 

[Enlight432]

And something just occurred to me: Neil, for instance, can also be somewhat arrogant, but when it comes to Sarah, he'd do anything to win her over, and he certainly doesn't look down on her

So, I guess we'll just have to wait and see how BBC behaves with Sarah