VN Ren'Py The List [v0.09] [Uncle Loco]

[Kitchentable]

For Kitchentable, hmmm ... how about a softball pitcher, a kawaii MILF, and a mud-wrestling champ?
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It's getting more and more north american there, no? Softball, mud-wrestling.

But sure because as they say: the more, ther merrier and not to forget the Warhol's
"one's company, two's a crowd, and three's a party." So 4 and more is one hell of a party!

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To be fair though, I googled rollerball and unkown to me it seems to have resurfaced.
I was under the impression that rollerball disappeared somewhere in the 70s or 80s.

So I am sorry mate, I ain't 'murcian so I can't really relate and mean no offence with my ignorance.

For example I do not know what stereotypes surround a soft-ball pitcher.
Sporty women are fine though and mud-wrestler are like exotic dancers no?

 

[e-disfunction]

It's getting more and more north american there, no? Softball, mud-wrestling.

But sure because as they say: the more, ther merrier and not to forget the Warhol's
"one's company, two's a crowd, and three's a party." So 4 and more is one hell of a party!

_______

To be fair though, I googled rollerball and unkown to me it seems to have resurfaced.
I was under the impression that rollerball disappeared somewhere in the 70s or 80s.

So I am sorry mate, I ain't 'murcian so I can't really relate and mean no offence with my ignorance.

For example I do not know what stereotypes surround a soft-ball pitcher.
Sporty women are fine though and mud-wrestler are like exotic dancers no?

Well, if it matters, I ain't 'murcian either. For that matter, how is kawaii anything other than Japanese?

Ahhh! I see it now. You seem to be mis-reading things such as Hawaii rather than

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. (And softball can be any ball & stick game such as lacrosse or tennis ... except, because of basic bio-mechanics, women softball pitchers throw almost as fast as male softball pitchers so they might be more exotic for a story aimed at a multi-cultural audience!)

Those last three suggestions were, again, more out-of-the-ordinary activities for harem characters. But perhaps you are also believing that Uncle Loco (or any writer) must use stereotyped-people for their stories. My preference is for artists to add individuals as their characters, especially in something as stereotypical as a harem.

e-d

 

[Uncle Loco]

Yeah, I have some plans for some unique characters in the upcoming updates, in addition to some of the more normal roles we have already seen. We have a nurse already (Lily), a physical trainer (Madison), and a poker player (Diamonds/Ellie). We will get to learn more about what Kelly and Alexis do for jobs in upcoming updates, and there are still several other characters yet to meet.

 

[Kitchentable]

Well, if it matters, I ain't 'murcian either. For that matter.....

.... their stories. My preference is for artists to add individuals as their characters, especially in something as stereotypical as a harem.

e-d

Sorry mate, seems we are not really understanding one another!

Rollerball was a James Caan movie which is a bit about a roller derby like "sport"...
I meant to write roller derby however. Guess I mixed them up when typing. My bad.
Also I was under they impression that roller derby dissapeared in the 70s or 80s and thus called you ancient.

I left the kawaii out of my posting for the reason of strenghening my NA arguement. Cheap, I admit.
But again for me the term kawaii is only the japanese word for cute / adorable and it doesn't have
further meanings for me and I also don't know if the internet or younger generations
use it in a broader way with more meanings to it so I left it out.

However I like me some milf(s) with my AVNs. Cute, sexy or curvacious, don't matter.

And with soft ball I associate soley female american baseball. And I don't know the first thing
about baseball or soft ball apart from having watched a few baseball themed movies.
So I just assumed that there was something special around that profession and that's
why you brought it up. Talking about overthinking huh?

I do not believe that devs have to use tropes or stereotypes, I find it refreshing when they don't actually
but I can understand the use thereof as I think them to be more relateable to a broader audience.
Or maybe I am just jaded in my perception of my fellow humans?

Again I was under the impression that you named these professions because of some stereotypes
around them. I guess I am the shallow one. I apologize for assuming you are.

 

[HentaiKami]

Well, if it matters, I ain't 'murcian either.

Kingdom of Murcia shall rise again and overthrow the Spanish

 

[e-disfunction]

Sorry mate, seems we are not really understanding one another!

Rollerball was a James Caan movie which is a bit about a roller derby like "sport"...
I meant to write roller derby however. Guess I mixed them up when typing. My bad.
Also I was under they impression that roller derby dissapeared in the 70s or 80s and thus called you ancient.

I left the kawaii out of my posting for the reason of strenghening my NA arguement. Cheap, I admit.
But again for me the term kawaii is only the japanese word for cute / adorable and it doesn't have
further meanings for me and I also don't know if the internet or younger generations
use it in a broader way with more meanings to it so I left it out.

However I like me some milf(s) with my AVNs. Cute, sexy or curvacious, don't matter.

And with soft ball I associate soley female american baseball. And I don't know the first thing
about baseball or soft ball apart from having watched a few baseball themed movies.
So I just assumed that there was something special around that profession and that's
why you brought it up. Talking about overthinking huh?

I do not believe that devs have to use tropes or stereotypes, I find it refreshing when they don't actually
but I can understand the use thereof as I think them to be more relateable to a broader audience.
Or maybe I am just jaded in my perception of my fellow humans?

