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OfficiallyGames

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The best writing? You must have some pretty low standards.

MC is god. Every girl instantly loves MC and agrees to share him with 200 other women. MC starts creepy fucking cult with matching yellow uniforms. The writing is the worst part about this game lmao.
Oh my god a porn game where the MC gets to fuck loads of girls and theyre OKAY WITH IT? OMG how awful! Tottally an outrage, this idea and concept is totally orginal and insane for a site full of porn games!

Also cheerleaders and students wearing matching uniforms.... ridiculous... totally unrealistic. Matching uniforms in a place of education and sports!?
 

HornyyPussy

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The best writing? You must have some pretty low standards.

MC is god. Every girl instantly loves MC and agrees to share him with 200 other women. MC starts creepy fucking cult with matching yellow uniforms. The writing is the worst part about this game lmao.
Oh no, a feelgood VN without much drama, the writing must suck! The girls fall for the MV because he's a good looking guy with a huge heart. He treats them with respect so no, it's not that farfetched that they fall for him.......cult my ass......

And as stated, this is a feelgood VN, it's supposed to be "easy" without much clutter and just be fun. If not for you then no problem, just move on to next VN.


Sounds like it.....
 

brorpag

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The best writing? You must have some pretty low standards.

MC is god. Every girl instantly loves MC and agrees to share him with 200 other women. MC starts creepy fucking cult with matching yellow uniforms. The writing is the worst part about this game lmao.
Yeah it did feel kinda shitty writing when the girls waited in line to be fucked, i mean seriously?
 

Vile_Mage

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The best writing? You must have some pretty low standards.

MC is god. Every girl instantly loves MC and agrees to share him with 200 other women. MC starts creepy fucking cult with matching yellow uniforms. The writing is the worst part about this game lmao.
But yeah the writing is the worst part yeah yeah of course anything you say oh you great master of all VNs. Are you mad bro? It's so hard to understand the obvious? We have an ADULT VN with harem element and cheerleaders, so we have girls who fall for the MC and matching outfits! But no lets shit talk about it cause we don't like to have a lot of girls with great models and great storyline!
 

Badjourasmix

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The best writing? You must have some pretty low standards.

MC is god. Every girl instantly loves MC and agrees to share him with 200 other women. MC starts creepy fucking cult with matching yellow uniforms. The writing is the worst part about this game lmao.
Oh no all the girls like the mc in a harem game, I never saw that coming... Is it unrealistic? Yeah sure but at the end of the day it's a harem adult game, what were you expecting? If the writing is that bad why do you even bother coming to this thread? I am sure you can find another game that will fulfill your obvious superior intellectual needs.
 

Pidgeons

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First time I ever played this, I went the cheating route because I want to bone everyone in sight as soon as possible, but the story made that feel awful, and also pointless. I stopped around the time that Jaimie gave the green light for fucking anything and everything that moves and played the game without cheating, and quite enjoyed it.

Tried the cheating route again for this update just to make sure there wasn't something I'm missing--and while there are technically a few women that get skipped, seeing some of them pop up in the story anyway leads me to believe that we'll get around to those anyway. So I still don't see a point in cheating. Plus, Shauna regretting going too fast in the beginning kills the entire fun out of cheating with her in the first place, in fact I'd much prefer to avoid that conversation. So apparently I want to be a "good guy" in this one. Sort of. The main character still says some things that are too good for my taste. Some people need their eyes eaten out of their skull and the MC is just too nice to admit that sometimes.

Never liked the Natalie makeover, but it wasn't a big deal. I only slightly preferred the old look. Rainn deciding she doesn't want to walk around in those cool-ass contacts and nose ring all the time is a tragedy, I really like the look. I am not a fan of the Ruby redesign, I thought she looked really cool before and now she's just ok.

I love the way Willabelle looks, especially her eyes. I'm going to cry if that ever gets changed. I could have sworn there was a sex scene with Tia on the non-cheating route a lot sooner than the party, but it could be my imagination. I mean, it has been awhile.

I have mixed feelings about Millie; Oh she pisses me off. If there's one thing I can't stand, it's someone who tries to control full-grown adults while projecting their own problems and what they would have wanted for themselves. On the other hand, holy shit Millie is hot. So I'll give her a chance.

Who's the heavy chick that's into jogging and super-shy? Was her name Carly? I like her. I think she's hot. I'm not one of those people that are so into body positivity that I'll argue against a morbidly obese person losing weight just because I think they're cute. People like that do exist but in those cases I don't think the weight's actually a factor and a person really should strive to be a lot healthier than that, but honestly I don't think Carly is anywhere close to that category. Will she look better if she loses weight, or will she lose her fabulous curves? I have no idea, but I hope she isn't just losing the weight just because of looks because in that department she's fine.

