ch 1-15
very good premise. absolutely garbage execution. extremely few art on this. ofc i knew it's "text based" but the art only serves as clickbait. nearly nonexistent. might as well use AI for art if writing already has AI.
writing: long and boring. it's too much. not as excessive as some other games but still very annoyingly long just for the sake of being long, without serving any purpose like to establish characters or circumstances for the porn part.
lore/story: well it has a lot of writing and description... for no reason whatsoever. why would anyone care about all the details. first you need to show something to care and read all the random things and history of all these completely made up things. it's like a child talking about their dream for hours and hours.
porn/eroticism: very bad. extremely slow "corruption", very non-erotic scenes, and very boring and completely anti-porn logic. there are some games where "porn-logic" leads to quick sex scenes and you kinda forgive it because you are here for the porn... here it's nearly the opposite. it tries so hard to not be porn logic that it's the other end of the spectrum. complete garbage. how could he/she fk up that great premise i have no idea. you turn into a sex-slave yet the only thing the goblin does for pages and pages is CUM ON YOUR SWORD after masturbating... then pissing on you. then doing nothing LOL. how are you a sex slave. complete anti-porn logic. the author tried way too hard to be unique, but might as well make the whole game without porn, that would be unique too... uniquely shit at a porn forum.
so it's gigabad. absolutely great premise, complete failure of an execution. the 13reviews are probably ALL THE PEOPLE in the whole server who liked it. (or bots). i got to chapter 6-7 i think but it's a complete dumpster. goblin even hinted to get MC's girlfriend too as a slave but maybe it happens at chapter 15 but i doubt. knowing this author it will probably be hinted at chapter 15 and in chapter 239 we will get some action. absolutely terrible. author has no sense of any eroticism whatsoever.
very good premise. absolutely garbage execution. extremely few art on this. ofc i knew it's "text based" but the art only serves as clickbait. nearly nonexistent. might as well use AI for art if writing already has AI.
writing: long and boring. it's too much. not as excessive as some other games but still very annoyingly long just for the sake of being long, without serving any purpose like to establish characters or circumstances for the porn part.
lore/story: well it has a lot of writing and description... for no reason whatsoever. why would anyone care about all the details. first you need to show something to care and read all the random things and history of all these completely made up things. it's like a child talking about their dream for hours and hours.
porn/eroticism: very bad. extremely slow "corruption", very non-erotic scenes, and very boring and completely anti-porn logic. there are some games where "porn-logic" leads to quick sex scenes and you kinda forgive it because you are here for the porn... here it's nearly the opposite. it tries so hard to not be porn logic that it's the other end of the spectrum. complete garbage. how could he/she fk up that great premise i have no idea. you turn into a sex-slave yet the only thing the goblin does for pages and pages is CUM ON YOUR SWORD after masturbating... then pissing on you. then doing nothing LOL. how are you a sex slave. complete anti-porn logic. the author tried way too hard to be unique, but might as well make the whole game without porn, that would be unique too... uniquely shit at a porn forum.
so it's gigabad. absolutely great premise, complete failure of an execution. the 13reviews are probably ALL THE PEOPLE in the whole server who liked it. (or bots). i got to chapter 6-7 i think but it's a complete dumpster. goblin even hinted to get MC's girlfriend too as a slave but maybe it happens at chapter 15 but i doubt. knowing this author it will probably be hinted at chapter 15 and in chapter 239 we will get some action. absolutely terrible. author has no sense of any eroticism whatsoever.