yozara

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the files I can download are named "chapter II" is the chapter I included because I couldn't find it somewhere else
 

TimoF965

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Before I but this promising beginning in my archive: Is there any way to have sex with the BBC in the shower in Mayas Party in Chapter two?
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palmtrees89

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Not gonna lie, the writing gives the impression as if the person in charge of the script never interacted with real human beings. Also, since it's already made with AI, why not also use AI to write some decent and most importantly proper English, especially considering writing isn't exactly one of the devs strengths? The English translation is horrible.

Been trying out several AI cg games the past couple days, and most of them seem to have these kind of issues. Like, I get that lots of porn hungry fellas don't really give a rats arse about solid writing, but good writing elevates a game with solid visuals to new heights. I mean...It's supposed to be a Novel. Don't quite get why so many devs put the smallest possible effort into the writing.

Not trying to hate or anything, it's just very unfortunate as the game clearly has potential.
 
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TimoF965

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Not gonna lie, the writing gives the impression as if the person in charge of the script never interacted with real human beings.
I think you are exaggerating. Yes, there are some edges, but "never interacted with a human being"? I do think that the corruption goes way to fast to be remotely believable, especially at the "party". But it is bearable for me and the visuals are really nice.

Like, I get that lots of porn hungry fellas don't really give a rats arse about solid writing, but good writing elevates a game with solid visuals to new heights.
True. If I wanted the ultimat realistic porn-visual without a great story, I could just watch porn in 4k. The story could make almost the baddest visuals be kind of hot (even though good visuals are nice to have).

as the game clearly has potential.
True. But it seems to be abandoned.
 

Geigi

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Not gonna lie, the writing gives the impression as if the person in charge of the script never interacted with real human beings. Also, since it's already made with AI, why not also use AI to write some decent and most importantly proper English, especially considering writing isn't exactly one of the devs strengths? The English translation is horrible.

Been trying out several AI cg games the past couple days, and most of them seem to have these kind of issues. Like, I get that lots of porn hungry fellas don't really give a rats arse about solid writing, but good writing elevates a game with solid visuals to new heights. I mean...It's supposed to be a Novel. Don't quite get why so many devs put the smallest possible effort into the writing.

Not trying to hate or anything, it's just very unfortunate as the game clearly has potential.
This is why I prefer fanfictions and online books. Definitely, one of the best erotic writing can be found in books and porn in fanfictions.
 
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Darky7

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Well..

The art is pretty, but not much to say about variety.

The writing needs work, which means dev has to work on their English. That can be fixed in post production.

I honestly don't know what is trying to be accomplished though. There are other games out there that are doing the same thing, but b
etter.

Good work dev.
 

TimoF965

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I honestly don't know what is trying to be accomplished though. There are other games out there that are doing the same thing, but better.
Yes, tgere are other games like this, some are better. But there are still too few games like this, so every additional game with this topic and perspective is welcome.

But youare right, it could use some more love in post-production aka a nativ english man that polishes the language (and maybe even the plot a little).
 

Enlight432

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Wouldn't surprise me, by all the hate and negativity one gets, because of the AI-Art

But I also hope it will continue :D
Don't worry
AI like NTR has many haters and fans at the same time
Personally, I am a fan of AI art, and AI-oriented games of 2024 have a significant number of fans, such as My New Girlfriend, which attracted 700 supporters in Patron in two months !
 

Enlight432

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So, with the greatness of the future updates, it will find many fans
The only problem now is that it is fast-burn, I mean that Anal with BBC is not suitable for the second update
 
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