i'll look into thanks any decent reference for writing will help i know about the the context i am a dom myself and i live through it myself my main issue is getting across personality in in this context that doesn't sound like a bad porn script with a poor choice of music.
There is also the trick of having a good balance between explaining what a dom/sub dynamic is and not going on a full on rant about it which i plan to do via the training phases but i'm new to writing short of poetry i haven't really had the background so i am working kinda blind in that aspect of the game.
Writing it down and writing it down in a way ppl can at least tolerate is a different thing and i'd rather not have it half assed just to say i got it out.
I hashed out the personality for each character main or side so far and now its just a matter having them work within the story and making sound decent i can pray to all god ppl will like it but being real here i am new to this so i doubt it.
However short of me using real life money and sitting down with a writer to hash out a good story with a few different drafts taking idk how long and eating through assets i barely have for something that is a side project is not something i can do atm. To be clear i intend to make it my job and i have spent money on both software and assets for that software to make workflow easier the reality is i lack the funds atm to be able to do so and if in the future i make enough in this field to allow for working with a writer i'd be happy to do that and learn as well as have better writing for the game.
It's a issue of quality vs. ability vs. funds there is always going to be a weak link somewhere unless you have the money to hire someone to fill all roles and just manage them which odds are unless your pixar or a large game studio u don't have those funds. Which leaves you with having someone fill those weak spots in with more time from each person working there or in my case me putting on all the hats and trying to reach that quality solo which as you may think is harder then not. weather i am reaching for heights beyond myself is another topic but i am pretty sure i can do it just gonna take longer then i would hope, better to know this now then before i send the game out promise the world then fall on my face failing to deliver what i once promised or have a time table that runs 20x longer then i expected.
Long winded rant / explanation over with as always i'll keep you all updated and thanks again for the reference i'll look into it