Okay, this was amazing, besides what I said earlier about character consistency and the fact that the Mc doesn't know how to fight and let himself become surrounded even though he had options it was amazing, and have so much content, and so many conversations need to happen, another thing that bothered me though Why didn't the MC just tell Ryker that his sister had taken Charles somewhere? it wouldn't really change the scene, but I really don't understand why he didn't but yeah I thought it was a pretty great update and totally worth the wait, although I did think that the dark turn was unnecessary, let's see what happens.
Also I don't trust the cop, not even the one that seems to not be a super bad one, just no, also Katie(Ryker's sister), never trusted her but what happened has put her on a watch list.