Ren'Py XIX [v0.7b] [Muplur]

[MUPLUR]

1: They may be optional, but you have to take into account that they are what's on display content wise.
Again: I AM making up numbers here, but for example: If the game has 100 sex scenes. And 50 of them are voyeurism scenes. You are left with 50 % scenes "gone" from the game. And if say: 10 scenes are beastiality. You are left with 60 % scenes gone from the game, if you opt out of those too.
So: If someone comes and sees the game, and are told ~50 % of all content is "gone" if they don't like voyeurism. That will make the game seem to have a lot less content. If that made sense.

2: That could sorta tone Starfire down a bit. She is still an extremely sex positive character though. I am getting very mixed messages so far tbh. Like: On one side: You have the whole "love", but on the other: You got hookers and blow xP

3: Not gonna lie: "Kept pure" sounds very creepy xP
Like, the guys are horny sluts. But the girls are celibate nuns without sexual needs? xD

I'll give it a look over the weekend.
What other games do you have btw? I saw the Korra one. And, I won't touch that one as it contains genderbend and trainer. And so far at least: I haven't come across a single game with those elements that was enjoyable.
But yeah, I'll give a more thorough review once I play through this one.

Why making up numbers? I will give you proper amount. Also some people claim this as not voyeurism, some people claims everything that doesn't have MC is voyeurism.

Let me say these are the amount of scenes Where MC doesn't have sex or be a part of.
Robin - 2 (Optional voyeurism)
Beastboy - 2 (Optional Bestiality)
Cyborg - 2 (Optional voyeurism)

These are the total amount where he is involved
Robin - 2 (Optional)
Cyborg - 1 (Optional)
Beastboy - 2 (Optional)
In love route with single girl - 13 (for each girl) - 78 (Total)
In harem route - 7 (For each girl) - 42 (Total)
I am not good at % things. You do the math

2. Yes. You can get into love route only if you avoided the hookers and blow You can avoid them and see them in galley
3. I am not going to lie too. I am a creepy guy who likes to have 'pure' girl as lover. I am into degenerating stuffs like handholding and cheek kissing too . Welcome to XIX-verse XD. Actually They are like that because both logical and personal reasons.

Book 5 is mostly for people who wants to Punish Korra and some others. XIX won't be like that though.

 

[MUPLUR]

Anything with the finished game file? I keep getting bugged at blackstar scene and nothing else will trigger.

What kind of bug are you getting? Is it appears in v0.2a?

 

[MangoMeta]

Why making up numbers? I will give you proper amount. Also some people claim this as not voyeurism, some people claims everything that doesn't have MC is voyeurism.

Let me say these are the amount of scenes Where MC doesn't have sex or be a part of.
Robin - 2 (Optional voyeurism)
Beastboy - 2 (Optional Bestiality)
Cyborg - 2 (Optional voyeurism)

These are the total amount where he is involved
Robin - 2 (Optional)
Cyborg - 1 (Optional)
Beastboy - 2 (Optional)
In love route with single girl - 13 (for each girl) - 78 (Total)
In harem route - 7 (For each girl) - 42 (Total)
I am not good at % things. You doit

2. Yes. You can get into love route only if you avoided the hookers and blow You can avoid them and see them in galley
3. I am not going to lie too. I am a creepy guy who likes to have 'pure' girl as lover. I am into degenerating stuffs like handholding and cheek kissing too . Welcome to XIX-verse XD. Actually They are like that because both logical and personal reasons.

Book 5 is mostly for people who wants to Punish Korra and some others. XIX won't be like that though.

too much

 

[NoSimpZone]

Explained here
https://f95zone.to/threads/xix-v0-2a-public-muplur.40046/post-7362759

Glad your feeling better m8.
Just wanted to ask: what are the MC's powers? something related to empathy and emotion reading? The story so far seems to say we came from another dimension and are powers were vastly weakened but ARE our actual powers?

 

[MUPLUR]

Glad your feeling better m8.
Just wanted to ask: what are the MC's powers? something related to empathy and emotion reading? The story so far seems to say we came from another dimension and are powers were vastly weakened but ARE our actual powers?

He had psychic powers. Everything you need to know about him will be explained in v0.4

 

[Kev33lar]

so i got the job with miko but how do i do the job.

I got frustrated and read the walkthrough- which doesn't help my frustration. The reason I couldn't find anything to do next, was I needed to wait until I had BlackFire's money- so 3 weeks of sleeping, because nothing indicates progress, aside from the "psychic vision".

