Really liking this game, although I could do away with the more magic mumbo jumbo stuff.
Looking forward to future updates.
Looking forward to future updates.
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TGafy
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Then there would be no story. Without the magic mumbo jumbo stuff, the MC would not find himself in a new, younger body. An author
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Is it possible to have a normal sibling relationship with Ruby? I want to do a playthrough where Emma believes the two of you are 100% exclusive even as you fuck girls behind her back.
Sure they can. It's literally the easiest thing they can do.
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Ruby is at the moment the only girl with which you need to have a romantic relationship with.
It is possible to stay faithful to Ruby and Emma. Emma is aware of your feelings for Ruby and is fine with it.
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Yes, obviously. I meant shouldn't and have gone back and edited my post.
An author shouldn't introduce something like a soul-swap and not bring up other paranormal activities. If it was neglected, I'd see it as bad writing. Introducing an important element like that and completely ignoring it after seems like a poor choice for a writer. Zargon doesn't have that problem.
Edit: More thoughts came after I posted ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
The same can be said that anyone can put words on paper. But not everyone can write a story that captivates their audience. Are there loose ends or do plots reach fulfilling ends? A perfect example is with the Saw films. At the end of the first movie, Dr. Gordon gets out. But the few movies after never told the audience what happened to him after he crawled out of there and that always bit at me. It was shocking and satisfying for me when that character's story returned and filled us in on what happened after the first film.
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Hi everyone, how's it going? Like I said before:
You know how in most cases with games on F95, it's rare when people post screenshots that show you what the dialogue is like, which often means you don't know if the dialogue is good or bad? (Plus I just wish people would post more screenshots for the games in general.) Well I really wish that wasn't the case, and as I'm always being told, be the change you want to see, and as I always follow up with, sure if you got enough passion for it. Well I definitely have enough passion for this!
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Wow, I forgot how well paced this game is, chapters just fly on by. I love it!
You know how in most cases with games on F95, it's rare when people post screenshots that show you what the dialogue is like, which often means you don't know if the dialogue is good or bad? (Plus I just wish people would post more screenshots for the games in general.) Well I really wish that wasn't the case, and as I'm always being told, be the change you want to see, and as I always follow up with, sure if you got enough passion for it. Well I definitely have enough passion for this!
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Wow, I forgot how well paced this game is, chapters just fly on by. I love it!
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How many chapters are in season 1?
Also, are all of them really short like the first 7 chapters seemed to be?
Also, are all of them really short like the first 7 chapters seemed to be?
I just found this game and would like to start from the very first episode of first season but am unable to locate it anywhere. If someone could possibly tell me where to find it I would really appreciate it, thanks.
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Thanks so much, the page I saw wasn't like this one, must not have loaded all the way
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So...the one that DIED saving the young man's life family is COMPLETELY unknown to the boy's family, they have NO FCKING idea who one another is, never mentioning it, and he is even friends with his SON, at the same SCHOOL, yet fck all gets mentioned??
The boy behaving POLAR OPPOSITE to his daughter, and treating her like fucking GOLD is somehow strange and weird...the daughter of the man that gave HIS LIFE to save that boy??
The bitch mother/ wife that's left behind, doesn't recognize the boy her husband DIED FOR??
The one who died had NO IDEA who his wife employed, never BEEN to her business, and needed the fcking DIRECTIONS to get there?
WHAT PLANET is this totally fine and understandable??
GET the fck OUT of here!
When an ORGAN DONOR has the recipient whose life is SAVED by that organ, so that person can continue living a little longer, the DONOR and recipient KNOW one another!
When my girlfriend had HER life saved as a youth from a SHARK ATTACK while surfing, she grew close with the girl who saved her life and her family, still to this DAY we get together and spend time together since they are part of her extended FAMILY!
They are literally sisters from both sides of the family now.
The boy behaving POLAR OPPOSITE to his daughter, and treating her like fucking GOLD is somehow strange and weird...the daughter of the man that gave HIS LIFE to save that boy??
The bitch mother/ wife that's left behind, doesn't recognize the boy her husband DIED FOR??
The one who died had NO IDEA who his wife employed, never BEEN to her business, and needed the fcking DIRECTIONS to get there?
WHAT PLANET is this totally fine and understandable??
GET the fck OUT of here!
When an ORGAN DONOR has the recipient whose life is SAVED by that organ, so that person can continue living a little longer, the DONOR and recipient KNOW one another!
When my girlfriend had HER life saved as a youth from a SHARK ATTACK while surfing, she grew close with the girl who saved her life and her family, still to this DAY we get together and spend time together since they are part of her extended FAMILY!
They are literally sisters from both sides of the family now.
