VN Ren'Py WVM [S2 Ch.1 Ep.13 F] [Braindrop]

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ProofreadingRUS

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Finally finished the update. The mod had some issues. I couldn't change Wendy's name.
I had no problem changing the other names. I liked the Harem path.
I kinda wish the MC would just forget about basketball and just concentrate on making his Harem bigger.
All that WVM brings is trouble and a lot of drama in the end.
There's still 2 more reunions to look forward to.
Cedey's childhood friend and that female that survived the accident.
I just hope Rycker is not involved somehow. I hope he's done and we never get to see him again.
But we know like all bad guys, he's just planning his revenge.
The booty contest would have been better if they were all wearing thong bikinis.
They all looked good when wearing their bikinis but not when they were bending over.
Their curves had no detail and looked more like they were all wearing diapers instead when bending over.
The Futa thing, I didn't get. If you choose Shauna not to have one, Penelope and Sky don't get one either.
Great story, great animation, high impact romance and mystery.
Only thing it needs is a little proofreading here and there.
 
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Rory Smith said:
Sad to hear that. Sandbox + quest log mechanism is good.
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While there are games implementing that well, there are even more so that don't.
(And there are stories benefitting from that technique, while others really don't.)

With all of them (that I know of), you have either no time frame though, or you have a time limit in which to finish the game.

So either it is of no consequence if you finish the game on day 11 or day 311, or you need that WT to not have a game over after spending too much time managing your quests. A large part of the game becomes meta that way as you play against the game's hurdles.

WVM has a sports event schedule in the background. And while we know the sexy part has priority, we know that there will be matches, girls' birthdays, and so on. So in case (and I highly expect that to happen) BD uses them in Ethans encounters and the story he has planned, doing this on your own schedule would either conflict with the schedule of BD's story, or he would have to sewer the events from it, practically doing separate flows, one for Ethan and one for the world around him, making the story kind of bland .
But why do the extra work without the storyline benefiting from it? Why adding the possibility to get out of sync when this is all about wholesomeness?

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In case you meant this in a way to just cut out downtime - so the game still going its own way and you just jumping to events when it gets interesting - well we didn't have that much downtime until now - and BD already said that starting with the next update the game will start to kind of summarize and only point out special encounters. So no more 7 parts for one day, but one update for the next 5 days. So here too - no need to add extra work/mechanics to achieve this in the story.
 
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ProofreadingRUS said:
Finally finished the update. The mod had some issues. I couldn't change Wendy's name.
I had no problem changing the other names. I liked the Harem path.
I kinda wish the MC would just forget about basketball and just concentrate on making his Harem bigger.
All that WVM brings is trouble and a lot of drama in the end.
There's still 2 more reunions to look forward to.
Cedey's childhood friend and that female that survived the accident.
I just hope Rycker is not involved somehow. I hope he's done and we never get to see him again.
But we know like all bad guys, he's just planning his revenge.
The booty contest would have been better if they were all wearing thong bikinis.
They all looked good when wearing their bikinis but not when they were bending over.
Their curves had no detail and looked more like they were all wearing diapers instead when bending over.
The Futa thing, I didn't get. If you choose Shauna not to have one, Penelope and Sky don't get one either.
Great story, great animation, high impact romance and mystery.
Only thing it needs is a little proofreading here and there.
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About (probably) my Mod: I've noticed that already, too. Seems the name "Wendy" is sometimes "hard coded" into the script file (then my renaming does not work there). I'll change that soon with my next Mod update.

Edit:
I've updated my Mod. Hopefully the "Wendy" renaming works now, too.
 
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the easiest way passed all these bizarre crap about incest rules by paypal....funny because steam have no problems, and neither do paypal with steam etc. maybe throwing some of these on to early access with an option to donate might actually be the best way to go, i dont know.
 
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I am glad to see the update is a pretty big success, it’s also nice to see so good conversations going on this thread again
 
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I hope that the Dev adds some other girls in the Harem getting pregnant besides Jamie. Like Rachael, Azel , Liz and Katie.
 
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As the story progress, I hope to see MC+Keyana+Brittany relationship progress further and more of them in general. Especially after MC said that once Brittany gets to town they can make it an entire night them fooling around, going out and having fun (from Day 9 scene with Keyana). With them further forming their own little throuple/three-way romantic relationship within MC's Large Harem and of course later on impregnate both of them in the future, not just Brittany. Love both of these characters.

