VN Ren'Py Abandoned Wife at All Costs [v0.9] [Stef Story]

[stever]

Could someone tell me if there's anal in this?

I know there's no tag, but sometimes mods miss it (and there's usually anal in Italian porn).

 

[Lucrezia&Augusto]

Could someone tell me if there's anal in this?

I know there's no tag, but sometimes mods miss it (and there's usually anal in Italian porn).

Hi buddy not yet, but I've already thought about anal scenes for the future.

 

[Noppity13]

Version 0.4
Size 1.69GB
Is that a sign of plentiful content or poor compression?

 

[sisso69]

Version 0.4
Size 1.69GB
Is that a sign of plentiful content or poor compression?

as far as I'm concerned it has the right content it deserves for a 0.4 version
I just tell you that for each dialogue there is a different image you see.
And then if you like to get involved in the plots of the games then download it now.

 

[Lucrezia&Augusto]

Version 0.4
Size 1.69GB
Is that a sign of plentiful content or poor compression?

As DEV, I find it difficult to answer you exactly
It does not seem to me that there is little material in fact I may have exaggerated.
But this could tell you other players, what they think.
Let's see if someone answers.

 

[Lucrezia&Augusto]

Who knows what happened. We will find out in the fifth chapter.
Tutti i nodi arrivano al punto ...
The work of the 5th chapter has started ....

 

[ant007]

I rarely play both ways, but this time I had to ha ha ha.
- Mistress path:
thing i like:
- Huge potential for humiliating Augusto (and therefore huge potential for some foot fetish content he he)
things I didn't like so much:
- Lucrezia looks like a schizophrenic to me and I'm a little scared of her ha ha.
- The story that she was in prison seems a bit like a parody to me and is incomplete - but I believe that it will develop over time.
- Too quickly, Mistress overcame Lucrezia.

- Love path:
I didn't expect this, but man, I LOVE this path ha ha ha. At least for now. Here it seems to me that the story is better written, and that everything is going in a more natural way.

One thing I just didn’t like in general, and that is why are their eyes constantly open while kissing? It looks a little weird to me.

The overall impression remained the same as after the third update - very good.
- render quality - 4/5
- female models - 5/5
- telling a story (dialogues) - I think it depends on the path - there is a lot of room for progress here, so let it be 3/5 here (maybe it's a little too strict, but it doesn't diminish my overall impression)
- story - this can only be assessed when the game is completed, but for now it promises a lot, so I give it a +.
- fetishes - a lot of potential, also +.
Overall rating: 4/5 (for now).
So anyone who CAN and wants to support authors on Patreon should consider this developer. Also consider that this is his FIRST game, so he hasn’t had enough time yet to learn all the tricks, or to improve his rendering machine. So over time I think it will get better.


PS - there are a couple of untranslated sentences in the game, so it would be nice to correct that.

 

[Lucrezia&Augusto]

I rarely play both ways, but this time I had to ha ha ha.
- Mistress path:
thing i like:
- Huge potential for humiliating Augusto (and therefore huge potential for some foot fetish content he he)
things I didn't like so much:
- Lucrezia looks like a schizophrenic to me and I'm a little scared of her ha ha.
- The story that she was in prison seems a bit like a parody to me and is incomplete - but I believe that it will develop over time.
- Too quickly, Mistress overcame Lucrezia.

- Love path:
I didn't expect this, but man, I LOVE this path ha ha ha. At least for now. Here it seems to me that the story is better written, and that everything is going in a more natural way.

One thing I just didn’t like in general, and that is why are their eyes constantly open while kissing? It looks a little weird to me.

