I like it, sure it is short but it is more of an introduction project of a fresh developer. Don't focus on the game, focus on the potential the dev shows here, with a bit of help and feedback, great stuff can be accomplished.
it was a huge pain to make this game all on my own. even considering it's laughable size. i didn't had any experience in renpy and it took me weeks to figure everything out. i've learned a lot since then in terms of rendering but i wouldn't make a game on my own ever again.
if someone with renpy experience would like to collab i had someone to work on the game itself and i could provide the renders but i won't continue to work on the game alone anymore.