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i just wish Faith and her boyfriend all the bad in the world. that is the most shitty thing to do to your supposed "best friend".
oh and the rape tag is missing.


Even Maya protected her in that drug den. Also came to visit and suggested to go to hospital. She could have died from internal bleeding and it was okay for Faith. Such a good friend.
 
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grumpyoldcat

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Art took a step up. Writing stayed about the same. The pacing isn't great. The addition of BBC is trite, flat out. This is so far a weak entry into the world of erotic VNs.

But, I guess some of you devs insist on being Sisyphus.
 

Ven95

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The music starts to get annoying rather fast, and I don't see that much content so far. I would say there is some potential here, but we have to wait to find out if that will develop to something good
 

DrDerpington

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To call the game "rough" would be an understatement. The party with Maya is bizarre and taints her character.

At least Faith could be redeemable since she didn't know about the drug.
Dunno about Maya. Drug addictions are bad and people act irationally. At least she was willing to own her mistakes. She can still redeem herself.

But Faith might have not known about a drug, but she didnt let April go to hospital after car accident. Seriously, April might have died from internal injuries!! That's the most shitty decision ever. And she continued to lie to her friend.
 
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atrebor68

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I personally HATE the scenes where there's only text in a blank dark screen.
Should be enough a still frame, or two, but use this trick is not a good idea.
I'll come back when this game will be more well developed.
 

DrDerpington

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Dude, he mean not english, but plot, story telling. Some people think GGGB-like games is boring. I not think so, but some japanese dev like NTRMAN for example is magnificent narrators. After he's "Season Of Loss" any other story look like empty eggs carton you know
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I smell a troll. When you say something like "plot here is bad, narration from NTRMAN is magnificient" then you must be either a troll or you have some brain issues. Welcome to ignore list.

Anyway the game is awesome. Although it still needs some polishing.
 
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ScornedBeef

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Jesus christ ai art is so bad. Nevermind the constant stiffness and uncanney valley shit that makes 98% of all ai art clockable on the sight, just look at the blonde's mouth in the blowjob scene, the ai engine rendered the tongue and lip into some disgusting eldritch monstrosity. And is that supposed to be her soft teeth draped over of the weird-looking wiener? Because saliva sure as hell don't look like that. And her lazy eye keeps bugging out lmao.

Even the standing art is bad. Blondy's got like a triple pussy.

Who even likes this ai generated shit. I'm begging you, unfuck your brains.
 

MisterNephilim

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But Faith might have not known about a drug, but she didnt let April go to hospital after car accident. Seriously, April might have died from internal injuries!! That's the most shitty decision ever. And she continued to lie to her friend.
I agree, but the fact that she feels like a shitty person (she is) and decided to go to her parents at the very least show a bit of remorse for her.
 

slavegal

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To be fair, this is par for the course for porn.
not necessarily; many games here offer a reasonable story as a mechanism for porn, especially a lot of players will set GGGB as the bar for this game. A writer needs to immerse players(conduct their minds) into the porn scene, not kick them into it.


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So, I don't think it is the standard course for a porn game when reasonable choices lead to non-porn. For example, in GGGB, MC uses drugs for the first time when she is drunk at a club, and her best friend entices her to do so, which leads to the gang path --- full of rough and kinky sex. Players also understand that MC doesn't wish to live a prudish life because of players' previous choices by that point --- a reasonable chain of actions.
 
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