The overall impression remained the same as after the third update - very good.
- render quality - 4/5
- female models - 5/5
- telling a story (dialogues) - I think it depends on the path - there is a lot of room for progress here, so let it be 3/5 here (maybe it's a little too strict, but it doesn't diminish my overall impression)
- story - this can only be assessed when the game is completed, but for now it promises a lot, so I give it a +.
- fetishes - a lot of potential, also +.
Overall rating: 4/5 (for now).
So anyone who CAN and wants to support authors on Patreon should consider this developer. Also consider that this is his FIRST game, so he hasn’t had enough time yet to learn all the tricks, or to improve his rendering machine. So over time I think it will get better.


PS - there are a couple of untranslated sentences in the game, so it would be nice to correct that.

Hello Friend and always a pleasure to hear from you.
Thanks for your advice that I will be happy to deal with a great player like you.

Yes I admit Lucrezia MIstress will have a very bad and very tragic path. And the fetish will be stolen by LUCREZIA LOVE ...
surely I will have to warn the player of this because the LUCREZIA MISTRESS version is really a bad path .. You think that my wife has not spoken to me anymore since I wrote the new scripts. ahahaha
But I can't tell you more ..
The transformation was quick because I had to make you understand that she was not the perfect wife and in any case the dialogue between them will return.
As I told you before, however, the path of LUCREZIA LOVE will face fetishes, love, hidden betrayals etc etc.

Then as you know and as I have stated several times I am not a graphics professional I am still learning a lot there are many professionals who are helping me.
I invested in a computer that helps me with renderings and my commitment to this game is 10 hours a day for 7 days.
And I'm sure that thanks to you I will be able to do better and better ..
My job has always been to invent stories for fiction or entertainment and so I used only fantasy now I have to use the computer too ahahaha


Yes, I check and double check a thousand times then something always escapes me hehe, the translated sentences will be absolutely correct.

Hello and thanks for your comment.

 

[sisso69]

Hello Friend and always a pleasure to hear from you.
Thanks for your advice that I will be happy to deal with a great player like you.

Yes I admit Lucrezia MIstress will have a very bad and very tragic path. And the fetish will be stolen by LUCREZIA LOVE ...
surely I will have to warn the player of this because the LUCREZIA MISTRESS version is really a bad path .. You think that my wife has not spoken to me anymore since I wrote the new scripts. ahahaha
But I can't tell you more ..
The transformation was quick because I had to make you understand that she was not the perfect wife and in any case the dialogue between them will return.
As I told you before, however, the path of LUCREZIA LOVE will face fetishes, love, hidden betrayals etc etc.

Then as you know and as I have stated several times I am not a graphics professional I am still learning a lot there are many professionals who are helping me.
I invested in a computer that helps me with renderings and my commitment to this game is 10 hours a day for 7 days.
And I'm sure that thanks to you I will be able to do better and better ..
My job has always been to invent stories for fiction or entertainment and so I used only fantasy now I have to use the computer too ahahaha


Yes, I check and double check a thousand times then something always escapes me hehe, the translated sentences will be absolutely correct.

Hello and thanks for your comment.

I imagined that LUCREZIA MISTRESS's path would be very special.
What do you refer to as tragic? What happen?

 

[Lucrezia&Augusto]

[QUOTE = "sisso69, post: 4361353, membro: 2756370"]
Immaginavo che il percorso di LUCREZIA MISTRESS sarebbe stato molto speciale.
A cosa ti riferisci come tragico? Cosa succede?
[/CITAZIONE]
Man if I tell you what happens I will ruin the next chapter.
If you want to imagine it, take any perverse situation. (Multiply it to infinity, take it into the abyss of eternity and you will barely see a glimpse of what I'm talking about.) "Film Meet Joe Black. I couldn't have said it better ahahahahahaha.
Now I pass you LUCREZIA who wanted to talk to you.

LUCREZIA:
SISSO69 Please save me I don't want to become bad ..... StefStory ... is making a decision too hasty help me ... try to stop him please ..

MISTRESS: ahahah Stop it ah ah ah ah it's no longer possible now the 5th script has been written .... You are really naive thinking that Sisso69 CAN STOP YOU ... NOW YOUR WISH IS SIGNED AH AH AH AH AH AH AH

LUCREZIA: SISSO69 NEVER FORGET ABOUT ME ... .... ... ... ...

