VN Ren'Py Wife in the Building! [v.0.1.0 Beta] [DinoTail Games]

[DarkDaemonX]

It's insane that small updates like this game does take so long, when nothing uses variables yet, I get that every image is drawn, but that still doesn't take this long for so little.

Also, we reached the drama which will put bad things in motion now, which is not something this story needed, it felt out of place in this game.

 

[Soul_Devour]

I can't help but agree with other commentators. I understand that your resources for creating this game may be meager, but 5 versions in, with mini updates in between, and there are so few lewd scenes. Each scene is hand drawn, and I can appreciate that, but it feels like it'll be a while before we get anywhere good, especially with the new conflict that has been introduced between Blake and MC. Poor Jerome man, nearly killed just wanting to help MC and Billy. Honestly makes me feel bad for the guy, especially with how brutally his face was beaten. Didn't expect to see that level of violence in this originally cute (even if lewd with depressing aspects) game. His smile at the beginning when you meet him, to seeing him being bloody and bruised is fudged. Kinda ruins the mood a little, especially since you don't have the choice to punch Blake or not, so you can't even prevent all that from happening.

Edit: Just wanted to add, that this is not hate, as I said I appreciate how you work hard drawing the art yourself rather than relying on AI or someone else, but the direction this is going seems to be steering somewhat from how things looked like it was going, especially with the title. From the looks of it as well, it seems like it might overwhelm you with how much this story is expanding. As someone else said, the cast you showed (Jerome, Old Man, Youngings, and Nerd) seemed like a decent enough set of diversity for people to enjoy. I enjoy forced content, and wouldn't mind what Blake could bring, but it just feels like such a sudden change. A bit forced, especially with how it looks like Jerome is being put sidelined possibly with what happened to him.

 

[hehehezozo]

Sweet New Update

 

[Daniele69]

This is the Italian translation of :
Wife in the Building! [v0.5.0 Beta]


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This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan"
extract the .rar file and move "game" to the game where the .exe file resides overwrite if required .

Download

 

[DudeDiabolos]

Hm... yeah. Not a fan of the direction this is going. Like someone before me said: this stuff isn't needed and feel out of place in this story.

 

[baka]

I agree. not because a story can't contain such drama, but because each picture require time to drawn.
that is why u need to be picky about that and avoid too much fluff.
in the end this is only to put them in a spot. forcing the wife to work and be lewd.
that for me is already a bad direction as I appreciate it more if they are exploring things together without any stress, lying and be forced to work in places u shouldn't do if there where no issues.

the "wife in the building" is now the wife working in a strip-bar (supposedly)
I mean, we have 3 dudes in the building. and thats what I was expecting.
the old dude, the fatty and the kid. and to not forget the MC. its enough. don't need more than that.
but it seems the DEV is not planning ahead. he just randomly add stuff.
it will take 4ever to add content to all of them. plus the MC-content to "keep it close and hot between the couple".
instead of stressing them out and making the wife unsatisfied.

 

[Shiningforcehero]

IDC what people say, Take your time dev.
Sadly can't support right NOW, but when my situation get better i'l help with what I can.
Don't give up!

 

[SD0083]

It's been so long and there hasn't been a single sexy scene yet……

 

[Steven44460]

J'aurais aimé qui soit disponible sur Android

 

[Strong1]

Short ass garbage update! Guess another game to ignore.

 

[sugdad81]

Wow. What a piece of shit update. Complete waste of time.

 

[TheUberstuff]

IDC what people say, Take your time dev.
Sadly can't support right NOW, but when my situation get better i'l help with what I can.
Don't give up!

Taking your time is one thing, taking your time AND putting out a worthless update is not cool

 

[kyotheman101]

was going check this out, but seen comments, ill pass i hate when a dev does this, it pisses me off that creator that does that Hana series comes to mind. Just milking supporters for shit updates

 

[TheUberstuff]

was going check this out, but seen comments, ill pass i hate when a dev does this, it pisses me off that creator that does that Hana series comes to mind. Just milking supporters for shit updates

Yeah I liked the game at first but when a dev takes months and months and then puts out a shit update. They lose me. I understand taking time to do a solid update but this was pathetic.

 

[michelazzo]

a good another empty update!

 

[krak0n]

whats the point of all of these? it would be so much interesting to see update with those kid/ old man storyline .

 

[neroman76]

WTF was this update? Another promising game going down the drain ...

 

[MGDS]

Well, I must agree about the last comments. Yes, it's nice that you draw by yourself your very own characters. The beginning of the story is interesting but I don't understand the point about the last update. I mean, the game name is "wife in the building". You talked about neighbors and suddenly, out of nowhere, this new plot. I really don't understand. Of course I respect your work (I was a level designer in a totally different type of games and I understand how hard and long it can be - No pun -) but you shoudn't share a so small update.

 

[RCC14]

seriously that was the update? half the update is a fight scene wow. Better ignore this game

 

[Shiningforcehero]

Taking your time is one thing, taking your time AND putting out a worthless update is not cool

if the dev didint do any update the game would automatically be labeled as [Abandoned]