VN Ren'Py WVM [S2 Ch.1 Ep.13 F] [Braindrop]

[JUCJOFF]

It's surprising that even though I usually think that the more girls in the game, the better, but in this case there is a clear overkill.
In addition, it annoys me that the dev does not know how to select the right angles for scenes. The vast majority of scenes are created as POV and 99% of the screen is occupied by the heroine’s back, and if she lies on her back, then at least can look at her bare tits, because you still can’t see anything else. With the same success, you can show a swinging ceiling or walls of a room.
Well, the moronic manner of hiding the MC’s face with the “black square of Malevich”, it is clear that the idea here was for the player to better associate himself with the protagonist, but it turned out completely the opposite.

 

[Zareem]

Why does this not have a pregnancy tag if it supposedly has it?

 

[armion82]

Sadly, the remake won't fix the biggest issue about this game (the insane amount of women that essentially turned mc into a cult leader). I wish BD would cut the amount of women by half and just have a set of like 10 total so as to give them all the time and energy they deserve instead of just having every pair of tits show up to get fucked.

That will bring a massive problem.
Who should be removed?
Not to mention everyone has different favorites.
Less than 0.01% will have as favorites the same 10 chosen to stay in the game.

 

[Akabakka]

That will bring a massive problem.
Who should be removed?
Not to mention everyone has different favorites.
Less than 0.01% will have as favorites the same 10 chosen to stay in the game.

My arbitrary cut on the lineup would be around the time Harper's daughter , Natalie came into play . I don't think that the cheer-leading squad from S1 can be cut , nor would need to . They just need more fleshing out and solo scenes . So keeping in mind the will to remove incest : Jaimie , Shauna , Bailey , Stacy , Jasmine , Rainn , Zoe , Rachel , Natalie , Harper , Emiko , Tia

A lot of the women involved in the pregnancy gigolo thing i'd cut except maybe Anna (and only because of plot relevance) ... or rather i'd turn into side pieces for one off scenes and non serious flings and space em out a lot more , to favor main girls . I'd cut Katie out , she barely is even used , despite in a so called important position . She lost any relevance with Willabelle popping up , before she did anything with the team

Some character like Kimmy , Elizabeth , Penelope , Mackenzie , Skye , Willabelle and anyone important i likely forgot , i'd slowly introduce in the harem through season 2 or 3 as their plot actually develop and lead somewhere . To be fair it kinda happened for some like Willabelle and Skye .

I'm talking out of my *ss , having zero experience in the matter , but basically i wanna avoid a situation where a character supposedly important is introduced , clearly into you but nothing happens moving that plot along (if the character even really show up at all) for over 5 chapters . Like Stacy being a centerpiece early then pushed aside, or Katie introduced as a somewhat big deal... then it fizzles

 

[armion82]

My arbitrary cut on the lineup would be around the time Harper's daughter , Natalie came into play . I don't think that the cheer-leading squad from S1 can be cut , nor would need to . They just need more fleshing out and solo scenes . So keeping in mind the will to remove incest : Jaimie , Shauna , Bailey , Stacy , Jasmine , Rainn , Zoe , Rachel , Natalie , Harper , Emiko , Tia

A lot of the women involved in the pregnancy gigolo thing i'd cut except maybe Anna (and only because of plot relevance) ... or rather i'd turn into side pieces for one off scenes and non serious flings and space em out a lot more , to favor main girls . I'd cut Katie out , she barely is even used , despite in a so called important position . She lost any relevance with Willabelle popping up , before she did anything with the team

Some character like Kimmy , Elizabeth , Penelope , Mackenzie , Skye , Willabelle and anyone important i likely forgot , i'd slowly introduce in the harem through season 2 or 3 as their plot actually develop and lead somewhere . To be fair it kinda happened for some like Willabelle and Skye .

I'm talking out of my *ss , having zero experience in the matter , but basically i wanna avoid a situation where a character supposedly important is introduced , clearly into you but nothing happens moving that plot along (if the character even really show up at all) for over 5 chapters . Like Stacy being a centerpiece early then pushed aside, or Katie introduced as a somewhat big deal... then it fizzles

The easiest way to select the 10 characters is just to go with Tier 0 and Tier 1 cast.
Tier 0-Jamie and Shauna-obviously they take 2 spots.
Tier 1-so far we know 5 characters-Rachael,Willabelle,Harper,Stacy and Natalie-that's another 5 spots.
And we have 3 more.
I think Tier 1 will be also Elizabeth,Jasmine and Zoe.
Sadly that means we should forget about all other girls and clients too.