MISTRESS: Don't worry Lucrezia .... Sisso69 will soon REMEMBER ONLY ME AH AH AH AH AH AH AH

 

[sisso69]

[QUOTE = "sisso69, post: 4361353, membro: 2756370"]
Immaginavo che il percorso di LUCREZIA MISTRESS sarebbe stato molto speciale.
A cosa ti riferisci come tragico? Cosa succede?
[/CITAZIONE]
Man if I tell you what happens I will ruin the next chapter.
If you want to imagine it, take any perverse situation. (Multiply it to infinity, take it into the abyss of eternity and you will barely see a glimpse of what I'm talking about.) "Film Meet Joe Black. I couldn't have said it better ahahahahahaha.
Now I pass you LUCREZIA who wanted to talk to you.

LUCREZIA:
SISSO69 Please save me I don't want to become bad ..... StefStory ... is making a decision too hasty help me ... try to stop him please ..

MISTRESS: ahahah Stop it ah ah ah ah it's no longer possible now the 5th script has been written .... You are really naive thinking that Sisso69 CAN STOP YOU ... NOW YOUR WISH IS SIGNED AH AH AH AH AH AH AH

LUCREZIA: SISSO69 NEVER FORGET ABOUT ME ... .... ... ... ...

MISTRESS: Don't worry Lucrezia .... Sisso69 will soon REMEMBER ONLY ME AH AH AH AH AH AH AH

StefStory you look crazy.
Too bad you are a genius.
Fabulous you are one of the strangest DEVs around.
And maybe that's what I like about your game outside the lines of pure fucking fantasy what I love.

I reply to mistress
No dear mistress I will never forget Lucrezia.
I want my Lucrezia back sigh-- sigh.

 

[defd©™]

This game seems to be the best one of the brand new games here.
I hope they will continue to update frequently if this will be done soon will lead the dev on the Top of the charts

Great story even if the sex action scenes are too short for now.
required more angle of views, more text and more Lucrezia

Awesome start

 

[Lucrezia&Augusto]

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[defd©™]

For me Lucrezia "Love" path is the best...
The submissive wife is more exciting than a dominant female...
Dominant wife are good for lesbian or maso-men
Wife dominated by men is more for real straight men

 

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[defd©™]

I imagined that LUCREZIA MISTRESS's path would be very special.
What do you refer to as tragic? What happen?

this game is NTR... so (I really hope) there is no way to avoid NTR = THE BEST NTR is always the love path...
I do not like dominant females.
Or better I like dominant women only for temporary agreement (blackmail) about the couple role play but not for a full game path

The Mistress path is very difficult to write without non-sense situation and should became boring after a while
Questions:
Lucrezia will be dominant with all men that she meets?
all man are masochist?
or
the husband is the only masoman and she want to be dominated by all other men?
in this case why she will continue the relationship?

In any cas I prefer Love path for now... I will take a look also in the Mistress path... but I'm not sure...
depends on writing skill.

 

[Lucrezia&Augusto]

this game is NTR... so (I really hope) there is no way to avoid NTR = THE BEST NTR is always the love path...
I do not like dominant females.
Or better I like dominant women only for temporary agreement (blackmail) about the couple role play but not for a full game path

The Mistress path is very difficult to write without non-sense situation and should became boring after a while
Questions:
Lucrezia will be dominant with all men that she meets?
all man are masochist?
or
the husband is the only masoman and she want to be dominated by all other men?
in this case why she will continue the relationship?

In any cas I prefer Love path for now... I will take a look also in the Mistress path... but I'm not sure...
depends on writing skill.

