VN Ren'Py You Only Die TWICE [v0.1] [Grievion]

[Zoomaa]

I've been pretty straight forward with what the game is, will be about.
From the very 1st page of this thread:

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Now what I don't understand is why those that don't like "sharing" content, always end up in the threads of games that have the tag?

The girls won't be forced to do anything sexual. You're good my man!

It was just a demo that was available as a proof of concept. It was poorly made as I'd only just started to learn Ren'py and Daz. It'll need to be improved to match the rest of the game before being restored.
It's still available on my Patreon though.

Dev you aren't being straightforward at all, your overview is very misleading

Overview:
You may be familiar with me work writing Perfect Housewife these last few updates. If you enjoy the mix of humor, hot scenes and plenty of teasing; I plan to bring a similar style into a new project. You Only Die Twice follows a young Seducer Agent as he deals with life changing revelations about someone close to him. Follow him, his stoner best friend Kevin and a cast of world class beauties as I weave a story of secrets, and intimacy. Will our young Agent fall deep into the well of depravity, drowned by his own thirst for physical affection, or will he manage to keep his head above water?

This overview makes the reader believe this is a game about seducing only the targets, something like Cybernetic Seduction but that is only partly true from your description, the game focuses on sharing more than anything else my advice is to state your idea at the top of the overview or you will risk having the thread turned to warzone with every update.

Edit : add the tags like sharing and NTR even if the ntr is not in the game, because for the lack of a better term most people consider LI who will have sex with other people falls under NTR

 

[Lerd0]

add the tags like sharing and NTR even if the ntr is not in the game,

 

[Eleanorduval]

It will remain kinect for now.

it could be nice at some points to choice,as there is characters who people dislike and don’t want to interact with them (speaking about the sharing aspect)

 

[Griev]

it could be nice at some points to choice,as there is characters who people dislike and don’t want to interact with them (speaking about the sharing aspect)

I'm working to understand a tool that would help me keep track of choices and decision made in game. I DO want choices later on, but for now I'd like to lay the ground work and get characters in place for more interesting possibilities first.
I do understand that there are readers that would like to keep Larissa to themselves, and keep her from being with someone else. If she were my girl I'd feel the same way lol.

However... characters have their own personalities, so I have to be careful with how choices are presented.

 

[Griev]

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Follow him, his stoner best friend Kevin
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yeah , nope
best-bro scenarios are a nightmare

good for nothing ,meddling and mostly getting the mc in situations the the mc not want
(like date setups)

so , which one do we have here?

Kev is the type of friend that'll drive you to save your girl.
He's the type that would take an ass kicking for a friend.

 

[Boehser Onkel]

well

the mc a cuck - didnt see that coming
signing out here

btw - how can kevin respond ,while driving ,to the textmessages the mc get in the back of the car
makes no fecking sense

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[Silken on Demand]

You do realize that even strong confident dominant men can enjoy sharing their wives/gf's right? It takes a different form than others though. They don't sit back and watch and wait, theyre proactive, they initiate and they participate in everything. Stop pigeon holing shit just because that's all you ever see on F95.

I love this guy haha <3

 

[Zoomaa]

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good luck with cleaning the thread with every single update then

 

[janbiel12]

What are we, some kind of Shadow?

 

[Griev]

 

[MrDude1977]

I've been pretty straight forward with what the game is, will be about.
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Now what I don't understand is why those that don't like "sharing" content, always end up in the threads of games that have the tag?

The girls won't be forced to do anything sexual. You're good my man!

It was just a demo that was available as a proof of concept. It was poorly made as I'd only just started to learn Ren'py and Daz. It'll need to be improved to match the rest of the game before being restored.
It's still available on my Patreon though.

You ask why ppl that don't like sharing content always end up in the threads of games that have the tag. Well i tell you why, because there is a lot of games that has those tags avoidable. So we show up and ask if it is. And some of us give our input on it if it is not and some time "Not always" but some times the Dev will make it avoidable, if not we leave.