 

[jish55]

The easiest way to select the 10 characters is just to go with Tier 0 and Tier 1 cast.
Tier 0-Jamie and Shauna-obviously they take 2 spots.
Tier 1-so far we know 5 characters-Rachael,Willabelle,Harper,Stacy and Natalie-that's another 5 spots.
And we have 3 more.
I think Tier 1 will be also Elizabeth,Jasmine and Zoe.
Sadly that means we should forget about all other girls and clients too.

It may suck at first, but having less girls means more time with them where they no longer feel hollow. Like over half the girls as is don't need to be apart of this harem. For me, here are the list of girls I'd keep and the rest would be in the game, but not there as fuck dolls and would only be there as a means to help add to the story for mc without devolving into wanting to fuck him:

Bailey, Elizabeth, Jamie, Jasmine, Kimmy, Natalie, Penelope, Shauna, Stacy, and Tia.

I chose those out of how a) they are diverse enough to give everyone a girl they're into, b) each plays a decent role in the story, and c) keeps it to a core cast. I didn't add Zoe, Rachael, Willabelle, and Harper because having them as support without having them be mc's fuck toys feels far better for a story.

 

[grim019]

It may suck at first, but having less girls means more time with them where they no longer feel hollow. Like over half the girls as is don't need to be apart of this harem. For me, here are the list of girls I'd keep and the rest would be in the game, but not there as fuck dolls and would only be there as a means to help add to the story for mc without devolving into wanting to fuck him:

Bailey, Elizabeth, Jamie, Jasmine, Kimmy, Natalie, Penelope, Shauna, Stacy, and Tia.

I chose those out of how a) they are diverse enough to give everyone a girl they're into, b) each plays a decent role in the story, and c) keeps it to a core cast. I didn't add Zoe, Rachael, Willabelle, and Harper because having them as support without having them be mc's fuck toys feels far better for a story.

It might have been better for the story if he did. He will not do it though because it would hurt the amount of money he makes. He would be cutting really popular characters.

 

[Wen I Say]

My arbitrary cut on the lineup would be around the time Harper's daughter , Natalie came into play . I don't think that the cheer-leading squad from S1 can be cut , nor would need to . They just need more fleshing out and solo scenes . So keeping in mind the will to remove incest : Jaimie , Shauna , Bailey , Stacy , Jasmine , Rainn , Zoe , Rachel , Natalie , Harper , Emiko , Tia

A lot of the women involved in the pregnancy gigolo thing i'd cut except maybe Anna (and only because of plot relevance) ... or rather i'd turn into side pieces for one off scenes and non serious flings and space em out a lot more , to favor main girls . I'd cut Katie out , she barely is even used , despite in a so called important position . She lost any relevance with Willabelle popping up , before she did anything with the team

Some character like Kimmy , Elizabeth , Penelope , Mackenzie , Skye , Willabelle and anyone important i likely forgot , i'd slowly introduce in the harem through season 2 or 3 as their plot actually develop and lead somewhere . To be fair it kinda happened for some like Willabelle and Skye .

I'm talking out of my *ss , having zero experience in the matter , but basically i wanna avoid a situation where a character supposedly important is introduced , clearly into you but nothing happens moving that plot along (if the character even really show up at all) for over 5 chapters . Like Stacy being a centerpiece early then pushed aside, or Katie introduced as a somewhat big deal... then it fizzles

well, jokes on you because he just introduced like 6 new bitches to be cataloged into the ol' pokedex that are seemingly important to the plot of MC becoming the next patriarch of pussy...... Honestly, at this point, I'm not sure what the plot is or was anymore it's just this ever-moving target.

 

[RegAdd]

I would never have guessed that the MC would say something like that
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"...for now."

MC takes a significant break from adding new girls to his harem. Maybe even a full day.

It's been about 5 months since I made this comment, so I'd forgotten about it. All the recent discussion about harem bloat reminded me. Honestly, I was joking, because I assumed the MC's internal monologue was BD's way of acknowledging the excessive rate of increase of the harem and signaling a pause.

And yet... storywise, he does not make it a full day before hooking up with multiple new women is an option.