You "do the job" by going to miko's tower, and clicking on the 2nd to top floor, to enter the building
then you click on the desk by the door. time advances, so you have done the job

Unfortunately, the pay is too low. (you are paid on saturday, you are paid $60 - including the $10 a week you were supposed to be making before). So yes, LOTS of stupid grind of sleeping through the week just to get $400, during which you mostly can't do anything to advance the story. I mean, he knew the money was broken when he had Robin give you $900- he really should have made the "job" pay $50 per day worked, instead of a flat $50 a week, whether you worked 1 day or 5 days.

 

[ju9iter]

Where the heck is the controler?

 

[Sammers]

Where the heck is the controler?

The yellow thing next to the chest in beastboy's room

 

[Kattlarv]

I'll reply in a bit, just gonna throw in this bug report.

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[Kattlarv]

Why making up numbers? I will give you proper amount. Also some people claim this as not voyeurism, some people claims everything that doesn't have MC is voyeurism.

Let me say these are the amount of scenes Where MC doesn't have sex or be a part of.
Robin - 2 (Optional voyeurism)
Beastboy - 2 (Optional Bestiality)
Cyborg - 2 (Optional voyeurism)

These are the total amount where he is involved
Robin - 2 (Optional)
Cyborg - 1 (Optional)
Beastboy - 2 (Optional)
In love route with single girl - 13 (for each girl) - 78 (Total)
In harem route - 7 (For each girl) - 42 (Total)
I am not good at % things. You do the math

2. Yes. You can get into love route only if you avoided the hookers and blow You can avoid them and see them in galley
3. I am not going to lie too. I am a creepy guy who likes to have 'pure' girl as lover. I am into degenerating stuffs like handholding and cheek kissing too . Welcome to XIX-verse XD. Actually They are like that because both logical and personal reasons.

Book 5 is mostly for people who wants to Punish Korra and some others. XIX won't be like that though.

I made up numbers just for an easy example for context.
And well, generally not including the MC makes it voyeurisms, as we are supposed to be the MC.
And in most cases, he is literally spying on/watching someone else have sex, so xP
Point being: In the current game, there's only voyeurisms xP (With some "panty shot" exceptions.

2: I can say: There shouldn't really be a "hookers and blow" route, in a game supposedly about love xP
I personally found everything involving BB to be VERY out of place with the rest of the game.

3: I will at least give it to you that the MC seems implied to be a virgin. And does gravitate away from sluts like BB and the "party girls". Meaning that the MC could actually be "pure". Though, nothing is confirmed or denied so far.
It does feel like you are trying to do a more romance focused game, but are cramming in non-romance parts because... reasons. In a bit of a "Well, this was popular in my last game!". As said: I found the "party girls" to really clash with the vibe of the game. And Blackfire is a bit... randomly there. With a sorta half-baked plot reason. She's a bit fake edgelord tbh.

Like, currently in the game: There's not a single case of confirmed female pleasure. (There are implied, yes.) But there is confirmed male pleasure. And we got several confirmed selfish males. But female wise, we have one unspecified femdom. That may or may not have sexual needs. (Porn dominatrixes are way too common to not assumed) And we have essentially two drunk hookers, who just talk about dicks and drugs.

There hasn't been a single thing where you could choose to compliment a girl. Or where it talked favorably about girls.
You were only given choices to be a pervert or not. Which, the MC's automatic dialogue implies he isn't. My overall impressions so far, seem to imply that you kinda only have experience in making maledom, female abuse games. And wanted to try something new with XIX, but it's bleeding over.

As for characters: It does feel like you are trying to cram them into a box. While including some random OC's, to carry out "the other stuff". As in: All of them fit the same criteria. (Ie: No handholding until the 28'th date xP) Like: I could see arguments for several of the girls being virgins. But, some are just a flat "no" xP I have no clue if you made the MC a top, bottom or switch. But imo: You might should reconsider giving everyone a slow burn romance. You can still have a girl that's both horny and "pure" xP And tbh: With someone like Blackfire... it would make more sense that she starts by fucking your face, then develops feelings and works "backwards" towards the smooches and cuddling. (Similar with Jinx. Start by calling it "fucking", end by calling it "making love".)

That's just my thoughts on it though.
Like, currently I can basically play for an hour without anything sexual happening. Then get a "Oh right, this is a porn game." as the game suddenly shifts tone. Well, hope my ramblings were coherent at least.


- And yeah, it kinda seemed implied to be that type of game.
They personally bore me to tears. It's always some Gary Stu that's useless at sex. And all the girls are infantilized in order to fit.
Lots of guys do like them though.

 

[MUPLUR]

I'll reply in a bit, just gonna throw in this bug report.

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The first bug was fixed in latest version.

