VN Ren'Py WVM [S2 Ch.1 Ep.13 B7] [Braindrop]

[byaaahh]

Can someone give me the CliffsNotes on what we actually learned plot wise from the Dahlia scene?

From what I remember:

Mason was a drug dealer who got a harem by introducing and feeding their drug habit
Out of all the kids he fathered, MC was the only male
Mason fled with MC to Michigan(?) where he had friends, Dahlia and Iris went with Mason to protect MC
"Friends" of Mason were people who run a club that drug powerful people for blackmail
Mason gets drugged by one of the "friends" as payback because he fucked with his niece
Dahlia/Iris started working for the club to pay off debts and watch over MC
MC was locked in an apartment alone most of the time, stops talking to Dahlia
MC sneaks out when he saw Azel sad in the park
MC gives Azel a rose, Dahlia witnesses it and is heartbroken because she feels she's lost him
Club owners started looking for a person to watch MC while Dahlia/Iris worked
Dahlia tried to get Riley, a woman who was going to adopt MC, club refused, then Azel was recommended and selected
MC got sick, under the guise of getting treatment Mason planned to flee to Egypt
Car accident happens, Mason and Riley die, Dahlia and MC critically injured
Dahlia spends a year in a coma, MC wakes after a month
Club owner brings people into the room to decide who will adopt, MC only shows positive reaction to Azel
Dahlia's family decide to pull the plug after a year of medical bills, which Iris was helping with
Dahlia starts breathing on her own after the machine is turned off, 3 days later she regains consciousness
Dahlia moves back to Gilford to run a club for the previously mentioned club owner
Dahlia bumps into Rachael at her club, they get drunk and Dahlia goes through Rachael's phone for her fixer info
It was a ruse by Rachael, she never had her work phone and she wants the drug ring to shut up shop
Rachael uses Dahlia to blackmail the club into cleaning up, Dahlia reveals the plan to the club owner
We find out that club owner was Masons mother, MC paternal grandmother who wants MC to join the family business
We also learn Kimmy's parent were in the car wreck

I started teetering off towards the end because it was so tiresome and convoluted, I just wanted it to end. Someone feel free to mention anything I missed.

 

[Rexultara]

From what I remember:

Mason was a drug dealer who got a harem by introducing and feeding their drug habit
Out of all the kids he fathered, MC was the only male
Mason fled with MC to Michigan(?) where he had friends, Dahlia and Iris went with Mason to protect MC
"Friends" of Mason were people who run a club that drug powerful people for blackmail
Mason gets drugged by one of the "friends" as payback because he fucked with his niece
Dahlia/Iris started working for the club to pay off debts and watch over MC
MC was locked in an apartment alone most of the time, stops talking to Dahlia
MC sneaks out when he saw Azel sad in the park
MC gives Azel a rose, Dahlia witnesses it and is heartbroken because she feels she's lost him
Club owners started looking for a person to watch MC while Dahlia/Iris worked
Dahlia tried to get Riley, a woman who was going to adopt MC, club refused, then Azel was recommended and selected
MC got sick, under the guise of getting treatment Mason planned to flee to Egypt
Car accident happens, Mason and Riley die, Dahlia and MC critically injured
Dahlia spends a year in a coma, MC wakes after a month
Club owner brings people into the room to decide who will adopt, MC only shows positive reaction to Azel
Dahlia's family decide to pull the plug after a year of medical bills, which Iris was helping with
Dahlia starts breathing on her own after the machine is turned off, 3 days later she regains consciousness
Dahlia moves back to Gilford to run a club for the previously mentioned club owner
Dahlia bumps into Rachael at her club, they get drunk and Dahlia goes through Rachael's phone for her fixer info
It was a ruse by Rachael, she never had her work phone and she wants the drug ring to shut up shop
Rachael uses Dahlia to blackmail the club into cleaning up, Dahlia reveals the plan to the club owner
We find out that club owner was Masons mother, MC paternal grandmother who wants MC to join the family business
We also learn Kimmy's parent were in the car wreck

I started teetering off towards the end because it was so tiresome and convoluted, I just wanted it to end. Someone feel free to mention anything I missed.

