Sorry it took so long to reply, but I don't think this is important for the story. I'm remaking and slowing a little bit the pace now.
I'm just passing by to inform that I'll make a sandbox system
This will be a simple system, basically in certain parts the player can choose to talk, cast spells, or go elsewhere. This provide me a lot of insteresting things to work on the story, but it's also increasing the amount of the complexity. I think I'm doing fine so far