VN Ren'Py You Only Die TWICE [Demo] [Grievion]

[Lerd0]

copy/pasta from Patreon


Thank You for Your Support!

First off, I want to extend a huge thank you to everyone who has tried out the demo so far. Your feedback means the world to me, so please don’t hesitate to share your thoughts and critiques. This demo was created with just about a week of experience using Ren’Py. My background is in writing scripts, so this has been a learning process, and I know there’s so much more I can do as I continue developing the project.

What's Coming Next

I’m excited to share some insights into the future of this game and what you can expect. This project revolves around a world where many characters are Seducer Agents—skilled operatives who use seduction, teasing, and even sexual encounters to complete their missions. Whether it’s gathering intelligence, securing valuable items for blackmail, or carrying out assassinations, the stakes are high, and the methods are... unconventional.

Here’s a glimpse of what’s ahead:

• Sharing Content: This game will feature scenarios where characters interact and connect in ways that go beyond the main character’s perspective. Multiple love interests (LIs) will have their own dynamics, including interactions and relationships with each other—even when the MC isn’t around.
• Boundless Opportunities: The MC won’t be left out, with plenty of potential encounters tied to missions. Whether it’s seducing a target for critical information, gaining leverage, or achieving a mission objective, the game is full of possibilities for bold, sensual storytelling.

Thank you for coming along on this journey. I can’t wait to hear your thoughts and keep improving this project with your feedback! Stay tuned for updates and new content as I dive deeper into development.

Planned Tags: BDSM, Exhibitionism, Sharing, Swinging, Vaginal, Anal, Futa, Male Protag, Teasing, Oral Sex, Blackmail, Cheating, Exhibitionism, Spanking, Titfuck, Voyeurism, Romance, Sexual harassment, Masturbation, Milf, 3DCG, Big tits, Corruption.

A Sneak Peek into the Process

The demo you’ve played is actually a small segment repurposed from the first episode. It was designed to test how quickly and efficiently we could bring this project to life—all while continuing monthly updates for Perfect Housewife.

I’m thrilled to continue developing the rest of the episode and share it with you. Your feedback will be crucial in helping us refine the experience and gauge how well we’re balancing multiple projects.

...oh cool just came back home......
...planned tags added to op.....thx....
..seems like i also forgot to add ur patreon link....ma bad...

 

[Before I Forget]

Should be tagged "Text Based" as you spend more time reading from a phone then anything.

 

[Juerhullycin]

Here’s a glimpse of what’s ahead:

• Sharing Content: This game will feature scenarios where characters interact and connect in ways that go beyond the main character’s perspective. Multiple love interests (LIs) will have their own dynamics, including interactions and relationships with each other—even when the MC isn’t around.

I can’t wait to hear your thoughts and keep improving this project with your feedback!

My Feedback

 

[Joshy92]

You are the quickest draw in the West!

Good luck with the game dude.

 

[Griev]

Good luck with the game dude.

Thanks Joshy!

 

[Chris2606]

THX! Nice Pics, but harem along with Sharing, Swinging, Sexual harassment, Futa and so on in a KINETIC Novel is no my kind of Thing. Each Side ist forced to look at things, you don't want. Too much opposing kinks, ergo, a lot of scam posts between haters and lovers, less supporter on Patreon, ergo Story gets abandond. But thats only my 2 Cents about this, I think, I'll pass on this, but good luck, dev!

 

[ArunPrime]

Thank You for Your Support!

First off, I want to extend a huge thank you to everyone who has tried out the demo so far. Your feedback means the world to me, so please don’t hesitate to share your thoughts and critiques.

What's Coming Next

• Sharing Content: This game will feature scenarios where characters interact and connect in ways that go beyond the main character’s perspective. Multiple love interests (LIs) will have their own dynamics, including interactions and relationships with each other—even when the MC isn’t around.

Planned Tags: BDSM, Exhibitionism, Sharing, Swinging, Vaginal, Anal, Futa, Male Protag, Teasing, Oral Sex, Blackmail, Cheating, Exhibitionism, Spanking, Titfuck, Voyeurism, Romance, Sexual harassment, Masturbation, Milf, 3DCG, Big tits, Corruption.

I thought 2025 would be a good year, but after reading this, it seems like every year is the same

Dev didn't even say it's optional or not.
Not going to play even it's optional


We need a True Harem developer

 

[Juerhullycin]

I thought 2025 would be a good year, but after reading this, it seems like every year is the same

Dev didn't even say it's optional or not.
Not going to play even it's optional


We need a True Harem developer

its kinetic he doesn't need to say its forced that's part of kinetic novels

 

[Griev]

THX! Nice Pics, but harem along with Sharing, Swinging, Sexual harassment, Futa and so on in a KINETIC Novel is no my kind of Thing. Each Side ist forced to look at things, you don't want. Too much opposing kinks, ergo, a lot of scam posts between haters and lovers, less supporter on Patreon, ergo Story gets abandond. But thats only my 2 Cents about this, I think, I'll pass on this, but good luck, dev!

Thanks!
Game will never be abandoned. I knew going into this that I'd have a smaller game, and I'm cool with that if it means I get to make what I want without having to sellout for money. The only tag that I think doesn't fit though is harem. I don't have that in my tags. There are multiple sex partners, but I wouldn't consider it a harem. Harems games aren't my cup of tea!