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First of all, it's a porn game and at least it's more innovative than most stories.
Secondly, the old MC buried himself so much in work that he had no idea what was going on in his family anymore. It requires some suspension of disbelief but it does happen.
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That's the only part you picked up on huh, the ONLY part that is excusable OR plausible.
We see that from the first frame, Paul didn't want to have anything to do with his life at all and distanced himself from it.
We get that in the first scene, everything following is incredulous at best.
The MAIN point I had was BOTH families are so very interconnected within the narrative, BUT they have ZERO clue who the other set is, being in a relationship for several years with a girl who lived through that firsthand, it's not only improbable but IMPOSSIBLE that this could even be fictionalized, even basing the fcking blame on it being a porn game.
Life can be altered, fictionalized, warped, and changed to be a shadow of its former self, but the main premise behind them NOT knowing a damn thing about one another, especially Pauls's wife ASKING who the fck HE was...the boy her husband gave his LIFE for, the one that would have easily been the center of EVERY story involving the tragedy is just ludicrous, with ZERO excuses for creating a "story" like this at all!
Lastly do not even THINK about replying with a short answer that I can forsee you are most likely mulling over in your head, even before you sent that reply, that "If I don't like it, move ON to something else" since THAT stupid form of thinking doesn't GET the developer to improve, alter or advance THEIR way of thinking.
Apathy is FAR more destructive than constructive criticism!~
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Well, I would suggest to stop with whatever you are drinking or whatever drugs you are taking and relax a little bit.
We are talking about a porn game. Porn is generally not known for it's clever or deep stories.
This one, in my opinion, has a plot which may be a bit far-fetched, or even inconsistent (as seems to be your position), but which is still more creative than 90% of the other games here. Especially if we are talking about the incest harem genre.
Most games don't really go further than "my mom is so beautiful" and "my son has such a big cock" as an excuse for them fucking.
In this game, the dead guy is this typical incest game MC, but after his death, his spirit is now replaced by an old soul with lots of experience with relationships and life in general. That makes the mom and sister falling for his "new" personality at least a bit more plausible.
Anyway, when it comes to constructive criticism, you are almost 3 years too late to this party. The problems that you point out are so deeply engrained in the story, you'll have to rewrite everything. And I hope and think that Zargon_games won't do that. This story, while theoretically it could go on for ever, is I think for at least 67% done. The dev just needs to bring everything to a good conclusion.
All in all, I would, indeed, suggest what you already wrote: "If I don't like it, move ON to something else"
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LMFAO!
Yet again you miss the majority of the premise behind what had me so passionate that I had to type it out here.
I REALLY am not surprised that there wasn't more you could cherry-pick from what I said to spin on a positive scale, since there wasn't much fuel for that fire was there.
It's not hard at ALL to be creative enough to have a basic understanding of what would happen in the beginning scenario, hell they wouldn't even have to research much about it, since COMMON SENSE should have easily kicked in.
You talk like this story was groundbreaking, how it was so much better than anything published on here.
I have played hundreds of games right from this site and watched them not only progress but learn from their and OTHERS' previous mistakes, then use that knowledge to not ONLY make the rest of the game/ novels better but drastically improve future projects they work on!
Works of art like Timestamps, Being A DIK, City Of Broken Dreamers, or the best reference I can THINK of is Genesis Order!
Look at the TWO previous installments of THAT game, "Lust Epidemic" and "Treasure of Nadia", the two that define G.O. and how much better it is compared to the two LINKED games in the series of stand-alone projects (you do not need to play the earlier ones but the references in each are obvious and apparent), then observe how it started rough and choppy in their first game, improved 1000% in their second, following up to their current project Genesis Order.
See what I did there "Genius" (psst that wasnt actually calling you a genius, it was sarcasm...so don't bother thanking me for the insult..or what you might perceive as a compliment) this was a comparison for learning what parts failed, then working on them to improve and make OTHER projects better, and the ones I listed got SO much better, since they LISTENED to public feedback, used THOSE facts, then either implemented them OR restarted the projects fresh as a result...like intelligent creators often do.
Stop drinking or taking whatever drugs you perceive I am doing to what..think clearly lol?
I don't do drugs, nor drink, nice projecting you have going on there.
3 years too late to this party am I?
You seem to be oblivious that if my comments and issues were read, THIS developer as well as others might just pick up on the problems and either alter them or not have them at all...or use more of that miracle drug named "Common Sence"
Don't bother responding to this, I have already left it in the rearview, especially when you have fanfare to support your ridiculous responses, where you don't even come up with creative solutions on your own, you just cherry-pick ONE idea and try to shoot it down lol.