Not gonna lie, the writing gives the impression as if the person in charge of the script never interacted with real human beings. Also, since it's already made with AI, why not also use AI to write some decent and most importantly proper English, especially considering writing isn't exactly one of the devs strengths? The English translation is horrible.
Been trying out several AI cg games the past couple days, and most of them seem to have these kind of issues. Like, I get that lots of porn hungry fellas don't really give a rats arse about solid writing, but good writing elevates a game with solid visuals to new heights. I mean...It's supposed to be a Novel. Don't quite get why so many devs put the smallest possible effort into the writing.
Not trying to hate or anything, it's just very unfortunate as the game clearly has potential.