They're not officially harem members yet, but there isn't really a barrier at this point since Jamie and Shauna approvingly watched the orgy. His interest in Hermione is explicitly called out, both in internal monologue and by Demetria. Sheltered Annie is coming out of her shell after watching the others and sitting with Jamie and Shauna. It sounds like she's planning on ditching her arranged marriage with the intent to join the harem. The other members of the investor group are creepily obsessed with him. They're already signed up via Rachael to have his babies, but they jumped his bones early. Ryann in particular appears to have a connection with his past, with her tattoos triggering an odd feeling and a memory. She's definitely going to be a recurring presence. On top of that, there's Aditi. All interactions with her have been nonsexual and wholesomely protective, but this is WVM. We know she's going to be an option later, especially since she has now officially been hired to be his harem's maid (well, the subset of the harem that is his management team living in the second house).

 

[Grif1001]

well, jokes on you because he just introduced like 6 new bitches to be cataloged into the ol' pokedex that are seemingly important to the plot of MC becoming the next patriarch of pussy...... Honestly, at this point, I'm not sure what the plot is or was anymore it's just this ever-moving target.

With this latest introduction of "importaint" women, it felt like there was something almost occult going on, like they were fixing to start the Church of 43 (or whatever his jersey number is)

 

[Wen I Say]

With this latest introduction of "importaint" women, it felt like there was something almost occult going on, like they were fixing to start the Church of 43 (or whatever his jersey number is)

yea, even the dev I think is confused at this point. The game is just sex now with some random side-quest events...

 

[Spider-Venom]

In between skipping through all the harem filler.

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I liked it better when we were cheating on this bitch. Before all the sugar and rainbows, cotton candy and unicorns MC worship, it was actually something special. Something different. Having a secret relationship with your shemale best friend was fun and hot AF. Basically everything I ever wanted out of a trans character.

is is the best. I hope to see her get more confident.

 

[Acsuka]

With this latest introduction of "importaint" women, it felt like there was something almost occult going on, like they were fixing to start the Church of 43 (or whatever his jersey number is)

I like this game, but I was a little disappointed with this update... I didn't miss these millionaire whores, the previous girls are worth much more... I know that this yacht meeting was necessary, but if the author wanted sex, then Eden would be better making a sex film should have been placed here... I still think that quality content of 10-20 girls is worth more than MC fucking all the whores in the world...

 

[datguy0115]

The Season 1 redo report will be posted on Tuesday or Wednesday.
The Client poll will be held on either Wednesday or Thursday.
And I plan on posting the Bday renders for October this upcoming weekend.

Did any of this happen?

 

[JohnJeremy69]

Why can't you download the most recent android mod?

 

[Damien81a]

so... braindead gave himself a "no real release date fore the next update" .... lol im going to gues next year then.
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[yffoh]

Ok.. Did I miss something? I'm on the day of the exhibition game, yet all this stuff is happening that I have no idea about.

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[abuelmott]

Ok.. Did I miss something? I'm on the day of the exhibition game, yet all this stuff is happening that I have no idea about.

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You miss that stuff because it is not in the game (yet). The first week is rewritten and will be reworked at some point (in a far far future. Maybe.) so its actuall 30 days not 7. The problem is that he continued with the rewritten story in the game. You will also meet some characters that the MC know but never appered so far.

 

[yffoh]

You miss that stuff because it is not in the game (yet). The first week is rewritten and will be reworked at some point (in a far far future. Maybe.) so its actuall 30 days not 7. The problem is that he continued with the rewritten story in the game. You will also meet some characters that the MC know but never appered so far.

That makes sense then, I guess. I haven't gone back and read through the 2000+ pages of comments to see if it was already discussed lol. Definitely had me pretty confused

 

[johnmnf692]

It may suck at first, but having less girls means more time with them where they no longer feel hollow. Like over half the girls as is don't need to be apart of this harem. For me, here are the list of girls I'd keep and the rest would be in the game, but not there as fuck dolls and would only be there as a means to help add to the story for mc without devolving into wanting to fuck him:

Bailey, Elizabeth, Jamie, Jasmine, Kimmy, Natalie, Penelope, Shauna, Stacy, and Tia.

I chose those out of how a) they are diverse enough to give everyone a girl they're into, b) each plays a decent role in the story, and c) keeps it to a core cast. I didn't add Zoe, Rachael, Willabelle, and Harper because having them as support without having them be mc's fuck toys feels far better for a story.

I mostly agree with this, except for Zoe. Zoe definitely best serves the story as a LI. Tia is a character who has almost literally no purpose whatsoever, aside from adding another fuckdoll, you could easily remove her from the game and essentially nothing would change. With a cast this big, the game would be much better served with a plot relevant LI like Zoe, rather than a random fuckbuddy like Tia. It gives MC an actual reason to interact with the LI, rather than just meeting her in the shower and smashing.