Shortest Demo Ever!!!
And another Kid Figure as MC...
And another Kid Figure as MC...
- Thread starter Jeevant
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For now waste of space on pc. In future nice game. I will be back after some updates. Btw. Its need someone who will edit text. Work hard!
- Oct 18, 2019
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- Feb 6, 2019
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Has a decent concept for the story and the visuals are good although I think it would have been better without the mc having the face covering. I understand this was just a short demo and its obvious english is not the devs first language so I strongly suggest having it proof read before the actual release as the english used for the dialogue was for lack of a better way to put it quite bad. With proof reading this is something id really enjoy.
- Feb 6, 2019
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The story is a decent concept from what i gathered but i agree the story does need a LOT more explanation.The demo literary is 1 minute long
My opinion so far:
+ The game has audio
- No transparent textbox
- Broken english
- Story makes no sense
I don't review games in an early state, but releasing something like this is a good way to get 1/5 ratings.
As for the user interface/textbox most devs dont really bother with that until they are close to a proper release.
English def needs work.
Posting something like this is a good way to see where you need to improve via comments but it could also back fire by demoralizing the dev. prob woulda been better offering it to a few select people rather than an open post.
I almost reviewed it myself but figured it wouldn't be fair for an early demo.
- Jan 12, 2018
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- Jan 12, 2018
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I think I'm going to start reviewing new games, if the start sucks and they feel it's good enough to release then they are up for some negative or positive feedback.The demo literary is 1 minute long
My opinion so far:
+ The game has audio
- No transparent textbox
- Broken english
- Story makes no sense
I don't review games in an early state, but releasing something like this is a good way to get 1/5 ratings.
- Feb 6, 2019
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providing feedback is important so they can get better but even tho it was obviously not ready for a release imediately giving a low review could demoralize the dev rather than actually help the dev fix it. i want to see devs succeed regardless of the quality of their work not shut them down. they just need nudges in the right direction not a slap to the face. if you drop a low review now your effectively staining the vn for the future. i recommend holding off on reviews until the first actual release.I think I'm going to start reviewing new games, if the start sucks and they feel it's good enough to release then they are up for some negative or positive feedback.
- May 29, 2018
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I literally can't understand the description. It's a "this is why basic grammar is a must" nighmare.
I understand some of the confusion could be translation- this is fine- I'm assuming so because of all the difficutly with pronouns. But as it stands, I have NO idea what this game is about. And it's a demo so I'm expected to purchase it... yeah, no.
- Oct 23, 2017
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I hope it won't be one of those silly games where we fuck every woman we meet with our big dick. we want mad about mc for sex, not npc.
- Sep 1, 2017
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