- Sep 20, 2017
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So as somebody who only plays a new update when a whole day is completed I was "tricked" to play this update because i read that this update would be "Day8 & Day9". Well didn't really played out this way but there was quite a bit I want to talk about.
First of all: last time I played an update we ended in a cell so this cliffhanger is the first I want to talk about.
To be honest this whole situation went over quite a bit "too smooth" (at least for my taste). We won't face any consequences with law (whitch is fair since it was self-defense). So my main issue is the fact that there are no injuries which restrict our MC in playing Basketball. He got beaten with a bat, received several kicks and hits and still all he got are a few bruises? No cracked rib? His shoulder is perfectly fine? Also he beat the shit out of Ryker but his hands also are perfectly fine? Well the girls joked about him beeing Superman to only having bruises after this and to be honest he has to be
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Willabelle lays everything to our MCs feet (his own team to manage his life, new players and a new coach for the team and a new structure within the university [which is ok and not without reason but yeah like I said "too smooth"])
Also with this the Antagonists are pretty much dealt with (there might be a comeback or new ones but yeah at least not at the moment).
That beeing said let's come to the good stuff (a.k.a. Girls and Women):
Two readheaded angels: Mabel and Aubrey.
Last but certainly not least: Leslie
Also nice jab at Patreon with Talis monologue
. But I have to say that the sponsors (or patreons) would give our MC even more money if there would be incest.
First of all: last time I played an update we ended in a cell so this cliffhanger is the first I want to talk about.
To be honest this whole situation went over quite a bit "too smooth" (at least for my taste). We won't face any consequences with law (whitch is fair since it was self-defense). So my main issue is the fact that there are no injuries which restrict our MC in playing Basketball. He got beaten with a bat, received several kicks and hits and still all he got are a few bruises? No cracked rib? His shoulder is perfectly fine? Also he beat the shit out of Ryker but his hands also are perfectly fine? Well the girls joked about him beeing Superman to only having bruises after this and to be honest he has to be
Willabelle lays everything to our MCs feet (his own team to manage his life, new players and a new coach for the team and a new structure within the university [which is ok and not without reason but yeah like I said "too smooth"])
Also with this the Antagonists are pretty much dealt with (there might be a comeback or new ones but yeah at least not at the moment).
That beeing said let's come to the good stuff (a.k.a. Girls and Women):
Two readheaded angels: Mabel and Aubrey.
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Last but certainly not least: Leslie
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Also nice jab at Patreon with Talis monologue
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