I really like the story. The intrigue and mystery is well-done.
I can't really put my finger on it but I'm having trouble getting behind almost all the love interests. I'm realising that I've already closed off most characters' paths, which I usually never do unless I'm forced to. Part of that has to do with my resentment for deceitful characters or information withholders. With the exception of Alice, all the characters are either deceiving me or (in the case of Brandon, Rayne, the hunter (forgot her name)) existing as some plot device that serves as the MC's motivation/weakness (they aren't built for this life). I like where things are going with Lilith and Silver so maybe there's potential there but her loyalty to Marie is a problem for me.
I'm not willing to trust in Marie even though it feels like the game wants you to. I understand the MC has a past connection to her that makes him willing to give her the benefit of the doubt, but I as the player don't inherit those feelings for her. I don't want to SAVE her. I want to resent her for using me without letting me in on her plans.