 

[yoyomistro]

Thanks!
Game will never be abandoned. I knew going into this that I'd have a smaller game, and I'm cool with that if it means I get to make what I want without having to sellout for money. The only tag that I think doesn't fit though is harem. I don't have that in my tags. There are multiple sex partners, but I wouldn't consider it a harem. Harems games aren't my cup of tea!

IDK why they put the harem tag on games that aren't, and then have to clean up the inevitable chud flood that results every time... if you can't remove it yourself, report the post to have them change it.

 

[Griev]

Lerd0 Hey there! Could you remove the Harem tag if possible?
If this needs to be something I'd need to report in order to get it changed, I can do that if needed instead.
Just let me know, and thanks either way!

 

[Chris2606]

Thanks!
Game will never be abandoned. I knew going into this that I'd have a smaller game, and I'm cool with that if it means I get to make what I want without having to sellout for money. The only tag that I think doesn't fit though is harem. I don't have that in my tags. There are multiple sex partners, but I wouldn't consider it a harem. Harems games aren't my cup of tea!

Hi Griev, ok, if Harem is not a goal, then its ok, if you go this way. Its just not my Kind, but who I am to tell you, what you do in your own Novel. I got this game at searching for harem, so if the the tag is removed, there should be everything OK. I'm looking for others games now, but I wish you maximum success and fun on developing this for other guys who love this way of novel. Cya!

 

[Lerd0]

IDK why they put the harem tag on games that aren't, and then have to clean up the inevitable chud flood that results every time... if you can't remove it yourself, report the post to have them change it.

..cuz it fits the tag....

Lerd0 Hey there! Could you remove the Harem tag if possible?
If this needs to be something I'd need to report in order to get it changed, I can do that if needed instead.
Just let me know, and thanks either way!

..sorry but according to tag definitions....it fits a harem.....

 

[Xxrizz]

..cuz it fits the tag....

..sorry but according to tag definitions....it fits a harem.....

This dev is into cuckold man what you on about ....he never in million years will make a harem game you kidding me ...doesn't matter the overview just saying ....but good luck anyway to his game ..the ratio will be pretty soon be 3:12 for the NTr and sharing or what not cuz of "story" proggression

 

[Lerd0]

This dev is into cuckold man what you on about ....he never in million years will make a harem game you kidding me ...doesn't matter the overview just saying ....but good luck anyway to his game ..

..being ntr....sharing...or any other tag....doesn't mean the harem tag gets removed...
...u only need 3 ppl to want to fuck the mc......dats all.....

 

[Xxrizz]

..being ntr....sharing...or any other tag....doesn't mean the harem tag gets removed...
...u only need 3 ppl to want to fuck the mc......dats all.....

Oh ok i never could understand the F95 definitions and stuff but ok whatever it doesn't matter let me move on i don't wanna "flag" the thread

 

[Lerd0]

Oh ok i never could understand the F95 definitions and stuff but ok whatever it doesn't matter let me move on i don't wanna "flag" the thread

..yes the tag definition here is pretty shit for now.....
....in theory i could tag most games on here as harem.....

 

[newgenerationmafia]

hmm. It's looks old I guess

 

[LinkBox88]

Maybe I'm just too old but to me these phone interactions are just sterile and lack the proper intimacy and body language needed for real character development.

As much as possible, try to have conversations happen between people rather than text over the phone. Also, if it must happen, let's also see the other person (not just whatever selfies they choose to send).

I just found that the extended conversation with Issa on the phone was much too long and boring in terms of presentation. We just had a shirtless MC render accompanied by shitty phone reading. It was annoying to be reading that long of an exchange off a tiny phone screen. It was also jarring to be jumping between that and the extra narration that would pop in at times.

This was our first interaction with Issa so it would have been much more interesting and more revealing to have shown HER during the conversation. Maybe she's trying on lingerie or taking a bath or something. Or something more vanilla that reveals something about her character or personality. Just seemed like a wasted opportunity to present that scene in a better way.

 

[Griev]

Maybe I'm just too old but to me these phone interactions are just sterile and lack the proper intimacy and body language needed for real character development.

As much as possible, try to have conversations happen between people rather than text over the phone. Also, if it must happen, let's also see the other person (not just whatever selfies they choose to send).

I just found that the extended conversation with Issa on the phone was much too long and boring in terms of presentation. We just had a shirtless MC render accompanied by shitty phone reading. It was annoying to be reading that long of an exchange off a tiny phone screen. It was also jarring to be jumping between that and the extra narration that would pop in at times.

This was our first interaction with Issa so it would have been much more interesting and more revealing to have shown HER during the conversation. Maybe she's trying on lingerie or taking a bath or something. Or something more vanilla that reveals something about her character or personality. Just seemed like a wasted opportunity to present that scene in a better way.

Hey man, thanks a lot for checking it out. I was unhappy with how things played out in the demo, but at the same time this was more a proof of concept more so than a true introduction to the world.

As far as showing the characters during conversations, I agree 100% and I've been working on nailing this as there is a focus on character building in the project I have planned. There will be more lengthy conversations, so I'm looking at ways to do more with what's on screen during those scenes. It can't just be the MC with 1 facial expression the entire time.
I have an actual episode release planned for next month. I hope you come back and give it a try and let me know if you have the same feeling about the conversations or anything else that could use improvement. I appreciate the feedback!