VN Ren'Py WVM [S2 Ch.1 Ep.13 F] [Braindrop]

[Aioto]

not that it doesn't make her less un-trustworthy

Seriously with that quadruple negative?
Simplify it dude, remove a couple of "not"s and make it easier for us that aren't quite proficient with the language.
Example: "not that it makes her less trustworthy", I believe that would be equivalent to your original sentence.
Maybe replace the first one with "although" as well seems a good way to do it.
The whole "not that it doesn't" is definitely overkill.
Or you could simply state that the fact that Tia only shows up in the bathroom on day 9 if you accepted her previous advance makes trust go down. Or is it "doesn't make trust go down"?
I honestly don't know.
I keep looking at that sentence and thinking but I can't make heads or tails of it.

 

[Oghmios1337]

dont forget about Lees eyes at the bowling they looked fucked up and with him being involved with Damien he could also be involved with the drugs too

all of their eyes looked fucked up to an extent because of all the excessive yellow lighting

 

[The Krypt Angel]

dont forget about Lees eyes at the bowling they looked fucked up and with him being involved with Damien he could also be involved with the drugs too

that was a lighting fuckup on BD's part not some sinister omen

 

[The Krypt Angel]

I really love the new Patreon Poll. Seems like something I would make for sure. At this current point in the story, which of these characters do you trust the LEAST? The options are Tia, Katie, Mackey/Lee, Willabelle, and Lauren.

Of course I voted for Katie, but I would have liked to see an all of the above option for this one. I really don't trust any of them. Well maybe Mackey/Lee as they have done nothing to indicate they should not be trusted yet. I am surprised that they are winning this poll.

• Katie: She is related to Charles and Ryker both of which have caused issues for the MC and the team. She came onto the MC way stronger than almost any other girl in the game (more on this later). She did not even bother to say who she was either. When the MC asks about Ryker she basically blows him off saying that he is nothing to worry about as well. She was with Charles when he was super drugged out of his mind too, which tells me she may also work for the drug dealer too.
• Tia: She came on the strongest to the MC with almost no fliter at all. She shows up at some really awkward times too and basically just tries to force her way into having sex with the MC without a payout. She knew about Charles secret shower which I found odd, during the big reveal about Cedar she brings up having sex again, she was spying on the MC and Skye in the locker room. Then when we meet her again she basically throws herself at him again and goes back on the condom thing. Something is not right with this girl.
• Mackey/Lee: Other than them both being on the team with Ryker last year there is nothing that is a red flag to me. Sure Lee looked like he might be messing around with Damien in the locker room, but they both helped out in the bowling alley so we are told. The other minor thing is neither show up much for practice so I guess that is something too.
• Willabelle: I am sorry for this one but she runs a cult (don't tell me it is not a cult because it is), she has to have multiple people tell me to trust her (this makes me want to trust someone even less), she did but didn't know what Ryker was up to but let him mess with the MC. All this seems a little odd to me and there are red flags. I want to believe she is good and has the MC interests in mind, but I just can't yet
• Lauren: Well I don't have much here but she knows a lot about the MC and his sister. She could have easily passed that information onto Belle. I know she helped the MC and Cedar reunite but is everything as it seems or not only time will tell. One of my first conspiracy theories was around Lauren feeding information to Willow to convince the MC that she is his sister. Hopefully that is not the case but it could be.

I've always felt out of all yer "suspects" yer reason for being suspect of Tia was the lamest one. Her only real crime here is being horny as fuck if that's reason enough to mistrust her then we can't trust ANYONE

 

[Skummy Ecchi]

Tia is just a strong woman who wants a strong man that she approves, very demanding and dominant, but only because she's an all star athlete with an appetite that can only be satiated with someone she approves of-which is impossible for her in WVM. She was waiting for you in the showers because she knew you'd be there so she could get some god damn action, but no she has to keep getting blocked too and she's getting irritated.

Fuckin love Tia!