> You have a few times where you can have characters at two locations at once. (Like, after Terra's trek, she is at the gym and the beach at the same time.)
I will fix this in next update

> One semi-bug is that if you don't do BB's friendship event first, he vanishes for large chunks of the game.
After you done his second event, He will go away to do some thinking.

> I think the calendar over the bed might be bugged however. As it shows a picture with cut-off text on some days. Not sure if a bug, but not all events make time pass.
Will be fixed in next update with CGs

> After the talk with BB about a girlfriend, the dialogue screen does not go away. And leaves the rest of the UI in a constant blur.
Can you explain which event and where?

> There is a bug when attempting to visit Miko after seeing Robin in the evidence room. This occurs during the second time of day.
Explain this one too.

Not sure if a bug, but there's a sketch of Blackfire's head in her room after the car factory.
> Will fix this in next update
Thanks for the bug reports and review. I will keep doing my best

 

[MUPLUR]

I made up numbers just for an easy example for context.
And well, generally not including the MC makes it voyeurisms, as we are supposed to be the MC.
And in most cases, he is literally spying on/watching someone else have sex, so xP
Point being: In the current game, there's only voyeurisms xP (With some "panty shot" exceptions.

2: I can say: There shouldn't really be a "hookers and blow" route, in a game supposedly about love xP
I personally found everything involving BB to be VERY out of place with the rest of the game.

3: I will at least give it to you that the MC seems implied to be a virgin. And does gravitate away from sluts like BB and the "party girls". Meaning that the MC could actually be "pure". Though, nothing is confirmed or denied so far.
It does feel like you are trying to do a more romance focused game, but are cramming in non-romance parts because... reasons. In a bit of a "Well, this was popular in my last game!". As said: I found the "party girls" to really clash with the vibe of the game. And Blackfire is a bit... randomly there. With a sorta half-baked plot reason. She's a bit fake edgelord tbh.

Like, currently in the game: There's not a single case of confirmed female pleasure. (There are implied, yes.) But there is confirmed male pleasure. And we got several confirmed selfish males. But female wise, we have one unspecified femdom. That may or may not have sexual needs. (Porn dominatrixes are way too common to not assumed) And we have essentially two drunk hookers, who just talk about dicks and drugs.

There hasn't been a single thing where you could choose to compliment a girl. Or where it talked favorably about girls.
You were only given choices to be a pervert or not. Which, the MC's automatic dialogue implies he isn't. My overall impressions so far, seem to imply that you kinda only have experience in making maledom, female abuse games. And wanted to try something new with XIX, but it's bleeding over.

As for characters: It does feel like you are trying to cram them into a box. While including some random OC's, to carry out "the other stuff". As in: All of them fit the same criteria. (Ie: No handholding until the 28'th date xP) Like: I could see arguments for several of the girls being virgins. But, some are just a flat "no" xP I have no clue if you made the MC a top, bottom or switch. But imo: You might should reconsider giving everyone a slow burn romance. You can still have a girl that's both horny and "pure" xP And tbh: With someone like Blackfire... it would make more sense that she starts by fucking your face, then develops feelings and works "backwards" towards the smooches and cuddling. (Similar with Jinx. Start by calling it "fucking", end by calling it "making love".)

That's just my thoughts on it though.
Like, currently I can basically play for an hour without anything sexual happening. Then get a "Oh right, this is a porn game." as the game suddenly shifts tone. Well, hope my ramblings were coherent at least.


- And yeah, it kinda seemed implied to be that type of game.
They personally bore me to tears. It's always some Gary Stu that's useless at sex. And all the girls are infantilized in order to fit.
Lots of guys do like them though.

Hahahaha! Thanks. We see things in different views. I am making this as a new attempt with the ideas in my perspective. For me it makes sense and I really like it. As a Game Maker and Story teller, I do things for the long run too. For you, now I can only say 'Wait and See'

 

[Kattlarv]

The first bug was fixed in latest version.

> You have a few times where you can have characters at two locations at once. (Like, after Terra's trek, she is at the gym and the beach at the same time.)
I will fix this in next update

> One semi-bug is that if you don't do BB's friendship event first, he vanishes for large chunks of the game.
After you done his second event, He will go away to do some thinking.

> I think the calendar over the bed might be bugged however. As it shows a picture with cut-off text on some days. Not sure if a bug, but not all events make time pass.
Will be fixed in next update with CGs

> After the talk with BB about a girlfriend, the dialogue screen does not go away. And leaves the rest of the UI in a constant blur.
Can you explain which event and where?

> There is a bug when attempting to visit Miko after seeing Robin in the evidence room. This occurs during the second time of day.
Explain this one too.