Again I was under the impression that you named these professions because of some stereotypes
around them. I guess I am the shallow one. I apologize for assuming you are.

No worries!

And *I* am amazed that roller derby still exists (along with other things ), too, specifically because I *am* old enough to have suffered through the bell-bottom pants fad *twice* now!

Oh the humanity!!!

 

[Theralyst]

Like the premise. Very interested. But since "Rob" is also my brother's name. Kinda makes it a bit too weird for me lol. Will consider giving it a chance later. Good luck to the dev though!

 

[chicken head]

Uncle Loco Thank you very much for making this game love it.

 

[Uncle Loco]

I am glad you are enjoying it, and I hope you continue to do so as the story unfolds even more. I am working hard on chapter 3 renders and animations now. The entire story is written out so all that remains are the renders and animations.

 

[chicken head]

I am glad you are enjoying it, and I hope you continue to do so as the story unfolds even more. I am working hard on chapter 3 renders and animations now. The entire story is written out so all that remains are the renders and animations.

 

[WheresLucifer]

Well, I would have to say that chapter two was quite interesting. It did reasonable job continuing after chapter one. As we see that MC still does not know his previous life was like in early chapter one. I think Uncle Loco did a good layout in chapter two that show MC still trying to recover his memory from the past. Yes, there been little hints through out chapter two that points few things out. I also think ending of both chapter one and two were well done. It seems to draw the audience to wait for next release, however I am not sure it will draw them to be despise for the next chapter base on how the audience needs the next release to be release sooner or not. However I am looking forward for chapter three to be release when it is ready to be release by the developer.

Overall, this NV seems to be reasonable balance with telling the story as well some lewd themes. There are other VN/Games are more lewd and other are not. I know some requires a lot of grinding and other requires audience's time. Someone for myself, I am balance between different ways.

Have a great day and be safe...

 

[Uncle Loco]

I wanted to share some progress with everyone this week, but I didn't have a lot to show yet since this week has been spent creating a few new locations that I teased in the last chapter like Alexis's room and Madison's boxing ring. I will wait to show those off later but I wanted to give you guys something this week. Based on some feedback I was told Rob's room needed to show more personality and make it feel like someone actually lives in there. So I added some art to the wall and wanted to share that with you all.

Spoiler: Rob's Room changes

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[YaYa_UnTIN2]

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[Uncle Loco]

Always love to hear thoughts and theories. Thanks for giving my game a try and sharing all this information.

I hope you come back and enjoy the direction of the story. Yes, I made some love interests ready to throw themselves at the mc for what seems like little to no reason. It will be explained at some point why that happens. The death of his family will be explained in detail too.

I understand why you may be weary of Alexis, but I hope you feel better about her and her friends over time. There is a lot of story to get in and I wanted to get some lewd content in every chapter which plays a small part into the fast pass for some LIs. However, most of the relationships will build over time. I want to say more on all this but I don't want to spoil a lot.

 

[Deleted member 5699221]

MC name fixed to the story..............why?...............just..............why?!
can we at least change the names of the girls?

 

[HornyyPussy]

MC name fixed to the story..............why?...............just..............why?!
can we at least change the names of the girls?

Can't be sure of course but i'm gonna guess because the Dev wants it that way?

 

[Uncle Loco]

The name of the MC plays a key role in the dialog with certain characters. Conversations will not come off with the right tone if a name change is made. You will see this in chapter 3 with how two characters will refer to the MC as Robbie. Then later you will see other characters refer to the MC as Robert. Dialogs are built around this as it gives these other characters more depth and personality.

As I have stated before I created this game for myself and decided to share it with others for free. There are no ways to donate or support me for this game because I wanted to have a lot more freedom to do things my way and try things the way I want to see them done. If a name is a deal breaker for you then I am sorry. I am sure someone at some point will create a mod to change the name, but I have no plans to do it for this game.

With that said thank you for playing my game and for the feedback.

 

[Uncle Loco]

Here is this week's teaser. I made some good progress last week I got 3 animations completed, created 3 new locations, and updated Rob's room a bit. My goal for this week is to finish up the last animation, and the remaining renders for the first lewd scene of chapter 3. After that start, the next big scene and hopefully pose all 4 of the animations needed for the optional lewd scene for chapter 3.

Spoiler: Chapter 3 teaser image

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[Forgotted]

Sorry mate, seems we are not really understanding one another!

Rollerball was a James Caan movie which is a bit about a roller derby like "sport"...
I meant to write roller derby however. Guess I mixed them up when typing. My bad.

Ahh, James Caan.... made me cry Brian Piccolo


Cheers

 

[WheresLucifer]

MC name fixed to the story..............why?...............just..............why?!
can we at least change the names of the girls?

Well, you could ask for modder to help create a mod for that if you needed it that urgent. In my opinion, I go either way. However in some VN, it easier to leave their names by default in case there been some discussion or questions on certain characters. Changing the name may also make some confusing when someone discuss about them.

So, for my opinion, I leave it as it is by the developer for now. In worst case scenario, you could try to find the modder to help you with that case. It may be worth the wait since there at least 11 more chapters to go (Uncle Loco can correct me if I am incorrect how many chapters remaining)

Have a great day and be safe...