 

[Silken on Demand]

You ask why ppl that don't like sharing content always end up in the threads of games that have the tag. Well i tell you why, because there is a lot of games that has those tags avoidable. So we show up and ask if it is. And some of us give our input on it if it is not and some time "Not always" but some times the Dev will make it avoidable, if not we leave.

Why make it avoidable? What would be the point of that?

 

[MrDude1977]

Why make it avoidable? What would be the point of that?

Just answering his question. But the point to make it avoidable? Maaaaybe because people would rather not share their women? But any way, I was just answering the question why people that doesn't like the swinging tag still come into the thread.

 

[Silken on Demand]

Just answering his question. But the point to make it avoidable? Maaaaybe because people would rather not share their women? But any way, I was just answering the question why people that doesn't like the swinging tag still come into the thread.

Do you like harem games?

 

[AlwaysJustM]

I'm always genuinely surprised by the level of judging I see here of all places. If there was anywhere that I would "think to each their own" would apply it would be here and yet so much kink shaming...

I honestly do not have any of the main kinks I find in 99% of the AVNs so I always just expect to put up with it and pick mine based on art style, the character design and personalities, and the non-sexual part of the story (plot).

I usually can't relate to the MC, do not look anything like the MC, and often just flat out can't stand the MC so when it comes to the sexual parts it's always mental gymnastics to get "immersed."

I kinda figured it had to be the same for everyone for the most part. It's like my brain is actively "patching" while I'm reading so that the scenes work for me. It's been that way since my first novel. If you guys are getting novels that actually line up with your particular tastes, I'm jealous.

 

[Silken on Demand]

I'm always genuinely surprised by the level of judging I see here of all places. If there was anywhere that I would "think to each their own" would apply it would be here and yet so much kink shaming...

I honestly do not have any of the main kinks I find in 99% of the AVNs so I always just expect to put up with it and pick mine based on art style, the character design and personalities, and the non-sexual part of the story (plot).

I usually can't relate to the MC, do not look anything like the MC, and often just flat out can't stand the MC so when it comes to the sexual parts it's always mental gymnastics to get "immersed."

I kinda figured it had to be the same for everyone for the most part. It's like my brain is actively "patching" while I'm reading so that the scenes work for me. It's been that way since my first novel. If you guys are getting novels that actually line up with your particular tastes, I'm jealous.

It's hard to please everyone all of the time. And it's true shaming people on here is kind of silly
considering all the fingers pointing back. But there are good immersive stories out there. You just
have to know where to look, really. Even something that might seem really off putting can turn out
to be diamond. The problem is when people go tribal and start setting up camps and gatekeeping.

 

[AlwaysJustM]

It's hard to please everyone all of the time. And it's true shaming people on here is kind of silly
considering all the fingers pointing back. But there are good immersive stories out there. You just
have to know where to look, really. Even something that might seem really off putting can turn out
to be diamond. The problem is when people go tribal and start setting up camps and gatekeeping.

Agreed! I really enjoy the stories in spite of not sharing the particular sexual taste. None of my favorite games were ever ruined by differences in my preferences. At worst I roll my eyes or cringe at certain scenes that are hard to suspend the disbelief but overall it's the world, the art, and the actual relationships, which are rarely truly defined by the tags, girlfriend, harem, sister, etc., that make the stories worth it.

Just seeing how people respond to the alternative tastes made me realize how rarely I ever agree with the MC's tastes in any of the games I play. I'd really be missing out if I filtered novels based on that.

 

[Silken on Demand]

Agreed! I really enjoy the stories in spite of not sharing the particular sexual taste. None of my favorite games were ever ruined by differences in my preferences. At worst I roll my eyes or cringe at certain scenes that are hard to suspend the disbelief but overall it's the world, the art, and the actual relationships, which are rarely truly defined by the tags, girlfriend, harem, sister, etc., that make the stories worth it.

Just seeing how people respond to the alternative tastes made me realize how rarely I ever agree with the MC's tastes in any of the games I play. I'd really be missing out if I filtered novels based on that.

