Ren'Py Whispers of Desire [v0.35] [Mr_Fable]

[Eleanorduval]

Wow, there are some "anxious" people here, letting their impatience show.

Let the guy develop the story his way. Stop trying to apply pressure to have re-writes (action you like, happening way too soon) and your preferred kinks rushed to the front.

Its HIS story, not yours.
Its HIS work, not yours.

Can I come to your place of work and tell you how to do your job, especially as a non-customer? If you want any input, become a top-tier sub first.
I know, I know "it's just a suggestion, an opinion". Well I got "opinions" too. Maybe I can give mine.....

If you don't like the update cycle, go play something else for a while, it's not like you don't have alternate choices ffs (there are literally thousands of games here to choose from). Or, you know, read a book, write a book, make your own game, whatever....

Patience, it's a skill so many never develop....

Personally, I am happy to wait six months to get any action. And yes, its not unusual when compared to other games. I see this same shit in games with 3-6 MONTH update cycles, with people there complaining about how their path didn't get preference and two hours of gameplay per update. Calm your expectations, sheesh....

This dev has a good update cycle that far exceeds most others here.
No wonder so many give up, with all the harrassment....

R/O

bro u asking him too much,he can’t be at his best behavior like me and Tony.I dunno about Tony but a least me

 

[CursedByAll]

bro u asking him too much,he can’t be at his best behavior like me and Tony.I dunno about Tony but a least me

You? Well behaved? Joke of the day
Tony is a good boy... Hard working even....

 

[CursedByAll]

I agree 100% but be careful bro, my comments yesterday were reported as off topic and got removed.

It would seem the site are happy for peeps to harass the devs with bullshit but dislike other members pointing it out.

Yeah, it happens.
I don't mind when they do it, as long as they also remove every comment that started the bullshit too. Makes for a lot less pages of haranging to read through, and my time here gets better without all the BS.

 

[Eleanorduval]

You? Well behaved? Joke of the day
Tony is a good boy... Hard working even....

I dunno how to take it or feel about other than transforming u into sushi it scandalous and outrageous

 

[Eleanorduval]

I agree 100% but be careful bro, my comments yesterday were reported as off topic and got removed.

It would seem the site are happy for peeps to harass the devs with bullshit but dislike other members pointing it out.

Bro don’t put your self in trouble,sometimes it’s the wrong guy who get sanctioned

 

[Deleted member 4087206]

This game could have been really good -it has the graphics, the setup, even the elements of sandbox which I usually hate have been well done- but the whole AI writing feels off. Lately 9 out of 10 new games are been written with AI, it sucks. I guess I will have to be content to skipping the text and only watching the scenes unfold.

 

[Eleanorduval]

This game could have been really good -it has the graphics, the setup, even the elements of sandbox which I usually hate have been well done- but the whole AI writing feels off. Lately 9 out of 10 new games are been written with AI, it sucks. I guess I will have to be content to skipping the text and only watching the scenes unfold.

I didn’t play last update but I didn’t find nothing wrong about text in the 2 previous update.As long u understand the story shouldn’t be a problem

 

[CursedByAll]

This game could have been really good -it has the graphics, the setup, even the elements of sandbox which I usually hate have been well done- but the whole AI writing feels off. Lately 9 out of 10 new games are been written with AI, it sucks. I guess I will have to be content to skipping the text and only watching the scenes unfold.

If you had read previous comments here, you would realise that the game has an english-native proof-reader assisting.
"feels off"? How?

 

[Jungles70]

Italian translation Click Here

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[Deleted member 4087206]

I didn’t play last update but I didn’t find nothing wrong about text in the 2 previous update.As long u understand the story shouldn’t be a problem

If you had read previous comments here, you would realise that the game has an english-native proof-reader assisting.
"feels off"? How?

Feels off in the sense it feels like every game has been written by the same author. It is easy to identify texts written by AI and I can say for certain that this one has more than just proof-reading assistance. I would rather read something made by an untalented author than the generic AI writing style. It is a plague not only in games here, literotica has also been affected. It is not that is something wrong, to each their own, it is just my opinion, it is ok if you disagree, I won't go off topic with it. I just thought expressing my discontent about a game that could have could become a 5 stars game, but for me this detracts a whole star alone, again, in my opinion.

