No, thats not-
BTLD means you use spoilers to hide what you wrote since its can spoil the game for new players, especially considering what you said are very pivotal moments in the game.
It's worth mentioning where there could be changes made.
I am doing this from the beginning and the updates are no big deal with 0 paths so far, so nothing unexpected happens but could use those fill in the gaps where needed, like Willows knee, which can be easily fixed if money is the problem, don't you think?
That will probably be fixed if anybody is really paying attention.
Not to mention Tali's age, 34, really? She don't look or acts 34.
Maybe I'm just the only one who truly cares and actually pays attention to the story.
Also Valerie looked the same age 10 years ago, that's another one, may have to fix.
How old is Valerie? She looked 50 10 something years ago.