Rake Tyler
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EyeWish1
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Dev needs to make the name changeable without having to use a mod and add in a gallery at the least.
Enigemm
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Hmm, the little bit of the story had me. I enjoy good stories and really would like to see where this heads to. I saw the dev is working hard on an update on his Patreon despite the abandon tag here. I like the fact that attention to detail received strong emphasis. I like the fact we're not dealing with the typical AVN Male troupe of lazy, insecure, pushover male that hates waking early. Frankly, that troupe has long outlived its usefulness yet devs still shove it down your throat. Here are a few suggestions going forward:
- Your female LI's practically have the same bust +/- 2 on average except for Lily, the daughter of the neighbour. While there are a vast majority of huge boobs lovers around the AVN community, there are those that prefer "reality" over fiction even in a fictitious story. I think you'd want to watch that as you introduce more female LI's and add variety here to cater for a wider audience and would-be subscribers.
- There's a character flaw with Jane. She stated clearly that she's a virgin and will remain so yet her character says otherwise with how she's openly pursuing the MC when they just met. While I'm not saying she has to be Queen Prude, she's way to open about it already salivating on the MC's penis when she saw it.
- The grammar including subject/verb agreement, tenses and punctuation needs work. While you may not have the cash to pay an editor, there are persons who volunteer (I'm one of them) in fixing scripts. Most devs just treat them to early releases as a thank you. Some, include their name as part of the credits. I'm mostly active on Discord though so if you're interested, send me a DM.
- The MC wakes daily with an erection. However, you've exaggerated that point far too much. I'd advise you tone it down. It looks like some triangular night stand.
- Jane's work clothes could do with a fixing. A 'date top' with open back is just not an outfit a receptionist wears at the front desk of any business. Remember, relevance adds to the immersion in your story.
- Not sure how by how much your workload would increase, but a house with 8 bedrooms and one bathroom is a recipe for chaos unless you have another room(s) designated as the master bedroom and it's just the MC's own and a few others.
Hi JoeWould smash,
Any one got a clue if traps in the plan?
I had the same thought, and some other folks that are the friends that all also happened to “die.”
Maybe dev will add choice to change it, but if not then someone will probably make a patch at some point if the game is even remotely successful.
To dev; any list of planned tags? Those that are sure, maybes, for sure nots? Harem, pregnancy, incest are my big three so care most about their inclusion. NTR, sharing, random other dicks getting action on screen are some of my most disliked, so care a lot about their exclusion.
Edit: Also, having the same basic back story as the Punisher doesn’t do any harm,
Here are a few planned tags:
Pregnancy
Domination
Harem
Group sex
These are the ones I'm currently looking at but it will change as the story progress.
Thanks for your input. I appreciate it
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!TheRoyalReaper!
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Multiple time I get " an exception has occured NameError: name hx4 is not defined
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Enigemm
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You do realize that you're running the game from the Windows temp directory right? Had you extracted it to a folder on the C drive or your desktop or whatever location BUT NOT YOUR TEMP DRIVE, you would not get that error. You just opened it up/double-clicked it from within Winrar and ran the game just like that. That's not the way games are played.
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cab18+
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I play this game running from an external drive and have the same 'hx4' error.
Seems to be a definition error in the for Lily in relation to Andelina in the chapter 1 story file if i understand renpy correct.
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thank youHi guys, I created this simple WT Mod for those who want to make their life easier in the game.
I hope you like it...
See you next time
Just a little tip for the dev: Instead of that extremely long rel-changer that gives very little contextual information about what the correct relationships are, you could simply have the player set only Samantha's relationship, then use a few lines of code to set everyone else's accordingly.
It would probably also help to introduce the characters a little bit before having the player set relationships up, so we have a better idea of who everyone should be to him. There are several games that give good examples of this, where they introduce a "landlady" like "This is Rebecca, she's raised you since the day you were born. She is your: (input relationship)"
It would probably also help to introduce the characters a little bit before having the player set relationships up, so we have a better idea of who everyone should be to him. There are several games that give good examples of this, where they introduce a "landlady" like "This is Rebecca, she's raised you since the day you were born. She is your: (input relationship)"
Enigemm
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Okay, the developer hangs around the thread so he's sure to respond. But I did not get the error message. I'm running it on a Linux platform. Question though, which version did you download. Original or compressed?
cab18+
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Nevermind. I have found the source for the hx4 error messages, assuming !TheRoyalReaper! also uses the wincest patch.
If so, the patch does not contain the hx-series definitions.
Re-install the original base game, extract and copy the WT mod (if used), extract the wincest file.
Open the original data file and copy the h* series and paste that in the wincest patch, save and close.
Now you can copy / paste (and overwrite) the data file. That should fix it.
I searched this topic but wasn't able to find who made the wincest patch so i also don't know what relationship would fit the story for Liliy and Angela (mother / daughter?).
Enigemm
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That makes sense. The patch was made for the first release. You do not need the patch for version 2 going forward seeing that there's the relationship changer. I figured that could be the cause as I tried it on a Windows machine and did not get that error. I never used the patch for either version as I know I can just alter it using URM anyhow.
jadepaladin
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Having us change the relationships of people we've never met (as the player) is odd. The prompt to change things comes up before you even see Samantha so I just guessed after I closed that menu, went back into the phone and read the bios that got added. I'm assuming it's mom and four sisters and then the neighbor Angelica is Lily's mom?