RPGM Whispers of the Dark Elf [Ch.1 v1.5 Preview] [Darthz]

[saitamaTM]

the new drawings look good, and the bunny scenes look interesting. they are not playable yet right? the demo ended before I saw them.

as a critique i think the scenes could use a better setup.

after the undead town nothing happened on the night trip even though there was a shack in the middle of the road where something could have happened.

same in the piramids, it would have been a bit better to lock the hero character in the coffin room and have him clear the enemies (since they were being killed without combat) as the coffin shaked or something there is potential in the scenes, but right now they just seem to be checkbox instead of properly implementing them within context.
like the hero saving a fox in the middle of the forest just so the bad guy could slap his wife's ass. it feels a bit contrived. despite the fact that the scene in a vacuum is pretty good.

not a lot rpgmaker have this good animation

 

[KingsRaiden]

That's complicated to say because I like to show the perspectives of all three characters—Aldos, Glavius, and Feanor.

That's a great draw to the game, you get multiple perspectives of the NTR going on, unlike many other games where you only catch parts of it, or the actual cheating is a black box that people then want to see. Great way to do this, and it's what makes this game unique other than the art. Looking forward to more.

 

[anonsuit]

not a lot rpgmaker have this good animation

yeah that is true, but serving the animations in a better context would improve the scenes a lot.
the one behind the bushes is great
the one with the blackman under the counter is great. but compared to the similar one in the castle is not that great. maybe i missed the hints on the second one but I only realized almost at the end when the guy groaned. same with the coffin one. the scene looked like a normal battle and the coffin was just a coffin. if it was hinted before it would have added more tension.

 

[DarthzUnderground]

yeah that is true, but serving the animations in a better context would improve the scenes a lot.
the one behind the bushes is great
the one with the blackman under the counter is great. but compared to the similar one in the castle is not that great. maybe i missed the hints on the second one but I only realized almost at the end when the guy groaned. same with the coffin one. the scene looked like a normal battle and the coffin was just a coffin. if it was hinted before it would have added more tension.

Thanks for your feedback buddy, I agree with you. In my next update, I'll adjust the tension in those scenes. I admit that Tanya's scene under the table blowjob in the castle was a bit rushed,i will add more hints for the spectator guess what is happen there , but rest assured, I will be checking it out later.

 

[Komdot]

lmao, my sub end just one day before Kora art , she gonna have to wait for me until next week

 

[Movikx]

got this error, i checked thread and saw the same thing but in other places, but also no reply with fix for it, so just waiting




EDIT- tried again but passing slowing instead of skiping things fast and worked

 

[Paarl]

Hey buddy,

I'm not sure if you've played my game yet, but you actually play Glavius some times . Although he's not the sole main character, he is definitely a key protagonist in the story. I've made a post on my Patreon explaining more about the main characters of my game. Check it out here!


''Who is the Protagonist? is that Aldos, Glavius or Feanor?

That's complicated to say because I like to show the perspectives of all three characters—Aldos, Glavius, and Feanor. They will all have some development in the game. Sometimes I like to show the perspectives of Aldos and Feanor in NTR situations, but other times I focus on Glavius, .I would say that my game offers some unique experience, providing a variety of perspectives, including those of the female characters at times. So, if we have I need to choose the protagonist, I would say Aldos and Glavius both share the same importance and screen time.''

If you're interested in my game, follow me on my Patreon page! I regularly post patch notes there to explain future updates and answer questions. You'll also find exclusive content all for free.

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i was playing only 30 minutes, more or less, when Glavius came to the village and he touches the Elf's wife in her house, so i though the game was only seeing Glavius and "our" wife cuck us

 

[anonsuit]

Thanks for your feedback buddy, I agree with you. In my next update, I'll adjust the tension in those scenes. I admit that Tanya's scene under the table blowjob in the castle was a bit rushed,i will add more hints for the spectator guess what is happen there , but rest assured, I will be checking it out later.

i think some of the fun on the RPGmaker NTR games is to play some sort of detective even if the clues are plain obvious to the player but not the character. is like when you stumble on those rooms filled with stains and condoms, or you walk past a room with noises.

even though this game is going for the omniscient POV you still get the character POV and in order to make that POV interesting dropping clues for him to witness would do great towards making his play more interesting.

also since we have the other character as the bad guy it would be great to do the opposite, and have him setup scenarios before they happen. as a player when you are playing the bad guy your job is to break locks, plant traps or create the circumstance that will unlock the next scene. contrasting the good guy that simply picks up hints and pieces of what already happened.

either way the game is cool, same with the art. is it yours right? . try not to waste too much time fixing what has already been done, instead focus on improving what follows. you don't want to fall into a cycle of rewrites that would slowdown your progress.

 

[Phantom2316]

thank you for the update its my first time playing your game but i've played a bunch of ntr and rpg games.. looking forward for more future updates and thanks for your amazing work!~

 

[GAT103]

Full save ?

 

[Demonstorm]

not a lot rpgmaker have this good animation

I can think of a few but most of them are in japanese

 

[john6556]

new update preview

 

[Elweas]

I can think of a few but most of them are in japanese

can you say a few pls

 

[Migue23455wewwww]

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[Phantom2316]

is the noctas illusion part is from the final release of v1.3 update? just asking..

 

[saitamaTM]

can't wait for new update

 

[Jackie123]

Anyone got a save or is there an unlockable gallery?

 

[cLockWis3]

Version 1.3 is the preview version?

 

[saitamaTM]

Version 1.3 is the preview version?

version 1.3 still not out but in patreon he say the game will out in the first week of july, it will out in this week but not sure what date

 

[Jackie123]

Anyone got a save or is there an unlockable gallery?

Well thanks for nothing