VN Ren'Py Wife Promotion [Ch.1] [AngryDogStudio]

[SymbioticLife]

But i see a lot of errors in your visual style too. I'm not alone. It's AI, not all is good.
Also i want to upgrade visual style in next chapters, i know its not excellent. Thanks for help.

But also MNGF doesn't have many visual errors in the more recent stuff... and most visual errors with AI can be easily corrected with inpaint or photoshop, or using control nets. But again, you don't seem to even have a proper upscaler here. Comparing to MNGF is a bit of a stretch.

I'm trying to give helpful critique, there's a lot of ways to increase visual consistency and quality in AI. Just saying "ah, it's AI" is not particularly accurate when there's so many tools now for corrections. Like, two different colored eyes or a dude caked in make up or 6 fingered hands are all not present in MNGF. Or Shadows, for that matter.

 

[XCelesX]

This is the kind of AI stuff I like. Looks great and is obviously tweaked by an artist to look logical.
If this gets some more sex scenes I'm in

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[htakara82]

why is the dude wearing more makeup than the chick?

 

[AngryDogStudio]

This is the kind of AI stuff I like. Looks great and is obviously tweaked by an artist to look logical.
If this gets some more sex scenes I'm in

Thank you sincerely! Yes, there will be many more scenes in the future. Since my game is focused mainly on wife, I didn’t want to show all the interesting things too quickly, because in NTR projects this always throws me off.

 

[BangB420]

OOo yeah, love these, keep em coming

 

[critic specialized in NTR]

At first NTR, but i want to create and illustrate psycholocial transformation from NTR to NTS. Like emotional shield. It's interesting that in real life husbands can do similiar transformations.

In fact, I would find it interesting to keep it in NTR, as already proposed at the beginning, the story catches you with this for NTR fans, if we were to transform this into NTS it would be better to take another route and keep NTR things solid. Well, that's my opinion.

 

[fabulous007]

In fact, I would find it interesting to keep it in NTR, as already proposed at the beginning, the story catches you with this for NTR fans, if we were to transform this into NTS it would be better to take another route and keep NTR things solid. Well, that's my opinion.

If it's toward the end of the game, it could just be two routes yeah. It probably wouldn't add to much work, and it's always good for the game when a dev can do his original vision. Also there are several kind of nts anyway, it can be vanilla but also ntr-ish, with the female dominating the relationship.

 

[xxxGmanxxx]

"...Can the husband overcome his jealousy for the sake of love? Or will his emotions lead him down a different path?"

It's a pity that this "or" does not imply the possibility of the husband growing a spine and taking revenge on his cheating wife, while seducing an even sexier girl than his wife. No, it will be about the husband becoming an even more spineless slug than he is now. Man, why are NTR game developers so predictable? Don't they want to create a non-trivial story at least sometimes?

 

[PewPewMasterrrrr]

"Kinetic Novel" tag
There's no choice anyway

 

[AngryDogStudio]

Could definitely use sone work with refining the art and the dialogue especially, not gonna lie. How much people can ignore extra fingers and other details varies person-to-person, but the dialogue being so stilted can definitely take some emotional oomph out of the whole thing.


Oh no, TurhaanKoitatte is another one of the innumerable people bitching about either AI or NTR or both, but he adds you to the ignore list too!

Nobody cares, bro.

Thank you! I try do better at 2 chapter.

 

[fabulous007]

"...Can the husband overcome his jealousy for the sake of love? Or will his emotions lead him down a different path?"

It's a pity that this "or" does not imply the possibility of the husband growing a spine and taking revenge on his cheating wife, while seducing an even sexier girl than his wife. No, it will be about the husband becoming an even more spineless slug than he is now. Man, why are NTR game developers so predictable? Don't they want to create a non-trivial story at least sometimes?

Honestly, I think it because it's rare a ntr game that has a vanilla route (as lengthy as the ntr one) reaches success. By vanilla I just mean non-ntr and non-sharing.
It's probably because the two routes double the work and that it's generally for two very different audiences, which will both bitch because the dev spends time on the route they don't like. One compromise they could make, is a game with a netori route (for example fucking the wife of the guy fucking your wife) that could exist even you chose to remain in the ntr route, in parallel (or not according to your choices). Something like that, but I'm no dev and maybe that too would be difficult, and I'm just assuming ntr fans like netori in general because I like a lot of different stuff, but that may be more uncommon than I think.

 

[BangB420]

Honestly, I think it because it's rare a ntr game that has a non-ntr route (as lengthy as the ntr one) reaches success. Probably because the two routes double the work and that it's generally for two very different audiences, which will both bitch because the dev spends time on the route they don't like. One compromise they could make, is a game with a netori route (for example the wife of the guy fucking your wife) that could exist even you chose to remain in the ntr route. Something like that, but I'm no dev and maybe that too would be difficult, and I'm just assuming ntr fans like netori in general because I like a lot of different stuff, but that may more uncommon than I think.

People are gonna bitch about NTR regardless of a non-ntr route. My advice to Dev is to stick to their original vision and things will be okay

 

[I-Love-Adventure]

nice game thank you

 

[atmos7]

This is the kind of AI stuff I like. Looks great and is obviously tweaked by an artist to look logical.
If this gets some more sex scenes I'm in

Bruh I don't know what world you live in but the art details are far from logical. I'm not saying it's bad, like I've seen way worse, but I don't really think this has been tweaked by real art

 

[Ashoolar1989]

quite enjoyed the first chapter keep it up

 

[Skylark21]

Wife not playable.

Since there's no Female mc, you should remove that tag.

 

[FanOfClouds]

Missing the kinetic novel tag.
The writing is good but the game style is not really my jam.

 

[K115]

I love NTR, by far my favorite genre umbrella, but there are way too many of these now, the first 2 were fine, I can accept it and some of the images on the other games were cleaned up or touched up to avoid showing the glaring issues with AI art. But not only is the "NTS AI Art VN" starting to quite rapidly clutter up with the samey premises and similar looking blonde characters (greatly at fault of the AI art generator being unable to make different faces). Many are also kinetic novels taking away all player interaction beyond the pressing of the spacebar.

There was potential before, but now all of these games are blending into eachother, please make something at least different for your story, some spice, anything at this point and for the love of god please have the bare minimum decency to at least get rid of the extra fingers, hairs that blend into the skin and multicolored off-centered irises. We know it's AI art but it shouldn't be this blatant of a shortcut. Please put in the bare minimum of work to at least clean up the images.

 

[Saruh Games]

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Guy has multi colored eyes (and low detail eyes)

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2 (or 3?) fingers

I don't even enjoy hard NTR so not planning to play. But my man you need an upscaler, an addetailer and to learn how to use inpaint and photoshop. There's so many visual errors and artifacts in literally all your example images. It's just not good to look at.
If you want some basic pointers DM me.

Tell me you're a girl without telling me you're a girl. All I saw was a big ass, camel toe, and side boob. Eye for detail is an understatement.