gregers
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Without looking at the code, there'll likely be the same problem loading saves from this version in chapter three, as they seem to be encoded as being specific to chapter two.
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The thing is, I made a macro function to use the same png files of models with different background. I am in the process of updating static images in chapter 1 with the new function so that the background are consistent. With chapter 3, it will be finished and game structure completed. From there onwards, it will be smooth sailing hopefully.
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Sounds good: This is looking really promising so far!
Good writing, fun scenarios, etc. Could probably do with an extra proofreading pass, but nothing too egregious. You might consider a leettle more guidance for the player, as the outcome of choices (if any) is not always very clear, but that's a matter of preference.
I've added a few notes to my original comment as I played through it for things you may want to look at. Most of it minor, but there's one missing story flag that could prove troublesome if not fixed.
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The back button is in the side menu.no back butten so ill have to make 10 playthoughts just to see what i missed
Offline version still tries to use discord banners pulled directly from discord itself. If it is offline, then it shouldn't access to anything online at all.
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The pure blackness of the background for everything and all the text just being white is a bit hard to read.
Some extra spaces all around, sometimes button has a missing or added element "[Next Morning"
some of the variables need to be gone over, like there is a chapter_1_mc_comlimented_lacy_picture and a chapter_1_mc_complimented_lacy_picture and to make sure they trigger as they should.
Are you crazy, [mc]? Ronald is right there.
anonymous (this should be evainbloom I think)
Honestly? He hasn't even texted me, not even work related stuff since we last spoke. Maybe it was all in my head.
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The pure blackness of the background for everything and all the text just being white is a bit hard to read.
Some extra spaces all around, sometimes button has a missing or added element "[Next Morning"
some of the variables need to be gone over, like there is a chapter_1_mc_comlimented_lacy_picture and a chapter_1_mc_complimented_lacy_picture and to make sure they trigger as they should.
Are you crazy, [mc]? Ronald is right there.
anonymous (this should be evainbloom I think)
Honestly? He hasn't even texted me, not even work related stuff since we last spoke. Maybe it was all in my head.
twenty seconds into the game and... seriously?
you really couldn't find an actual picture of some code anywhere on the internet? you couldn't even fucking take a screenshot your game's own html file in a text editor?
like sure, everyone knows ai images are a sign that your game probably will be lazy and talentless but this is next level. it probably took you more time to ai generate this than it would've to have just found a real picture, and yet its still incomprehensible trash that doesn't even stand up to half a second's glance
plastic-fantastic
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Damn man, someone spit in your coffee or what? I mean, if an AI generated image of a bit of code is that triggering, maybe take a break.
For real tho, suspension of disbelief being shattered by a piece of code is bonkers
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I think there are logical mistakes in the page starting with "Now comes the fun part. You wanted some real progress. More than just sending pics. You closed the messaging app and called her directly. She immediately picked up.":
As the quoted text above mentions, MC is talking with Elsa on the phone. But then there's this narrative text: "You waited. Let the silence draw out the tension.
She was reading every word.
And you knew she was already imagining it."
Reading? I thought they were talking. Later MC says "And write exactly what you feel." But later her voice is trembling?
My guess is that this scene was originally totally in the messaging app but it was changed to be a voice call but the text was not read carefully enough.
Also, the voice conversation is using dialog-box instead of phone-box. I noticed it because I have modded boxes to be easier for my eyes using the Stylus browser extension:
dialog-box:
phone-box:
As the quoted text above mentions, MC is talking with Elsa on the phone. But then there's this narrative text: "You waited. Let the silence draw out the tension.
She was reading every word.
And you knew she was already imagining it."
Reading? I thought they were talking. Later MC says "And write exactly what you feel." But later her voice is trembling?
My guess is that this scene was originally totally in the messaging app but it was changed to be a voice call but the text was not read carefully enough.
Also, the voice conversation is using dialog-box instead of phone-box. I noticed it because I have modded boxes to be easier for my eyes using the Stylus browser extension:
dialog-box:
phone-box:
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mistafu
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Some logical errors here and there, sometimes the wrong person talks
But overall i liked the writing as soon as the 2nd training started. Keep it up
But overall i liked the writing as soon as the 2nd training started. Keep it up
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Is this scene Patreon Locked or something?
Don't see how I could trigger it:
"Interrupted Dessert after Lunch"
Run the game 2 times with different choices.
Don't see how I could trigger it:
"Interrupted Dessert after Lunch"
Run the game 2 times with different choices.
Nice effort so far. Couple of things I haven't seen mentioned yet:
There are several places where the narrative changes mid sentence. Not actual, but as an example, "You watch her walk away and he imagines...". Not a big deal but immersion breaking - .
How do you hear Cory when the garage door closed and you were halfway to you bedroom.
( "The garage door closed behind you, as you hurried to your room in a haste to finally get some rest. ")
There are several places where the narrative changes mid sentence. Not actual, but as an example, "You watch her walk away and he imagines...". Not a big deal but immersion breaking - .
How do you hear Cory when the garage door closed and you were halfway to you bedroom.
( "The garage door closed behind you, as you hurried to your room in a haste to finally get some rest. ")
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This is a great game. Love the netori content in it.
My only gripe on this is that the MC is kind of pissing me off, though. He's supposed to be a dominant and confident man who easily seduced Keisha and is using her to get into Alexa's pants, but he acted like a total sub to Dani and is close to also be a toy to Elsa's mom. Also, when he sent the blowjob video to Dani, she mentioned that she opened it in front of her husband, when he hacked her computer he saw that she searched about cheating, but when she told him that she was married it was like he only found out about it in that moment.
Besides the times the MC acts like a fool or like a sub, I'm loving the game.
My only gripe on this is that the MC is kind of pissing me off, though. He's supposed to be a dominant and confident man who easily seduced Keisha and is using her to get into Alexa's pants, but he acted like a total sub to Dani and is close to also be a toy to Elsa's mom. Also, when he sent the blowjob video to Dani, she mentioned that she opened it in front of her husband, when he hacked her computer he saw that she searched about cheating, but when she told him that she was married it was like he only found out about it in that moment.
Besides the times the MC acts like a fool or like a sub, I'm loving the game.