 

[Spfjolietjake]

I really love the new Patreon Poll. Seems like something I would make for sure. At this current point in the story, which of these characters do you trust the LEAST? The options are Tia, Katie, Mackey/Lee, Willabelle, and Lauren.

Of course I voted for Katie, but I would have liked to see an all of the above option for this one. I really don't trust any of them. Well maybe Mackey/Lee as they have done nothing to indicate they should not be trusted yet. I am surprised that they are winning this poll.

• Katie: She is related to Charles and Ryker both of which have caused issues for the MC and the team. She came onto the MC way stronger than almost any other girl in the game (more on this later). She did not even bother to say who she was either. When the MC asks about Ryker she basically blows him off saying that he is nothing to worry about as well. She was with Charles when he was super drugged out of his mind too, which tells me she may also work for the drug dealer too.
• Tia: She came on the strongest to the MC with almost no fliter at all. She shows up at some really awkward times too and basically just tries to force her way into having sex with the MC without a payout. She knew about Charles secret shower which I found odd, during the big reveal about Cedar she brings up having sex again, she was spying on the MC and Skye in the locker room. Then when we meet her again she basically throws herself at him again and goes back on the condom thing. Something is not right with this girl.
• Mackey/Lee: Other than them both being on the team with Ryker last year there is nothing that is a red flag to me. Sure Lee looked like he might be messing around with Damien in the locker room, but they both helped out in the bowling alley so we are told. The other minor thing is neither show up much for practice so I guess that is something too.
• Willabelle: I am sorry for this one but she runs a cult (don't tell me it is not a cult because it is), she has to have multiple people tell me to trust her (this makes me want to trust someone even less), she did but didn't know what Ryker was up to but let him mess with the MC. All this seems a little odd to me and there are red flags. I want to believe she is good and has the MC interests in mind, but I just can't yet
• Lauren: Well I don't have much here but she knows a lot about the MC and his sister. She could have easily passed that information onto Belle. I know she helped the MC and Cedar reunite but is everything as it seems or not only time will tell. One of my first conspiracy theories was around Lauren feeding information to Willow to convince the MC that she is his sister. Hopefully that is not the case but it could be.

Totally Katie is the one I trust least. Then the boys then Tia then Lauren then willabee. I hope some kind soul will post the final results

 

[cakeny]

I really love the new Patreon Poll. Seems like something I would make for sure. At this current point in the story, which of these characters do you trust the LEAST? The options are Tia, Katie, Mackey/Lee, Willabelle, and Lauren.

Of course I voted for Katie, but I would have liked to see an all of the above option for this one. I really don't trust any of them. Well maybe Mackey/Lee as they have done nothing to indicate they should not be trusted yet. I am surprised that they are winning this poll.

• Katie: She is related to Charles and Ryker both of which have caused issues for the MC and the team. She came onto the MC way stronger than almost any other girl in the game (more on this later). She did not even bother to say who she was either. When the MC asks about Ryker she basically blows him off saying that he is nothing to worry about as well. She was with Charles when he was super drugged out of his mind too, which tells me she may also work for the drug dealer too.
• Tia: She came on the strongest to the MC with almost no fliter at all. She shows up at some really awkward times too and basically just tries to force her way into having sex with the MC without a payout. She knew about Charles secret shower which I found odd, during the big reveal about Cedar she brings up having sex again, she was spying on the MC and Skye in the locker room. Then when we meet her again she basically throws herself at him again and goes back on the condom thing. Something is not right with this girl.
• Mackey/Lee: Other than them both being on the team with Ryker last year there is nothing that is a red flag to me. Sure Lee looked like he might be messing around with Damien in the locker room, but they both helped out in the bowling alley so we are told. The other minor thing is neither show up much for practice so I guess that is something too.
• Willabelle: I am sorry for this one but she runs a cult (don't tell me it is not a cult because it is), she has to have multiple people tell me to trust her (this makes me want to trust someone even less), she did but didn't know what Ryker was up to but let him mess with the MC. All this seems a little odd to me and there are red flags. I want to believe she is good and has the MC interests in mind, but I just can't yet
• Lauren: Well I don't have much here but she knows a lot about the MC and his sister. She could have easily passed that information onto Belle. I know she helped the MC and Cedar reunite but is everything as it seems or not only time will tell. One of my first conspiracy theories was around Lauren feeding information to Willow to convince the MC that she is his sister. Hopefully that is not the case but it could be.

