I completed the story up to the last chapter. I really liked it, and the story has a lot of potential. I loved Harper, Bailey, Rain, Zoeh, and Daliah, as did the rest, but I'm losing count. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
However, the project has quite a few problems. There's one thing I don't understand.Why waste time creating new characters like Lulu and the women at the hotel, along with more subplots that contribute nothing, when the main plot is already saturated with narrative threads and female characters? I say this in a context where the creator is accumulating delays and problems. When do you intend to finish the story? In 2050?
The main plot is already interesting enough, and even more so with the addition of the rich women and Daliah's surroundings, without wasting even more time, let alone a remake. I like all the girls, but it's already too much for me. MC can't afford to have a simple conversation, and it's going to be frustrating for them. Jaime is going to have to create a long waiting list. The core group alone already exceeds ten, and that's even before Valerie's daughters, the girls from the other university, Lauren, and others have even come into play.
The author should reflect on this, because I'm afraid this project to maintain this dynamic risks being abandoned. I would be very sad not to see the end of the story.