Where's this project with so much potential for a good story?
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KiryuKazuma095
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I simply said my opinion never review this game with 5 * ... I liked the story on the begining mostly at some point it lost it's way that is true but most players of these games don't care for the story...no offense but this comment really explains all the 5* reviews games some of the VNs in here gets
the story is an even bigger problem than the schedule.
KiryuKazuma095
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I was talking about WVM in my opinion the story had good potential to be a good story but the sex every two scenes and the whole ''fucking every girl on sight " has damaged it very much
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Everyone keeps talking about "Fix the story" "Too many girls" "It can't be fixed at this point, start over." "There is no story anymore"... There actually is a story, it's buried under lots of other nonsense though. So, here's my sugestion on how to get back to the story.... 
When the plane lands, Veronica, the Police woman, meets the MC at the airport and tells him that while he was in the air, all the girls that wern't with him were waiting for him to surprise him at home and the douche bag he fought at the bowling alley planted a bomb at his house that went off early and killed half of the harem. Hurt over the loss, the remaining members of the group "circle the wagons" and don't let anyone else in for fear of loosing them one day. MC concerns himself with only his girls and Basketball from then on. Can also give the rest of the story a moral lesson on dealing with greif and loss properly (not by fucking everything in site.)
It may be a bit morbid, but hey, my day job is in the funeral industry.
When the plane lands, Veronica, the Police woman, meets the MC at the airport and tells him that while he was in the air, all the girls that wern't with him were waiting for him to surprise him at home and the douche bag he fought at the bowling alley planted a bomb at his house that went off early and killed half of the harem. Hurt over the loss, the remaining members of the group "circle the wagons" and don't let anyone else in for fear of loosing them one day. MC concerns himself with only his girls and Basketball from then on. Can also give the rest of the story a moral lesson on dealing with greif and loss properly (not by fucking everything in site.)
It may be a bit morbid, but hey, my day job is in the funeral industry.
This doesn't sound too crazy for this AVN, plus it gives the MC ANOTHER reason to move house AGAIN...Everyone keeps talking about "Fix the story" "Too many girls" "It can't be fixed at this point, start over." "There is no story anymore"... There actually is a story, it's buried under lots of other nonsense though. So, here's my sugestion on how to get back to the story....
When the plane lands, Veronica, the Police woman, meets the MC at the airport and tells him that while he was in the air, all the girls that wern't with him were waiting for him to surprise him at home and the douche bag he fought at the bowling alley planted a bomb at his house that went off early and killed half of the harem. Hurt over the loss, the remaining members of the group "circle the wagons" and don't let anyone else in for fear of loosing them one day. MC concerns himself with only his girls and Basketball from then on. Can also give the rest of the story a moral lesson on dealing with greif and loss properly (not by fucking everything in site.)
It may be a bit morbid, but hey, my day job is in the funeral industry.
RoadWulf
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The problem isn't the girls at home. Its all the ones he keeps adding. The College girls, his girlfriends, Elizabeth, Talismah, Rachel, Harper and then our non-girl Skye. That literally all he ever needed. Throw in the Pregnancy service things every once in a while, maybe bang the teacher or her sister. But as much as I love Willebelle, the colors never needed to exist. The two movie stars never needed to exist. The rich donor women never needed to exist. Before the Bowling Alley event even happened there were already more than enough characters.Everyone keeps talking about "Fix the story" "Too many girls" "It can't be fixed at this point, start over." "There is no story anymore"... There actually is a story, it's buried under lots of other nonsense though. So, here's my sugestion on how to get back to the story....
When the plane lands, Veronica, the Police woman, meets the MC at the airport and tells him that while he was in the air, all the girls that wern't with him were waiting for him to surprise him at home and the douche bag he fought at the bowling alley planted a bomb at his house that went off early and killed half of the harem. Hurt over the loss, the remaining members of the group "circle the wagons" and don't let anyone else in for fear of loosing them one day. MC concerns himself with only his girls and Basketball from then on. Can also give the rest of the story a moral lesson on dealing with greif and loss properly (not by fucking everything in site.)
It may be a bit morbid, but hey, my day job is in the funeral industry.
I swear that event and the fight is where BD shifted gears away from the College and the girls and towards everything else.
Can we Romance Willow, Azel and Wendy yet?
Has the developer changed his mind yet and told Patreon to eat a dick because you don't need patreon to get paid/donations, there are other much less restrictive sites that allow you to get paid/donations.
Like please just give us what we want the people that might actually pay him instead of those stuck up cunts in suits telling you what is it ain't allowed.
Please tell me there is a possibility of us actually getting it on with them at some point seriously.. it feels so fucking wrong to have such amazing gorgeous girls with great stories and probability behind them to just sit there in the corner away from the rest of the Harem.
Paterson is fucking cancer and people really should start using alternative less restrictive sites and services because the only way we get what we want is when we don't give up our freedom and cave in like little submissive bitches, don't give patreon your money or service give it to subscribestar or something else equal to it that respects is users and customers
Has the developer changed his mind yet and told Patreon to eat a dick because you don't need patreon to get paid/donations, there are other much less restrictive sites that allow you to get paid/donations.
Like please just give us what we want the people that might actually pay him instead of those stuck up cunts in suits telling you what is it ain't allowed.
Please tell me there is a possibility of us actually getting it on with them at some point seriously.. it feels so fucking wrong to have such amazing gorgeous girls with great stories and probability behind them to just sit there in the corner away from the rest of the Harem.