Hello friend, these are two completely different paths, in fact, from the next episodes they will both take different paths.
I'll give you an example if Lucrezia love will stop to admire a flower Lucrezia mistress instead floats on the flower with a caterpillar. So it will ultimately feel like playing two different games even if the ending of the game will be very touching in both paths.
Lucrezia Mistress has a writing more like a screenplay than a game and very articulated will certainly take an audience attentive to reading rather than playing. The Mistress will stop at nothing I can only tell you this .. There will be very hard scenes and twists that I can group with a word WOW ...

For Lucrezia Love, on the other hand, the story is written in an erotic key ... there will be no lack of complicity games by the couple, many occasional characters will enter because Augusto's wishes will not stop at the inside of the House or Sassosapori, since I like you I'm just telling you this. If you have seen the 4th chapter Favalli told Cristian that he wants Lucrezia only for him ... So here too there will be twists to go go

A message to everyone who told me the game is too fast.
Attention you want you have downloaded 4 chapters so far but for me it is still the introduction of the game.
I'll start taking a completely different version from Chapter 10, hoping you'll always be interested in my game.


Hello
StefStory

 

[defd©™]

Hello friend, these are two completely different paths, in fact, from the next episodes they will both take different paths.
I'll give you an example if Lucrezia love will stop to admire a flower Lucrezia mistress instead floats on the flower with a caterpillar. So it will ultimately feel like playing two different games even if the ending of the game will be very touching in both paths.
Lucrezia Mistress has a writing more like a screenplay than a game and very articulated will certainly take an audience attentive to reading rather than playing. The Mistress will stop at nothing I can only tell you this .. There will be very hard scenes and twists that I can group with a word WOW ...

For Lucrezia Love, on the other hand, the story is written in an erotic key ... there will be no lack of complicity games by the couple, many occasional characters will enter because Augusto's wishes will not stop at the inside of the House or Sassosapori, since I like you I'm just telling you this. If you have seen the 4th chapter Favalli told Cristian that he wants Lucrezia only for him ... So here too there will be twists to go go

A message to everyone who told me the game is too fast.
Attention you want you have downloaded 4 chapters so far but for me it is still the introduction of the game.
I'll start taking a completely different version from Chapter 10, hoping you'll always be interested in my game.


Hello
StefStory

Thanks a lot

For Mistress: I'm very interested in this path ... I believe that can be a very good dark path.. but for now it is too short to understand... so I will wait.

For Love: it is actually very well written... as i said

For the game... mmm I'm not sure that having 2 different games in one is a good idea...
thos path seems to be very similar bc there is no a "classic Love path" in this game
it is more as LOVE+NTR path...
... so the 2 paths are dark.. and the mistress is SUPER-DARK ...I will see in the future
actually I think they are very similar..

do not forget NTR is not = stolen the girl from the MC

usually 2 paths in the same game slow down the updates.

about your message to everyone: I'm totally with you... fast stories can allow to evolve in more sex scenes and this is a very good thing for an adult game...
I love action Movies...
I hate slow soap operas when I have to wait for a week for know if the gal was fucked.

I hate even more when in the next week I saw that she find a way to escape from the rape scene...
at the end of the second week... another very interesting action scene is cutted with --
(to be continued in the next week)


2 week to wait for nothing
AAAAAARGH ROAAARRR now I'm very pissed off

...however after a few hours I calm down

in the third week I'm very happy because I finally know what happened in that scene that intrigued me ended up in a gangbang or not.

---but the episoda start with something that seems to be another movie:
a ugly face granny is knitting in front of the fireplace

STOP! At this point I take the TV remote control and change the channel

....this kind of soap operas (or game) are just fake.... and if I really interested in the gal actress I just wait for the end of the season...
I will download the whole season and watch by skipping all parts that I hate.

PS:
usually those who told you that the game is too fast are DEVELOPERS who have not had much success with the public but insist on following guidelines and scriptwriting courses made on purpose so that they can never be successful

I can only hope that you will follow your instincts without abandoning the enthusiasm that led you to start this beautiful story ...do not follow the advice of others too much...
just follow the technical tips and discard those regarding narrative development ... because you're doing really well