Another thing all those complaining there is too much going on or too many girls... hell no. This isn't just a cookie cutter slow burner, earn head pats, lewdity then the obscene holding hands scene.
This vn doesn't need anything taken away. Too many girls? Don't date all them or don't be a baby maker. Too much happening well maybe find another vn as there are literally hundreds that crawl slowly story wise.
I am fine with all the girls, I like nearly all of them, and I don't want any removed. On the other hand, I wouldn't mind terribly if Katie, Tia, or Valerie started hanging out at another basketball player's house for a change, but to each his own.
Maybe it is just my own quirk, but I like the more emotionally intimate scenes, not necessarily sex scenes, just getting to know a character better, over a nice date or two, and over a meaningful discussion. WVM has had a lot of that, it is just that this update, in particular, was more assembly-line style, with one thing after another. Just when I started to get into a particular scene with a particular character, bam, someone else wants to talk to me. And I am probably way in the minority here, but I really was turned off by
the sex-assembly line scene. And the butt scene, was cringingly bad. Maybe it was supposed to be awkward and unpleasant? Only BD knows. Just my 2 cents.
Also, I know it is nitpicking, but Zoe and Zoelle? Really? Come on Braindrop. Use an online random name generator if you have to.
And, I know it has been repeated to death, but Cedey is fine as a reasonable though somewhat childish nickname to be spoken by an adult, but Brubru is way over the line. It is like nails on a chalkboard. I can barely type it, it is so nauseating. For those old enough to remember Seinfeld, I have one word: Schmoopie. Same thing.
Despite my few good-natured critiques above, I had a lot of fun playing WVM this update, as always. I particularly loved
learning more about the MC's childhood from Wendy, and finding out that all those visions of Stacey as a girl were real. I had been wondering about that for the last year, why the MC kept seeing a young Stacey look-alike as his sister, when it ended up being Cedar. I was quite confused, and I am glad it all makes sense now. The memories of Wendy and later Stacey were great to relive as the MC. I really felt sorry for Stacey having to fruitlessly weight for her friend to return as a child, and I hope the MC can make it up to her in time.
Plus, any update with lots of Natalie and especially Harper content is a winner. We just need more Veronica and Vanessa next!