Paterson is fucking cancer and people really should start using alternative less restrictive sites and services because the only way we get what we want is when we don't give up our freedom and cave in like little submissive bitches, don't give patreon your money or service give it to subscribestar or something else equal to it that respects is users and customers
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Yes, but I addressed that too. If some of the girls die because of a vendetta against him, then he will be less likely to add new girls from that point on for fear of their safety and because it would "feel wrong" to replace the girls he lost. Gives him an instant mental aversion to adding more girls from that point on.
It would also cause him to put up a wall between himself and the girls that weren't already members of his inner circle/actual harem, the ones that are just side chicks at this time, such as the colors, the rich girls, and maybe even the movie stars, at least the younger one, and so on...
Why are so many people trying to re-write the story for the Dev? Dudes/Dudettes, if you want to make a VN game and write a story, go write your own. Don't tell someone else what they should do.
WVM is great as it is. Few porn games give you that feelsgood vibe as well as WVM does. Feels more like a family than some actual families. I don't care if he adds a hundred more characters as long as he keeps being the MC who takes care of everyone.
Dudes/Dudettes, if you want to make a VN game and write a story, go write your own. Don't tell someone else what they should do.WVM is great as it is. Few porn games give you that feelsgood vibe as well as WVM does. Feels more like a family than some actual families. I don't care if he adds a hundred more characters as long as he keeps being the MC who takes care of everyone.
Ohvidente
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Don't you think it's weird that MC kisses his mothers and sister? The dev forces things that could only be done with boyfriends or girlfriends.Why are so many people trying to re-write the story for the Dev?
WVM is great as it is. Few porn games give you that feelsgood vibe as well as WVM does. Feels more like a family than some actual families. I don't care if he adds a hundred more characters as long as he keeps being the MC who takes care of everyone.
Uthuriel
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It's in because in the early drafts of the game incest was definitely planned... but BD decided sucking Patreon cock was more important to him so he never followed through...
Not really. A kiss is an act of affection and is not implicitly or explicitly sexual. True, it's not common for family to kiss each other on the mouth. But it's also not a horrible thing to do.
Ohvidente
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The issue is not the kiss, but rather the way it sexualizes meetings with mothers, anyway, I started playing recently so I don't know what the dev's initial idea was, I just hope he does the rework from day 1 - 8.
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Funny how you mention this as "getting back to the story" when I'm 90% sure we'll never see Ryker again outside of a few shots of him being arrested or something similar.Everyone keeps talking about "Fix the story" "Too many girls" "It can't be fixed at this point, start over." "There is no story anymore"... There actually is a story, it's buried under lots of other nonsense though. So, here's my sugestion on how to get back to the story....
When the plane lands, Veronica, the Police woman, meets the MC at the airport and tells him that while he was in the air, all the girls that wern't with him were waiting for him to surprise him at home and the douche bag he fought at the bowling alley planted a bomb at his house that went off early and killed half of the harem. Hurt over the loss, the remaining members of the group "circle the wagons" and don't let anyone else in for fear of loosing them one day. MC concerns himself with only his girls and Basketball from then on. Can also give the rest of the story a moral lesson on dealing with greif and loss properly (not by fucking everything in site.)
It may be a bit morbid, but hey, my day job is in the funeral industry.
Uthuriel
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Nah bro... killing LIs is just a huge no.Everyone keeps talking about "Fix the story" "Too many girls" "It can't be fixed at this point, start over." "There is no story anymore"... There actually is a story, it's buried under lots of other nonsense though. So, here's my sugestion on how to get back to the story....
When the plane lands, Veronica, the Police woman, meets the MC at the airport and tells him that while he was in the air, all the girls that wern't with him were waiting for him to surprise him at home and the douche bag he fought at the bowling alley planted a bomb at his house that went off early and killed half of the harem. Hurt over the loss, the remaining members of the group "circle the wagons" and don't let anyone else in for fear of loosing them one day. MC concerns himself with only his girls and Basketball from then on. Can also give the rest of the story a moral lesson on dealing with greif and loss properly (not by fucking everything in site.)
It may be a bit morbid, but hey, my day job is in the funeral industry.
Huge yes, just drop a meteor on everything. Burn it all to the ground
Uthuriel
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Yeah... but on BDs house not some innocent girls...
KiryuKazuma095
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Well we are not trying to re write the story, at least i am not , i just said that in my opinion a little more story focus instead of having sex with every female might made the story even better that is allWhy are so many people trying to re-write the story for the Dev?
WVM is great as it is. Few porn games give you that feelsgood vibe as well as WVM does. Feels more like a family than some actual families. I don't care if he adds a hundred more characters as long as he keeps being the MC who takes care of everyone.
Nah, bro, if we're talking about girls who never needed to to be added, Talismah is number fucking 1 on that list. She is a completely pointless character who only serves as an unnecessary redundancy in Rachel's backstory and overall is a tremendous waste of time. Not to mention the fact that I literally can't even tell if she's supposed to be a LI or not, which is really saying something in this game.
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I had completely forgotten about that character, but the same can be said for 80% of the cast. There's just way too many and has been for a long long time now. The core group of girls get put on the backburner because the dev feels the need to add 6+ additional oneshot girls because reasons.
I miss the initial updates of the game since there was a story somewhat. A loose plotline to follow while having a core group of LI. Now even the dev pokes fun at the MC's random vacations. "Yes I know this vacation is completely random, but I needed someway to add another 8 girls"