VN Ren'Py Yumi's Temptation [Ch.1 v1.0] [RaftPirate]

[bandyta80]

Are these choices working correctly because whether I agree to a photo shoot or refuse it is the same

 

[goldenboy812]

good start!

 

[rafa30]

I like

 

[eldekke]

alguna traduccion al español?

 

[single_guy_from_au]

Will she resist the temptation, or fall into Thompson’s dangerous web?

I am guessing - she will resist?

 

[Pdr602]

Thanks for sharing your thoughts! I'm a very new developer, and your feedback really helps me improve.
I've already written a long script, so I can't change characters now, but please wait for Version 1 to drop and check out how the story plays out!

Here's my response to your points:
Yes, there will be more characters going after Yumi, not just Mr. Thompson.
I get that you'd prefer a hot boss over Mr. Thompson. The script is locked, so he's staying, but he won't win Yumi easily. Atleast it's not gonna happen in Chapter 1 or 2, maybe in Future or maybe not.
Don't worry, this is a slow-build story. No quick hookups here. There's a chase and lots of plot before anything big happens.
I'm already working on adding sound.
And for Tags, Actually I've followed other games and believe I've chosen appropriate tags for now. If not I'll update the tags with Version 1 release. I plan to add more categories in the future.
Also Yes, there is lesbian and group sex planned, but it will be included in future updates or releases.
Currently there are no Animations, but in future I'll add.
One more thing, I don't have a Mac, and don't want to post without testing, which is why I haven't released a Mac version.

For now, I may or may not interact or reply with you all until I release Version 1. But Thanks again for your ideas! I'd love to hear your likes or dislikes. Please wait for 1st Release to see how it all comes together!

Enjoying it so far. Look forward to the addition of sound and animation. Best of luck.

 

[cyberSpacePirat]

Thanks for sharing your thoughts! I'm a very new developer, and your feedback really helps me improve.
I've already written a long script, so I can't change characters now, but please wait for Version 1 to drop and check out how the story plays out!

Can you make the text larger (just a little bigger font size)? It's too small...

 

[Kaikoaa98]

mac?

 

[cyberSpacePirat]

@RaftPirate
When are you planning the next update, and will it be full chapter 1?

 

[RaftPirate]

@RaftPirate
When are you planning the next update, and will it be full chapter 1?

I’m planning to release the update before the end of November. It will include the complete Prologue to give a clear direction to the story, along with the start of Chapter 1, featuring approximately 500+ renders. I’ll also be rectifying the user interface, adding sound, and addressing the feedback others have provided.

 

[RaftPirate]

Yumi's Temptation - Chapter 1 (Ongoing) v1.0 - Early Access
The early access version of Yumi's Temptation Chapter 1 (v1.0) is now available on Patreon! If you'd like to support the project, you can download and play it directly from there. Available for: Windows/Linux, Mac & Android

If you're not able to support at the moment, no worries! I'll be updating the game in the community soon, so stay tuned for the public release.
Thank you for your support!

Here’s a little preview of what’s coming ..

Spoiler: Sneak Peak

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[Araxnh]

I hope she doesn't have sex with her husband(I can't watch boring sex between married people) .I have no problem with all the other men.

 

[megadrive2000]

At the beginning when she enters the bathroom
Missing animation

couldn‘t find file

images/animation/CH01/anim03.webp

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Yumi... I am your Father!!
...
Well, can you at least call me, Daddy?


THX-

 

[TheUnDoge]

Nice writing TY

 

[bennycack]

this is weird...

refuse to do anything with choices as old man (e.g. don't stare and don't knock over vase) (giving him choices is odd to me to begin with) - he still stares at tits and fantasizes later
turn down everything as wife - still forced into photo shoot
turn down blowjob at cinema because the husband is a sack of shit - husband proceeds to rape wife in bathroom... is this avoidable if just suck his pecker? Edit: just rechecked.. all the dialogue in the restroom is as if she sucked him off anyway (wife saying she cant believe what she did and stranger following them saying they are going at it again)

Why not just make a kinetic novel? Has there been any choice so far that made a difference? It's possible, I only ask since after the first couple choices being ignored I just started skimming the text and moving along fast as possible without reading every single letter.

 

[megadrive2000]

Yeah,choices are without consequences and the husband is a bummer.

You choose staring and groping and she feels not comfortable with husbands boss.
You don‘t - exactly the same…“he always stares at me“ eehhhmmmm…no?
Would be nice if this decision led to her liking and trusting his boss first….later corruption,cheating…

You choose to tell the husband from the photoshoot she denies it - so: no choice

Husband works alot, denies sex. But in the cinema he is a uncontrollable testerone-bomb….sure.

He found her on the magazine cover and now he behaves like a pouting child and screams DIVORCE!!! lol

I hope the next shootings are even hotter and her paychecks bigger than his salary in the whole year.
I hope the husband gets what he deserves: All warehouse workers,interns,boss,Managing Director of Headquarters,janitor will have fun with the new secretary/topmodel.

I like the game,really. She is hot and graphics and animations are great. But the choices are no choices and the lyrics from the husband are unrealistic and ridiculous.


But hey - its an erotic novel - not Shakespeare.

 

[A_S_K_23]

Just now played the game it's good! When will be the next update?

 

[Paradox004]

Sounds like the choices are pointless, and the male protagonist tag especially isn't appropriate. Like, yeah, apparently there are "choices" as a guy... but Yumi is the mc and even her choices aren't relevant.

Usually we aren't meant to mention other games if I remember the rules correctly, so I usually don't... but PLEASE check out Girlfriend for how this should properly be done, imo. You make choices mainly as the gf, iirc... but some as the bf such as "Let this dude be a voyeur and perv on my gf" or "Tell him to cut it out and leave." But as the gf you can basically be like, "Sure, I'll suck your dick." or "Fuck off. Don't even look at me again, or I'll call the cops!"

Make the choices matter, or remove them and add the kinetic tag, dude.

Edit: I'll add that some people will like it, if tagged properly. But you'll keep getting people who won't, with incorrect tags. (Technically, "kinetic" isn't "correct" if you have these fake choices... but let's be real, it's more accurate.)

 

[RaftPirate]

I just wanted to let you know that I'm reading all of your comments and reviews, and I really appreciate the feedback. Keep it coming! It's helping me get better, and I'm sure I can improve the game with your support.

A couple of months ago, I was just a player. Now I'm making my own game, and I'm learning as I go. I'm new to DAZ, new to coding, and I've made a lot of trash — including bad renders and trash animations. That's why I tried AI animations for now, but it's not permanent. I'm still learning and working to get better.

As for the UPDATE – Right now, I'm working on a Christmas Special (Check Announcement Tab) that will be released on December 25th (early access for Patrons). This Christmas Special is connected to the main game and will tie directly into Chapter 1. After that, I'll continue working on Chapter 1, along with all the reworks based on your feedback

Thanks again for your support! I'm excited to keep improving and bringing you new updates. Keep sharing your thoughts with me!