Tia

 

[Krynh]

not that it makes her less trustworthy

If I said that I would be implying that I thought she was trustworthy (and I don't).

 

[Uncle Loco]

I've always felt out of all yer "suspects" yer reason for being suspect of Tia was the lamest one. Her only real crime here is being horny as fuck if that's reason enough to mistrust her then we can't trust ANYONE

My main reason was knowing about Charles secret shower, like she has been there before maybe with him. Yuck. I always thought she was working with or for him.

 

[Uncle Loco]

Totally Katie is the one I trust least. Then the boys then Tia then Lauren then willabee. I hope some kind soul will post the final results

I am sure someone will even it it is not me (My mind is on other things {major construction at my house, and writing} which is why I have not been here as much lately so I do tend to forget things).

 

[The Dark Moonshine]

Tia

Great Poll, I'm Tia team too!

 

[BTLD]

My main reason was knowing about Charles secret shower, like she has been there before maybe with him. Yuck. I always thought she was working with or for him.

"like she has been there before maybe with him."
That's....conjecture...first of all you have no way of knowing that since ...there's no hint of it...
second of all she gave us the reason of why/how she knows...

 

[Uncle Loco]

"like she has been there before maybe with him."
That's....conjecture...first of all you have no way of knowing that since ...there's no hint of it...
second of all she gave us the reason of why/how she knows...

If I don't trust her why would I believe how she knew about the shower. Plus if you had sex with Charles would you admit to it? I know I wouldn't.

For me trust must be earned or don't put anything out there that I find might be suspicious. There are a lot of other characters in the game that I do not fully trust, and everyone of them had to do something to make me trust them or they stay on the list. Even some of the characters we should trust I am still not 100% sold on.

 

[BTLD]

If I don't trust her why would I believe how she knew about the shower. Plus if you had sex with Charles would you admit to it? I know I wouldn't.

For me trust must be earned or don't put anything out there that I find might be suspicious. There are a lot of other characters in the game that I do not fully trust, and everyone of them had to do something to make me trust them or they stay on the list. Even some of the characters we should trust I am still not 100% sold on.

From my point of view at the moment there are no reasons not to trust her....not saying there are reasons to trust her ...for Tia only thing I can see right now is neutral...
I mean I'm not saying you/anyone else needs to trust her but there are not only 2 possibilities trust or not there's also neutral...like the US Justice System...innocent untill proven guilty and after reaching a conclusion guilty or not you can trust or not that';s what I'm advocating for Tia at least...because like I said she has given me no reason to be distrustful of her..what she said about the shower can as well be true.

 

[Uncle Loco]

From my point of view at the moment there are no reasons not to trust her....not saying there are reasons to trust her ...for Tia only thing I can see right now is neutral...
I mean I'm not saying you/anyone else needs to trust her but there are not only 2 possibilities trust or not there's also neutral...like the US Justice System...innocent untill proven guilty and after reaching a conclusion guilty or not you can trust or not that';s what I'm advocating for Tia at least...because like I said she has given me no reason to be distrustful of her..what she said about the shower can as well be true.

Oh yeah I get where you are coming from this is just a me thing, you guys know how crazy I get with this stuff. I have so many hand written and typed notes about little things from this game. I am totally into looking at all the details.

