Bang on analysis of Veda, well done my friend. While obviously the two main girls are Melissa and Abigail, I'd make an argument that Veda (and/or Dani) are 3rd/4th important. I highly enjoy Veda and writing for her because she's so different from the other Love Interests currently. I love this character and she'll be featured quite heavily throughout the story of Wrestling Dynasty.I have to say, even though Mellisa/Abigail interactions with Vincent are heartwarming and the soul of this story, his 2nd scene with Veda outside the hotel at night is the mvp for me.
Just two strangers set apart by age, experience and culture, finding common ground and forming intimacy through conversation. Forced into marriage with an older man who is no longer around, abandoned her medical career to move to the US, saddled with an unambitious geeky son, she is strict, cold, resentful but very very lonely and desperate for a connection. She is honestly the most genuine character in the story.
Please continue those movie nights. I know where you got your inspiration from.
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When I wrote this scene in Chapter 3 (after you haul in the duffel bags for Veda for the first time):very very lonely and desperate for a connection
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Considering this is still an AVN, I was worried that players would think "Oh she just wants sex or something, here we go..." when she said "Leaving so soon?" but it's truly exactly what you said: an overwhelming loneliness and desperation to connect with someone, which is the "considering what's going on here" meaning.
The movie nights will definitely return! I actually have the full, complete script for The Lakeside Butcher 2 that I'll release on Patreon (if only I could render the full movie, but alas, it was taking too long lol). I can't wait for The Lakeside Butcher 3
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