VN Ren'Py Abandoned Wife at All Costs [v0.9] [Stef Story]

[ryukazu933]

look good!!

 

[vayneaurelius]

Abandoned? Aw man, I came back thinking the game was still being worked on

 

[FunBearDude]

oh abandoned? the wife looks hot tho too bad

 

[shan2312]

unfortunate cycle of game devs abandoning

 

[kunogrunil]

Beginning was nice but it went off the rails

 

[Popsaw]

Its Jay and Gloria from Modern Family.

The characters look similar and the guy is like 30 years older than the women

 

[yewfella]

The curse of the 0.9 version.

 

[Mastalgram]

woah, good job!

 

[boboqwe]

Good story!!!

 

[vermazusa]

unfortunate cycle of game devs abandoning

My advice to developers would be to keep the plot simple and minimize the number of characters in the story. In this story, there was little buildup to the emergence of the MMC's cuckold fetish and FMC exhibitionism; little buildup to the corruption of the FMC; the flashbacks were confusing, to say the least; the improbability of a supposedly happily married FMC allowing herself to be treated as a fuck-toy in her new company; and multiple characters introduced with a mafia-related subplot that detracted from the NTR theme and caused the VN to derail off the tracks. On the positive side, the women are absolutely gorgeous and sexy which made the marriage of a supermodel-type with a pudgy, bald, and weak MC appear ludicrous and comical.