Thought of a solution for the fact that I find Willow/Cedar hot and don't like having prohibited girls in a VN: I an going to PRETEND. Problem solved!

That last-minute BS news thing with that "Tip" prick really got me riled up. What was the team called, the Briars? I hope MC gets out on that court and eats that arrogant basketball player's eyes out of his fucking sku--I mean, I hope he gets out there and kicks their asses. In Basketball. And not at all with violence.
 
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ImperialD

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It can get confusing. I often load all my unread threads at once and go down the line. Sometimes the way names are repeated in so many games (Jessicas, Alices, Rachels, Jades, and the rest), It's easy to forget which game they're talking about. I often have to look above to the URL to make sure.
thats why i use their default names ;)
alot less problems when talking about the girls :love:
 

Aioto

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Thought of a solution for the fact that I find Willow/Cedar hot and don't like having prohibited girls in a VN: I an going to PRETEND. Problem solved!
Pretend what? That she's not the sister? That she's not hot? That your MC is not with her beacuse you chose to not enter that route? What are you going to pretend?
 
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Oh my god a porn game where the MC gets to fuck loads of girls and theyre OKAY WITH IT? OMG how awful! Tottally an outrage, this idea and concept is totally orginal and insane for a site full of porn games!

Also cheerleaders and students wearing matching uniforms.... ridiculous... totally unrealistic. Matching uniforms in a place of education and sports!?
I can see a lot of you already drank the koolaid. I have no problem with harem games and never said I did, but praising the writing as if it's something special is hilarious to me. I'm not talking about their matching school uniforms, I'm talking about their plain yellow outfits they all wear together while they watch MC play video games with giant creepy smiles on their faces. I never said I didn't like the game, some of the models are attractive and I can fap to it, so it does it's job. But let's not pretend like this is winning a Pulitzer any time soon, plenty of games on this site have much better writing than this.
 

HornyyPussy

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I can see a lot of you already drank the koolaid. I have no problem with harem games and never said I did, but praising the writing as if it's something special is hilarious to me. I'm not talking about their matching school uniforms, I'm talking about their plain yellow outfits they all wear together while they watch MC play video games with giant creepy smiles on their faces. I never said I didn't like the game, some of the models are attractive and I can fap to it, so it does it's job. But let's not pretend like this is winning a Pulitzer any time soon, plenty of games on this site have much better writing than this.
Yes, the people who don't agree with you must have drank the "koolaid", always a good way to make yourself sound important and everyone else is wrong. You forgot "we are white knighting the dev" and other classics!

What creepy smiles? They smile when they see the guy they love/like, big whoop!

No one said it was pulitzer material but obviously many here like the writing a lot but it's we who are wrong and you are right, correct?
 

Construct

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I feel like a lot of people need to take a step back and review their attitude towards people not echoing what everyone is saying in this thread. It‘s clear that the writing doesn‘t appeal to everyone, but as was said, it gets the job done. Jumping down someone’s throat, because they find the writing to be the weakest part of this vn is an overreaction in my opinion. It doesn‘t need to be said that the delivery of critique in a civil manner already goes a long way. Countering critique with, „if you don‘t like it, leave.“ does not add to the discussion at all. Likewise in an opinionated topic such as this, there is no wrong or right. It‘s more like „I like this more vs. I don‘t like this as much“
 

HornyyPussy

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I feel like a lot of people need to take a step back and review their attitude towards people not echoing what everyone is saying in this thread. It‘s clear that the writing doesn‘t appeal to everyone, but as was said, it gets the job done. Jumping down someone’s throat, because they find the writing to be the weakest part of this vn is an overreaction in my opinion. It doesn‘t need to be said that the delivery of critique in a civil manner already goes a long way. Countering critique with, „if you don‘t like it, leave.“ does not add to the discussion at all.
I have no problem what so ever with people not liking the writing. What I do HAVE a problem with is people who is condescending to others that don't agree with them and starting with the "koolaid" and "white knighting" bullshit. People like different things (thank god for that!) and discussing them is fun as long as some participating parties isn't condescending to others.
 

Spfjolietjake

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I feel like a lot of people need to take a step back and review their attitude towards people not echoing what everyone is saying in this thread. It‘s clear that the writing doesn‘t appeal to everyone, but as was said, it gets the job done. Jumping down someone’s throat, because they find the writing to be the weakest part of this vn is an overreaction in my opinion. It doesn‘t need to be said that the delivery of critique in a civil manner already goes a long way. Countering critique with, „if you don‘t like it, leave.“ does not add to the discussion at all. Likewise in an opinionated topic such as this, there is no wrong or right. It‘s more like „I like this more vs. I don‘t like this as much“
I missed the throat jumping... harsh words were used to describe the writing and strong words disagreed with them. When you start off insulting people that like something you don't it's to be expected to get some backlash.

That is how a forum is supposed to be. Posters strongly stating their opinions.
 
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