From the tags I glimpse a typical (perhaps boring) VN porn that, more than an original story, aims to get as many supporters as possible with sterile porn scenes (it doesn't want to be a negative critic but it's not my genre), however it is impossible to evaluate a version so short (even if it seems made by professionals in the sector), except that, if you continue with such short updates, the user is probably discouraged from following the project with constant curiosity and interest.
Good luck.