I'm looking forward to see where you go with this game. i know of only 1 nts game that even has pregnancy planned, it will be interesting to see what you do with it. one thing i will say is that a lot of nts games try to go for realism too much and completely axe porn logic. porn logic is a very important writing tool. so don't be afraid to use it. i will be following the author and wish them good luck
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Thank you to everyone that commented. I know this preview is very small, and I'm sorry for that, but at the same time it was a bit intentional. I wanted to share and get the word out there that I started creating an NTS game and see the reception.
About the next update, I'm planning for it to be at the end of next month (not a promise, next month I need to go on a trip for a week, so I won't be working on the game). It will be the full Chapter 1, free on release (Patreon is under review, not sure yet if I’ll have subscriptions, maybe idk we’ll see). The expected length is about 45 minutes to 1 hour of gameplay, hopefully.
So about the game, I want it to have a bit of a slow-burn vibe, but not feel like it’s dragging. So it won't take too long for FMC have her first small adventure. I want it to have a more grounded story but of course there will be some porn logic in it. And as stated on the Overview and even on the Developer Notes (Don't forget to read there is some important info there too) there will be NO CHEATING (You can read more on the Developer Notes about this).
Anyway, thank you y'all again for all the comments and Thank you bob69 for the thread move.
About the next update, I'm planning for it to be at the end of next month (not a promise, next month I need to go on a trip for a week, so I won't be working on the game). It will be the full Chapter 1, free on release (Patreon is under review, not sure yet if I’ll have subscriptions, maybe idk we’ll see). The expected length is about 45 minutes to 1 hour of gameplay, hopefully.
So about the game, I want it to have a bit of a slow-burn vibe, but not feel like it’s dragging. So it won't take too long for FMC have her first small adventure. I want it to have a more grounded story but of course there will be some porn logic in it. And as stated on the Overview and even on the Developer Notes (Don't forget to read there is some important info there too) there will be NO CHEATING (You can read more on the Developer Notes about this).
Anyway, thank you y'all again for all the comments and Thank you bob69 for the thread move.
Yeah, I saw that and it's annoying me too. I'm trying to see what I can do to fix it. I think I have a workaround, but it's not a permanent fix yet.
Thanks
Yep, interracial will be optional/avoidable.
Thank you
About the threesomes, yes MC will be involved too as an option.
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Wow, another story where the MC has a wife, whom he loves, and with whom he wants to improve his relationship and strengthen it... watching her have sex with other people while he masturbates in a corner... that certainly has logic and originality.
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Loved the short gameplay and the tons of choices I'm a sucker for choices even if they're simple dialog choices and you're doing everything right so far and I'll definitely keep an eye out for this game hope you keep the same vibe for the next update.
Yes, yet another one, and I'm always looking for more., there is too much NTR out there an not many NTS. The main difference is that this one is mineWow, another story where the MC has a wife, whom he loves, and with whom he wants to improve his relationship and strengthen it... watching her have sex with other people while he masturbates in a corner... that certainly has logic and originality.
Btw, slight correction, they’re not married, not yet at least
They’re using a ring because, in my culture (not sure about other parts of the world), it’s kind of normal to wear a ring on the right hand to show that you’re in a relationship. Marriage is on the left hand.
And the MC won’t be submissive, so don’t expect him on the cuck chair every time lol.
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I'm not sure who teaches people learning English that couples refer to each other as 'Love', but they need to be arrested. I don't think I've ever once heard that outside of England, and even then only from 50+ year old women lol.
I think that and 'my love' are more common in Spanish or French, but it sounds weird directly translated into English.
I think that and 'my love' are more common in Spanish or French, but it sounds weird directly translated into English.
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I understand your concern, but without disclosing too much about myself, what I can say is that I'm American too, but English is my second language because I live abroad and I'm fluent in it. I see it being used by both people around my age and older.
And no, this game wasn't made in another language and then translated.
But don't worry, grammar is something I still need to tackle again. This is still just a Demo.
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Good intro, you have my total attention.
Nts have a growing demand, so the question is not if, but how to make money.
Well, I can say that NTR genre had big changes. If you look for old hotwifing games, you would see sociopaths wifes\gfs who actually doesn't care about the MC feelings. Also you would see wifes\gfs who were blackmailed and starts a kind of spiral of corruption. These contents are what I will call 'regular NTR'.
After the pandemic, devs started to build games where the couple enjoy the roleplay together, in a harmonious way, without being neglected, but with a lot of fun for both of them. Actually, recent games portray the NTS as a MC's fetish (at least at the begnning).
I think the first step for a good beginning is write a interesting arc of corruption: induce, deliberately or not, the fmc to the nts\hotwifing. Why? Well, if she doesn't need to be convinced it means that she was willing to cheat on you and this is definitely not funny or healthy. There would be no fetish therefore.
You did a good start making the MC feel aroused while imagining Sarah with other guy. But, of course, we will agree that players need more to convince her. A good path is just start with exhibitionism, making the fmc lose the shyness and shame, making her feel more comfortable with the idea of being shared. Please don't use parks like other devs, it doesn't make any sence. Instead, use the beach (not nude beach), pool parties. I would love to encourage her to do a topless. Another way is encouraging Sarah to flert with other men and sharing nudes. Her friends should encourage her too.
