Spfjolietjake
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- Sep 26, 2019
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100% disagree. This is a great fucking story. If one has ever visited a library, one might notice there literally 100s of ways to tell a story.the pacing of day 7 is all over the place
its just all stuffed together
thats not how u tell a story, the timeline needs a redo
BD's vision is popular, well liked and freaking fun as hell. Personally I don't think he needs to revise what he is but this is his baby so be it. Saying there is only one way to tell a story though is bullshit to be frank.