Hopefully you find things to like about You Only Die Twice. There are a lot of misconceptions about the story
and characters and even Griev's motivations. No matter how many times he says what they are it's like they
fall on deaf ears. This is a story about spies and intrigues. Secret Agents. It's not a story about people cheating
on each other or forming harems haha This is some life and death stuff. Unlike another story with a similar theme
where one of the main characters forgets their lives are on the line and acts like an utter idiot for the sake of stupid
MC syndrome. The MCs here know full well what is at stake at all times. But they are human. They have flaws.

Anyway. I really hope you enjoy You Only Die Twice
There is still a lot more to come.

 

[Griev]

I'm always genuinely surprised by the level of judging I see here of all places. If there was anywhere that I would "think to each their own" would apply it would be here and yet so much kink shaming...

I honestly do not have any of the main kinks I find in 99% of the AVNs so I always just expect to put up with it and pick mine based on art style, the character design and personalities, and the non-sexual part of the story (plot).

I usually can't relate to the MC, do not look anything like the MC, and often just flat out can't stand the MC so when it comes to the sexual parts it's always mental gymnastics to get "immersed."

I kinda figured it had to be the same for everyone for the most part. It's like my brain is actively "patching" while I'm reading so that the scenes work for me. It's been that way since my first novel. If you guys are getting novels that actually line up with your particular tastes, I'm jealous.

The main reason I'm even making a VN at all is 100% because there was no MC that I could identify with. They don't look like me. They aren't built like me. I don't really see MCs that looks or acts like Lucian. Stoic guy that doesn't get flustered around nudity, get nervous around strong, powerful women isn't common.

My hope is to create a unique story with unique characters and hopefully scenes that are hot/exciting. The reason I posted a "future tags" comment once the game ended up on this site was to help guide those that aren't into the type of game I'm creating away and hopefully upon something they'd actually enjoy. But that is not what happened!

Hopefully you find things to like about You Only Die Twice. There are a lot of misconceptions about the story
and characters and even Griev's motivations. No matter how many times he says what they are it's like they
fall on deaf ears. This is a story about spies and intrigues. Secret Agents. It's not a story about people cheating
on each other or forming harems haha This is some life and death stuff. Unlike another story with a similar theme
where one of the main characters forgets their lives are on the line and acts like an utter idiot for the sake of stupid
MC syndrome. The MCs here know full well what is at stake at all times. But they are human. They have flaws.

Anyway. I really hope you enjoy You Only Die Twice
There is still a lot more to come.

Right.
No "stupid MC" in order to push forward the story. Everyone makes mistakes and he'll make his own, but hopefully he won't be considered a "stupid MC" when it's all said and done! After all, as you said 'lives are at stake'!

 

[AlwaysJustM]

The main reason I'm even making a VN at all is 100% because there was no MC that I could identify with. They don't look like me. They aren't built like me. I don't really see MCs that looks or acts like Lucian. Stoic guy that doesn't get flustered around nudity, get nervous around strong, powerful women isn't common.

My hope is to create a unique story with unique characters and hopefully scenes that are hot/exciting. The reason I posted a "future tags" comment once the game ended up on this site was to help guide those that aren't into the type of game I'm creating away and hopefully upon something they'd actually enjoy. But that is not what happened!

Yeah, this MC has more than two things in common with me, but honestly just not looking or behaving like a less-than-14-year-old boy is a huge workload off of my mental patching.

Other than that, the most powerful incentive is the MC being likeable and realistic for me. I don't really care what their personal tastes are as long as I actually want them to succeed. I like Lucian. He feels like someone I'd get along with so I'm glad to help him get on with whatever gets him on.

Stories are really about stepping into another world for me, so I'm more of a visitor than a self-insert type. Somewhat coincidentally, I often leave the story with more understanding about people with different tastes in a positive way.

The themes in this one are already a hit for me. The characters feel like people. The MC has a dynamic personality. I also like his friend and that he's not there just to make the MC seem superior but also seems capable and like he's not a complete loser when it comes to women. The female characters are very likable. And it seems like there will be a lot of non-sexual story to make the actual scenes more spontaneous, compelling, and exciting. I really enjoy stories where sex is part of the story not so much the plot of the story. AVNs aren't really the place I go to see my stepsister get stuck in the dryer for the 1000th time, lol.

Anyway, I'm in. Looking forward to what you come up with.