I like to look for clues read between the lines and trust no one (well the only ones I trust fully are Azel, Jamie, and Shauna). Everyone else I had doubts on, but some have really come to save the day like Stacy, Wendy, Cedar, Rachael, Skye, and Ayden. Some have put so much trust in the MC it is hard not to trust them like Bailey, Zoe, Penny, Kimmy and many more. Others have given me no reason to trust or not trust like Ruby, and Emiko. Then we have those I want to trust but are close to someone I can't trust like Jasmine, Lee, Mackey. Some I want to trust but know I shouldn't like Damien. I can make a case (maybe not a strong one) for everyone in the game why they should not be trusted except for Maybe Jamie she is the only one I feel can be trusted 100% without a shadow of a doubt. I mean look how she reacted once Liz lied on her behalf.

 

[DA22]

From my point of view at the moment there are no reasons not to trust her....not saying there are reasons to trust her ...for Tia only thing I can see right now is neutral...
I mean I'm not saying you/anyone else needs to trust her but there are not only 2 possibilities trust or not there's also neutral...like the US Justice System...innocent untill proven guilty and after reaching a conclusion guilty or not you can trust or not that';s what I'm advocating for Tia at least...because like I said she has given me no reason to be distrustful of her..what she said about the shower can as well be true.

You can also say that the neutral position is a slight distrust until you get to know someone better. Like I will not immediately trust a stranger when he tells me he is an expert in finances or gambling and would like to invest my last dollar.

Now if Tia used that shower before with someone it would be way more likely be with Ryker as with Charles, still shows some bad taste but after our introduction to her thinking she is a lady with quite a strong sexual drive makes sense, so she could just have been horny and chose wrong guy.

 

[csmk14]

I have no problem with strong women being aggressive about sex, if I did I would have turned down Rachel or Tia the first time! That said I ALWAYS turn down Alexis, and Katie, except the 1 time just to see. I am weary of Katie, getting stalker vibes from Alexis, but Something about Tia gnaws at me, her attempt when Azel and Cedar meet for the first time and now how she handled the last appearance with the ultimatum

 

[michael1984]

The only thing i distrust the most at the moments is

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[BTLD]

Oh yeah I get where you are coming from this is just a me thing, you guys know how crazy I get with this stuff. I have so many hand written and typed notes about little things from this game. I am totally into looking at all the details.

I like to look for clues read between the lines and trust no one (well the only ones I trust fully are Azel, Jamie, and Shauna). Everyone else I had doubts on, but some have really come to save the day like Stacy, Wendy, Cedar, Rachael, Skye, and Ayden. Some have put so much trust in the MC it is hard not to trust them like Bailey, Zoe, Penny, Kimmy and many more. Others have given me no reason to trust or not trust like Ruby, and Emiko. Then we have those I want to trust but are close to someone I can't trust like Jasmine, Lee, Mackey. Some I want to trust but know I shouldn't like Damien. I can make a case (maybe not a strong one) for everyone in the game why they should not be trusted except for Maybe Jamie she is the only one I feel can be trusted 100% without a shadow of a doubt. I mean look how she reacted once Liz lied on her behalf.

You can also say that the neutral position is a slight distrust until you get to know someone better. Like I will not immediately trust a stranger when he tells me he is an expert in finances or gambling and would like to invest my last dollar.

Now if Tia used that shower before with someone it would be way more likely be with Ryker as with Charles, still shows some bad taste but after our introduction to her thinking she is a lady with quite a strong sexual drive makes sense, so she could just have been horny and chose wrong guy.

Like I told Loco...what you are saying is pure conjucture there is no evidence to sustain what you are saying..alot of ifs to these theories...if she used if she said if she did if she....
Also you can also say that the neutral stance is a way of wanting to believe/trust....but in the end ...there are 2 definitive facts...neutral position is just that a neutral position and we have not enough evidence to blame or excuse ....trust or not trust Tia...we need more info...we had like ...3 encounters with her?
Anyway ...neutral here for Tia.
EDIT : also I'm not advocating for trusting Tia...

 

[Bailz]

the thing with Tia is so far it looks like she goes to college with either douchebags or gay guys, so when she saw the MC and how hes the opposite of that she took her chance and maybe came on a bit too strong