I think this is a good step thinking about the fmc in the first release.
But what about the MC?
Explore MC's pov is less complicated, but yet highly important to create a good story. First of all, why he likes netorase? Resume to just a dream looks simplified.
Usualy men in this lifestyle (Sharing) only have 2 interests: fuck other girls (swing) AND\or competition for his girl (cuckolding\hotwifing\nts). Our MC's profile is already clear. But what led him to become interested in the subject is unclear.
Most guys looking for ntr enjoy insecurity. What separates netose from netorare is the fact that the MC have control over the situation, what means that you can trust in your girl because she loves you and she likes to realize you. The most important thing to develop a good nts main character is making him understand clearly his feelings and fantasies. I mean, in the future the MC must be able to answer if he likes to lose the control and being humiliated, or if he would like to play in a more conservative league just sharing his girlfriend. This is what you should make clear for us, the players.
Nts have a growing demand, so the question is not if, but how to make money.
Well, I can say that NTR genre had big changes. If you look for old hotwifing games, you would see sociopaths wifes\gfs who actually doesn't care about the MC feelings. Also you would see wifes\gfs who were blackmailed and starts a kind of spiral of corruption. These contents are what I will call 'regular NTR'.
After the pandemic, devs started to build games where the couple enjoy the roleplay together, in a harmonious way, without being neglected, but with a lot of fun for both of them. Actually, recent games portray the NTS as a MC's fetish (at least at the begnning).
I think the first step for a good beginning is write a interesting arc of corruption: induce, deliberately or not, the fmc to the nts\hotwifing. Why? Well, if she doesn't need to be convinced it means that she was willing to cheat on you and this is definitely not funny or healthy. There would be no fetish therefore.
You did a good start making the MC feel aroused while imagining Sarah with other guy. But, of course, we will agree that players need more to convince her. A good path is just start with exhibitionism, making the fmc lose the shyness and shame, making her feel more comfortable with the idea of being shared. Please don't use parks like other devs, it doesn't make any sence. Instead, use the beach (not nude beach), pool parties. I would love to encourage her to do a topless. Another way is encouraging Sarah to flert with other men and sharing nudes. Her friends should encourage her too.
I think this is a good step thinking about the fmc in the first release.
But what about the MC?
Explore MC's pov is less complicated, but yet highly important to create a good story. First of all, why he likes netorase? Resume to just a dream looks simplified.
Usualy men in this lifestyle (Sharing) only have 2 interests: fuck other girls (swing) AND\or competition for his girl (cuckolding\hotwifing\nts). Our MC's profile is already clear. But what led him to become interested in the subject is unclear.
Most guys looking for ntr enjoy insecurity. What separates netose from netorare is the fact that the MC have control over the situation, what means that you can trust in your girl because she loves you and she likes to realize you. The most important thing to develop a good nts main character is making him understand clearly his feelings and fantasies. I mean, in the future the MC must be able to answer if he likes to lose the control and being humiliated, or if he would like to play in a more conservative league just sharing his girlfriend. This is what you should make clear for us, the players.
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Thank you for your input, it was very in-depth, so thank you for taking the time to write it.
Many things you wrote I 100% agree with, and I’ll try my best to implement them. The way the story will evolve is based on my own experiences and fantasies to some extent, so the way the FMC starts becoming more bold or something will be a bit slow, but not so slow that the player feels like I’m milking the game. At least that’s what I’m aiming for. Like I said before, this is my first game and I’m not a professional writer, so mistakes can happen.
As for what you said about the MC and why he likes Netorase, I will give a reason for it, but I’m still figuring out if it’s a good enough one. Mostly because, like I said, the story is being written based on my own experiences and fantasies. And when I ask myself "Why do I like this stuff?" honestly I don’t know. I’ve been asking that for years and still have no idea
But since it’s a game, meant to be played, I’ll definitely add a reason to explain it.
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I played it and really like what I saw so far. It's off to a great start.
A very nice start already,cant wait for the kinks in the new updates!
This is where I disagree with what Mat said. The MC doesn't really need a hard reason as to why he walks down the nts path, "because I like it" isn't going to hurt the story. Also there being only 2 paths, swinging and cuckolding, isn't necessarily true. One example is someone just liking to see their S.O be a slut, and humiliation has nothing to do with it. When it comes to this game, my suggestion is to first tell the story you want with little cosmic choices that affect dialog and maybe a pic or 2. Then from there add in all the paths with kinks you left out of your main story. Your main story is going to have your passion, so focusing on it will be good for the game.As for what you said about the MC and why he likes Netorase, I will give a reason for it, but I’m still figuring out if it’s a good enough one. Mostly because, like I said, the story is being written based on my own experiences and fantasies. And when I ask myself "Why do I like this stuff?" honestly I don’t know. I’ve been asking that for years and still have no idea
But since it’s a game, meant to be played, I’ll definitely add a reason to explain it.
Thank you for your input.
Even though I agree with some of the things matthww said, when it comes to the reason why the MC likes nts, it won’t be some in-depth explanation. When the FMC asks why or something, the MC will basically explain it through feelings. There won’t be some deep reason like "he has this kink because of a girl he liked when he was younger and she was dating someone else" and bla bla bla it'll be something more simple and imo more natural. I think doing it this way, especially as someone still new to creating stuff like this, will be more manageable.
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