So, interesting concept. I think the MC has a bit of a sheltered/naive view of how women really are. I think he's also been lied to in spirit, even if not 'technically', when he asked Larissa (I think that was her name) if she 'slept with anyone' and she said no.
Well if she fucked a shit ton of men, but never actually slept with any of them, she'd not be lying, in technical terms, but she'd pretty much have shattered the spirit of the question he asked. Or else she's letting them fuck her in the ass and claiming she's saving the pussy for him. Either way, dude's been a cuck he just doesn't know it.
With all that said, there's nothing wrong with the story and how it's set up now, if the following occurs:
1. MC stonewalls his supposed 'saving herself' best female friend, Larissa, and steps way back and stands up for himself. You don't get cum where she had it without sex, unless the dude was getting a pussyjob, but that's much less likely than her simply fucking all the dudes to accomplish her mission.
2. MC in general needs to have backbone and stand up for himself. If someone lies then he lies back, if they cheat, he does the same, only more. Treat fire with fire, only hotter. Too many games, including the one you wrote for, have a spineless cuck as a MC, when they claim not to.
3. If there is sharing and swinging, the dude needs to be getting an equal amount of pussy, and if it's like the woman is out fucking other dudes, he needs to be fucking just as many other chicks. Again, to not make him seem like the mopey, stay at home cuck who just hopes his partner is having a good time banging everyone except him.
'Swinging' especially should be equalized, where if the woman fucks 2 dudes, the MC get's to fuck 2 women, etc. 'Sharing' should be the same, with the dude fucking as many women as any female character fucks dudes.
4. The only tag missing would be 'group sex' which would usually (I think according to the tags) would be situations where the MC has multiple women he's having sex with at the same time, and they are having sex with each other too. That may be in there as one of the other tags, but wanted to mention that.
5. MC pairs up with Brandi to find out what people are *really* doing, and if they are lying to him, he treats them accordingly by cutting them out of his life, or just becominng a sperm receptacle if he fucks them. In the 'job' he's in you have to have someone to trust, and so far at least it doesn't sound like he really has anyone he can trust.
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So yeah, not a bad start, but it really all depends on how much backbone the MC has, and if he let's women walk all over him or not. The 'other game' you wrote for, I don't know when you came on board, but that is a prime example of what shouldn't happen in this one. Specifically, the MC just sitting back and letting the woman/women call the shots and basically run the show and fuck whoever they want to, when they want to, and then act like it was the guys idea. That 'other game' from the very beginning was the main female character calling all the shots and being in control, and just the MC thought he was. That started as a cuck game that quickly became NTR from the wife's side when she pushed well past 'approved limits' with her actions and deliberately did things to hurt the MC just to 'push him' to get what *she* wanted. I stopped playing that one when the theme of the game, dudes a cuck but just doesn't realize it, started to appear.
We don't need games like that with weak, cuck type MC's, well unless the game intro calls it out, then those who don't like it can avoid it. Hopefully this isn't one of those type games, and the MC is the one who calls all the shots, at least where he's involved. I personally don't care if other characters fuck around with each other if it's all physical, just don't cheat and if they DO cheat as appears to have happened with the demo, have the MC just walk away.
If it's all just sex with no emotional stuff involved then it really doesn't matter who fucks who, the women are all just cocksleeves at that point anyway. But if you lie to someone, that shit needs to be exploded and the MC not tolerate a single second of that as disrespect. So far at least this isn't a cuck game, if it turns into one then that's your choice, but you asked for feedback so here you go.
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