Not sure if a bug, but there's a sketch of Blackfire's head in her room after the car factory.
> Will fix this in next update
Thanks for the bug reports and review. I will keep doing my best

The first bug: I am playing the latest version though... Or is 0,2.a not the latest?

BB girlfriend: I included a screenshot. I don't recall the exact event. But it occurred in the girl's quarter. I think it was the "You need to get a girlfriend, man" one. OR the "I'll go ask them for a date" one. I should probably have written more notes... I do think it was the "I'll go ask them", as I recall the blur vanishing after talking to them.

Evidence room Miko: After you meet Robin in the evidence room for the "insert location into scooter" quests. If you attempt to visit Miko during the second time of the day. (after morning) the game crashes and shows the report I included.

And np. Hope this helps.

 

[MUPLUR]

The first bug: I am playing the latest version though... Or is 0,2.a not the latest?

BB girlfriend: I included a screenshot. I don't recall the exact event. But it occurred in the girl's quarter. I think it was the "You need to get a girlfriend, man" one. OR the "I'll go ask them for a date" one. I should probably have written more notes... I do think it was the "I'll go ask them", as I recall the blur vanishing after talking to them.

Evidence room Miko: After you meet Robin in the evidence room for the "insert location into scooter" quests. If you attempt to visit Miko during the second time of the day. (after morning) the game crashes and shows the report I included.

And np. Hope this helps.

BB girlfriend thing is a bug. Found and fixed. Will behave in next update.

For Miko bug, can you share the save file?

 

[Kattlarv]

Hahahaha! Thanks. We see things in different views. I am making this as a new attempt with the ideas in my perspective. For me it makes sense and I really like it. As a Game Maker and Story teller, I do things for the long run too. For you, now I can only say 'Wait and See'

I'll potentially come back and see where it goes.

I can say: After a sleep. I think the main issue I have with the current game is that: It's kinda "hypersexualized", while also attempting to be prude? To elaborate a bit: Basically: Within the first five minutes of gameplay. You can have the following happen: BB going "Boy do I love tiddies! Do you like tiddies? Course you do! Have tiddies app!" (Paraphrased for comedic effect). Walk in on BB jerking off and talk about jerking off. Have Starfire hurl PREGNANCY JUICE! in your face. (Again: Exaggerated for comedic effect.). Then it shoves interspecies BDSM at you... and then you have to play for two hours to be allowed a glimpse of Raven's shoulders xD

Like, it's a bit hard to take the game seriously when it yells about ass fucking and throws lube at you. Then turns around and tries to convince you it's a "proper lady" xP Like: If we break down BB's story arc. It basically boils down to:
- BB lowkey acts entitled to sex.
- MC tells him to stop being a whiny incel.
- BB asks MC to hook him up.
- MC talks to drug addicts. Who warns him to not let one of them get intoxicated.
- BB and MC goes to a implied double date with the drug addicts.
- Porn tropes happen.
- MC semi-intentionally gives them drugs.
- BB expresses intent to Bill Cosby the girls.
- MC shrugs.
- BB brags about how he used the "too high to consent" girls like sex toys to pleasure himself, while completely ignoring their pleasure.
- MC nods and says it's good BB stopped killing the vibe.
- MC lowkey implies BB and the girls are disgusting sluts.
And this is in a game that's supposed to be about "love". Bit hard to have that side by side when the MC the next day can go and have a heartfelt heart to heart about how people grow up and whatnot.
Also: I know you said you wanted to give BB a "happy ending", and I do want to say I found that amusing with how much he gets shit talked in the game xD

And as said: It also doesn't help that you've crippled the girls quite a bit, by using "girl" as an insult. (Especially as Jinx was known for doing the opposite.) And the to date: Only sexually active girls in the game, are porn caricatures.
Though, I will say chaste Starfire still beats the "too naive to know what sex is" Starfire I saw in another TT game... xD

But yes, "wait and see" is the only real recourse here
Though I can say it would take quite a lot to "balance things out".

 

[Kattlarv]

BB girlfriend thing is a bug. Found and fixed. Will behave in next update.

For Miko bug, can you share the save file?

Okies.

And I think? Let me see if I can find the save.
Should be this one. Just work, or do anything. Then try to enter Miko's building.

 

[MUPLUR]

Okies.

And I think? Let me see if I can find the save.
Should be this one. Just work, or do anything. Then try to enter Miko's building.

Found and fixed the bug. Will work in next update

 

[Zolkane]

cant find the damn camera for beasty

 

[MUPLUR]

cant find the damn camera for beasty

video camera? Will be in Beastboy's room, near the bed

 

[Zolkane]

video camera? Will be in Beastboy's room, near the bed

on the floor? cant seem to find it

im in beastboy chamber and cant see the camera