Spoiler: The Rhyker connection

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[Akabakka]

From what I remember:

Mason was a drug dealer who got a harem by introducing and feeding their drug habit
Out of all the kids he fathered, MC was the only male
Mason fled with MC to Michigan(?) where he had friends, Dahlia and Iris went with Mason to protect MC
"Friends" of Mason were people who run a club that drug powerful people for blackmail
Mason gets drugged by one of the "friends" as payback because he fucked with his niece
Dahlia/Iris started working for the club to pay off debts and watch over MC
MC was locked in an apartment alone most of the time, stops talking to Dahlia
MC sneaks out when he saw Azel sad in the park
MC gives Azel a rose, Dahlia witnesses it and is heartbroken because she feels she's lost him
Club owners started looking for a person to watch MC while Dahlia/Iris worked
Dahlia tried to get Riley, a woman who was going to adopt MC, club refused, then Azel was recommended and selected
MC got sick, under the guise of getting treatment Mason planned to flee to Egypt
Car accident happens, Mason and Riley die, Dahlia and MC critically injured
Dahlia spends a year in a coma, MC wakes after a month
Club owner brings people into the room to decide who will adopt, MC only shows positive reaction to Azel
Dahlia's family decide to pull the plug after a year of medical bills, which Iris was helping with
Dahlia starts breathing on her own after the machine is turned off, 3 days later she regains consciousness
Dahlia moves back to Gilford to run a club for the previously mentioned club owner
Dahlia bumps into Rachael at her club, they get drunk and Dahlia goes through Rachael's phone for her fixer info
It was a ruse by Rachael, she never had her work phone and she wants the drug ring to shut up shop
Rachael uses Dahlia to blackmail the club into cleaning up, Dahlia reveals the plan to the club owner
We find out that club owner was Masons mother, MC paternal grandmother who wants MC to join the family business
We also learn Kimmy's parent were in the car wreck

I started teetering off towards the end because it was so tiresome and convoluted, I just wanted it to end. Someone feel free to mention anything I missed.

WTF, this is the kind of stuff and summary you could send to a dev or writer, when he's gone too far, and off the deep end. The kind of visualization to smack him back to reality.

 

[TylerSteel]

Thank you. I was trying to follow "the story" but with all the uploading fun, I was just lost on what was actually happening.

 

[Bobbycanfly]

I'm still convinced the original plan was for most of MC's love interest in WVM to be his half-sisters.

 

[Krakthunder]

whats with this lame update? took like +4 months just for him to make a PREVIEW of the jazmine date? lmao

 

[Koushiro]

whats with this lame update? took like +4 months just for him to make a PREVIEW of the jazmine date? lmao

Read several of the posts above yours. The majority of the update was the rest of the Dahlia plot scene from two updates ago. The Jasmine date was about 30% of the update.

 

[Irgendwie Irgendwo]

Just made it through the conversation with Dahlia. First of all, why does Younger Dahlia look like Cedar? Did he run out of face model variations? And second, what the ever lasting F? This info dump did not make much sense, and felt like throwing pairs of connected darts randomly at a board to link up as many people as possible and connect them to the MC. (Not sure if I used the right words, but you get the picture.) At this point I am convinced that either the Rich Yacht Bi-yatches or the Rainbow Girls are all MC's half sisters. Knowing BD, probably both.

 

[Ashoolar1989]

Just made it through the conversation with Dahlia. First of all, why does Younger Dahlia look like Cedar? Did he run out of face model variations? And second, what the ever lasting F? This info dump did not make much sense, and felt like throwing pairs of connected darts randomly at a board to link up as many people as possible and connect them to the MC. (Not sure if I used the right words, but you get the picture.) At this point I am convinced that either the Rich Yacht Bi-yatches or the Rainbow Girls are all MC's half sisters. Knowing BD, probably both.

me playing the update......daliah kisses me "Girl im gonna bang you so hard you GONNA need that wheelchair!!!"