Edit: about proof reading assistant, I misunderstood what you said, Eleanor, I thought it was the ai tool used to proof read, I missed the native word when I read. Proof reading doesn't actually change anything about the writing style of AI though, grammatically is ok, so the proof reading would not find many issues.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

I liked the photo shoot, and in context, it makes perfect sense.
Sometimes you gotta let things simmer a bit first so it doesn't burn when you turn up the heat...

Absolutely true, though it's also true our back storeroom is full of many stoves with broken pilot lights, not just those with burnt pots

 

[CursedByAll]

Feels off in the sense it feels like every game has been written by the same author. It is easy to identify texts written by AI and I can say for certain that this one has more than just proof-reading assistance. I would rather read something made by an untalented author than the generic AI writing style. It is a plague not only in games here, literotica has also been affected. It is not that is something wrong, to each their own, it is just my opinion, it is ok if you disagree, I won't go off topic with it. I just thought expressing my discontent about a game that could have could become a 5 stars game, but for me this detracts a whole star alone, again, in my opinion.

Edit: about proof reading assistant, I misunderstood what you said, Eleanor, I thought it was the ai tool used to proof read, I missed the native word when I read. Proof reading doesn't actually change anything about the writing style of AI though, grammatically is ok, so the proof reading would not find many issues.

Sure, I get it, we all have preferences/tastes, but it's not like anything is wrong here, unlike so many non_AI-assist, or non-native written games which have such obvious grammatical issues as to make them unplayable. Certainly not something I would remove a star for, in fact something I would applaud because it shows the dev cares enough to realise his own short-comings, and wants the player to still be able to have good comprehension of the material, not be left wondering what he meant in the first place.
Anyway, all is cool bro. Enjoy what you can....

 

[Madara33]

Is there a translation into Portuguese?

 

[Rake Tyler]

After that brief tutorial in this game explaining how the game's routes will work, I now have a greater desire to do them all, and it's something I'm definitely going to do.

 

[Eleanorduval]

After that brief tutorial in this game explaining how the game's routes will work, I now have a greater desire to do them all, and it's something I'm definitely going to do.

if u have enough free time why not.

 

[Dealbreaker]

Is it confirmed that it is AI writing?

 

[Joshy92]

I don't care about AI stuff I just want to interlock my fingers with Sarah as some well-endowed hunk stretches her open

Then I'll kiss and cuddle her all night like any good husband would.

 

[JEGEK]

idk if I manage to stray my way into the sharing route or something, but this last update felt like it really tried to pull me in that direction

 

[CursedByAll]

You know, I take it as a great compliment to the dev that somehow of all things, semantics/linguistics is an issue....
Not graphic quality, story direction, spelling, model suitability, route choices, lack of promise....or a million other whinges usually happening in other threads.....
Good work Mr Fable (and Tony too)

 

[Mr Fable]

Sorry I was busy occupied with some family stuff over the weekend, and will be busy for the next couple of days and my activity here will be limited. For those who are wondering which parts of the game are AI, the songs are. The lyrics and the vocals for the theme songs was generated by AI. Unfortunately I did not have the capital to invest in that but if we get big enough i would probably hire someone for that too. Also I am planning to add some AI generated animations later on top of our regular animations. Our regular DAZ animations would still be a part of the game. But some complex movements are quite close to impossible to create through Daz. However, if I do include (I have not 100% decided yet) AI generated animations I will provide an option in the menu to completely turn off AI generated animations for those who hate that.
And regarding my writing, I am in discussion with a professional writer to take over most of the writing, so I can concentrate more on Daz animations and coding, and to make sure I don't burnout. Right now the bottleneck is the writing (not the artist). I am getting a bit behind as the number of paths and options are increasing, coding is also taking more of my time. However, the writer will still follow my storyline I have planned for the game, so it will still stay true to my vision.