I always liked the idea of the possibility of Rachael’s Clients becoming more than just clients for MC to put a baby inside of them. Where what was at first a just business deal turned into an unexpected romance and intimate relationships between MC and the ladies. Also, as the story progress (besides sexy time & dates ;)) see how those women's given careers & occupations might possibly help benefit MC in some way, as we seem with Anna on Day 7/8. Our Clients so far...
  • Anna, an attorney who helped MC legally with the jail situation after the bowling alley fight and possibly again in future scenarios (for example: other unsavory events like the bowling alley one, any contracts MC might sign, etc.) that’d call for an attorney/lawyer.
  • Keyana, a professional track runner, who’s now the assistant coach for MC’s basketball team. I can imagine Keyana also assisting in MC's general fitness & health from a pro athlete to an aspiring athlete. Maybe help advise MC with what any athlete in general experience in their career, how to conduct himself, like with the media.
  • Eden, a famous movie actress, someone who could possibly help boost MC’s popularity (along with her’s as well) with the sex-tape, making it widespread. Eden, being an actress also offers MC possible connections to the show biz/entertainment industry with herself and other insiders, possibly expanding his brand popularity a greater deal.
 
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K18 said:
As the story progress, I hope to see MC+Keyana+Brittany relationship progress further and more of them in general. Especially after MC said that once Brittany gets to town they can make it an entire night them fooling around, going out and having fun (from Day 9 scene with Keyana). With them further forming their own little throuple/three-way romantic relationship within MC's Large Harem and of course later on impregnate both of them in the future, not just Brittany. Love both of these characters.

I always liked the idea of the possibility of Rachael’s Clients becoming more than just clients for MC to put a baby inside of them. Where what was at first a just business deal turned into an unexpected romance and intimate relationships between MC and the ladies. Also, as the story progress (besides sexy time & dates ;)) see how those women's given careers & occupations might possibly help benefit MC in some way, as we seem with Anna on Day 7/8. Our Clients so far...
  • Anna, an attorney who helped MC legally with the jail situation after the bowling alley fight and possibly again in future scenarios (for example: other unsavory events like the bowling alley one, any contracts MC might sign, etc.) that’d call for an attorney/lawyer.
  • Keyana, a professional track runner, who’s now the assistant coach for MC’s basketball team. I can imagine Keyana also assisting in MC's general fitness & health from a pro athlete to an aspiring athlete. Maybe help advise MC with what any athlete in general experience in their career, how to conduct himself, like with the media.
  • Eden, a famous movie actress, someone who could possibly help boost MC’s popularity (along with her’s as well) with the sex-tape, making it widespread. Eden, being an actress also offers MC possible connections to the show biz/entertainment industry with herself and other insiders, possibly expanding his brand popularity a greater deal.
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awesome post, I'm curious also how it will evolve :D
 
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K18 said:
Anna, an attorney who helped MC legally with the jail situation after the bowling alley fight and possibly again in future scenarios (for example: other unsavory events like the bowling alley one, any contracts MC might sign, etc.) that’d call for an attorney/lawyer.
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There's rather a large difference between a criminal defence lawyer and a contract lawyer though.
 
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K18 said:
As the story progress, I hope to see MC+Keyana+Brittany relationship progress further and more of them in general. Especially after MC said that once Brittany gets to town they can make it an entire night them fooling around, going out and having fun (from Day 9 scene with Keyana). With them further forming their own little throuple/three-way romantic relationship within MC's Large Harem and of course later on impregnate both of them in the future, not just Brittany. Love both of these characters.

I always liked the idea of the possibility of Rachael’s Clients becoming more than just clients for MC to put a baby inside of them. Where what was at first a just business deal turned into an unexpected romance and intimate relationships between MC and the ladies. Also, as the story progress (besides sexy time & dates ;)) see how those women's given careers & occupations might possibly help benefit MC in some way, as we seem with Anna on Day 7/8. Our Clients so far...
  • Anna, an attorney who helped MC legally with the jail situation after the bowling alley fight and possibly again in future scenarios (for example: other unsavory events like the bowling alley one, any contracts MC might sign, etc.) that’d call for an attorney/lawyer.
  • Keyana, a professional track runner, who’s now the assistant coach for MC’s basketball team. I can imagine Keyana also assisting in MC's general fitness & health from a pro athlete to an aspiring athlete. Maybe help advise MC with what any athlete in general experience in their career, how to conduct himself, like with the media.
  • Eden, a famous movie actress, someone who could possibly help boost MC’s popularity (along with her’s as well) with the sex-tape, making it widespread. Eden, being an actress also offers MC possible connections to the show biz/entertainment industry with herself and other insiders, possibly expanding his brand popularity a greater deal.
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That would be an interesting development of the story. In my opinion i would like to see those three specific clients in more general relationship with the MC than a romantic relationship and the reason i say that is cause they start as Rachel's clients for the side job and our only interaction with them was for impregnation purpose. I'm not saying to not have a sexual adventures with them, but to not include them as part of our harem.
 
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