 

[hgk15]

fast and furious update

 

[BigTyson]

fast and furious update

I am pretty sure there was more lewd scenes in the last fast and furious movie.

 

[Ptah]

In the beginning WVM was a porn game.. but for some reason BD decided to add story to it...the whole get as many women as possible pregnant is not exactly the best story...

It's quite the other way around, WVM was a game about a "Gary Stu" with fucked up childhood and his ups and downs in a story around basketball. Nowadays is a cheap Mexican soap opera full of mongoloid plot sex... I would say, is more of a "porn game"(nukige) now than never before.

 

[RegAdd]

From what I remember:


We also learn Kimmy's parent were in the car wreck

It was Katie and Ryker's parents in the wreck. Riley (MC's intended adoptive mother) was their mom. Kimmy's uncle was killed since he was driving the truck that hit them and she was also injured.
Also pretty sure none of this was initially intended and this was just the new status quo which the S1 rewrite should agree with.

 

[Niuul]

It was Katie and Ryker's parents in the wreck. Riley (MC's intended adoptive mother) was their mom. Kimmy's uncle was killed since he was driving the truck that hit them and she was also injured.
Also pretty sure none of this was initially intended and this was just the new status quo which the S1 rewrite should agree with.

The S1 rewrite 2 years in the making, that's seen zero progress. Anyways...

I can only hope that when the Sun is about to flicker out BD will upload the S1 rework that gets rid of the "cheating" plotline that went nowhere and the asinine plot of the MC being a breeding horse that also kinda went nowhere and was forgotten about. Especially if the dev wants to continue along with this mafia-esque or w/e plotline.

 

[RegAdd]

The S1 rewrite 2 years in the making, that's seen zero progress. Anyways...

Yep. "Should" and "will" are two different things. Doubt any of us actually expect the rework to manifest. What would be destructively hilarious is if all the criticism of this convoluted mess of a plot he's currently pushing hurt his feefees and he decided to create another rework that retcons all of this to something else yet again.

 

[Reniere]

The S1 rewrite 2 years in the making, that's seen zero progress. Anyways...

You know the most funny thing about all of this...
This simple sentence well " excuse " he gave us. about the rework or remake whichever the S1 redo falls under.
is the reason we all swallowed his bs stories was because the S1 would take most of the time,
but with time. We all found out the S1 "rework or remake" was just a excuse.

 

[KiryuKazuma095]

whats with this lame update? took like +4 months just for him to make a PREVIEW of the jazmine date? lmao

I doubt he spent +4 months just for that, he probably finished that in a week and spend the rest of the time with the Daliah dialogue...

 

[KiryuKazuma095]

Yep. "Should" and "will" are two different things. Doubt any of us actually expect the rework to manifest. What would be destructively hilarious is if all the criticism of this convoluted mess of a plot he's currently pushing hurt his feefees and he decided to create another rework that retcons all of this to something else yet again.

Well to be honest with you i don't see the point of that , if he did not like it he should have stop it on the beginning and remake it in the first few updates...Instead he had to change Emiko's face 2or more times...And make Elizabeth from redhead ,blonde and redhead again

 

[Semak34]

Has anyone counted how many LIs (or at least, lewdable girls) Mr SquareFace has?
At this point, more than a power fantasy, this is a bad trip fantasy.

 

[Chillout1984]

Has anyone counted how many LIs (or at least, lewdable girls) Mr SquareFace has?
At this point, more than a power fantasy, this is a bad trip fantasy.
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And it seems not even one of them who isn't going for a baby (like Rachael) doesn't take the pill, because otherwise I'm sure there would be more pregnant girls.