VN RPGM Abandoned Hentai Punch! [v0.1.1] [FIROKETA Games]

[TaoKirito]

Yes i turn off is Still the same

 

[Darkhound]

Anyone knowing a way to get back to classroom 3-1? I don't find it anywhere.

 

[fidless]

Anyone knowing a way to get back to classroom 3-1? I don't find it anywhere.

At what point of the story you're?

 

[Darkhound]

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I am probably overlooking something but at this point I am rather clueless after trying for 2 hours. ^^;;

Edit: Ok, now I am feeling dumb. I really overlooked something. Just now noticed the little blue dot at the bottom of the available locations and realized I could scroll down to see the remaining ones. Didn't see it because it was barely visible over the blue background. My bad.

 

[fidless]

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I am probably overlooking something but at this point I am rather clueless after trying for 2 hours. ^^;;

Edit: Ok, now I am feeling dumb. I really overlooked something. Just now noticed the little blue dot at the bottom of the available locations and realized I could scroll down to see the remaining ones. Didn't see it because it was barely visible over the blue background. My bad.

It's fine It's expands the choice menu

 

[solys87]

Feedback time:

Story: A+++
You have a great understanding of humor and character diversity, keep up the good work. I am at the point where the M girl joined the committee, and story-wise everything is keeping my interested.

Writing: A/B
Maybe someone can help you proofread the scripts, lots of grammar errors and some misused phrases/words. But the writing is great for tone and flow.

Character Design: A+++
You know what people like to see. And as an extra note of respect, I love the disclaimer about asian body types, a lot of stupid people don't understand that people of all ages come in all sizes. My ex gf is 155cm (5'1) and 40kg and more or less flat chested at 30. Petite doesnt mean kids!

H Scenes: A / C-
A for the girls and the context.
C- for how much time it takes to actually finish a sex scene because of the minigame. Its really tough to have a rewarding minigame when we are trying to fap, so generally just dont. You want to reward people for watching a meter instead of letting them enjoy the scene? Have rewards for fucking different girls or in different locales or situations that maybe require some checkboxes or random encounters. This minigame right now is a waste of time and a distraction. Having 3 phases should mean that there are different poses / actions in each phase. currently it seems they are all the same.

Combat: B-
The system is a great idea, I didn't realize the marks improved damage though (maybe it mentioned but i didnt see). I think it doesn't flow well though. Marks should be persistent through fights in the disciplinary minigame, often when i see a girl, I beat her up (and all companions) before getting the required marks for a combo. And missing even 1 attack and failing to get the mark just feels super bad because you have to start from 0 each fight. You might even consider starting every fight at 2 marks (opponent also). Currently I have never done the full combo with Kotora and I have done the disciplinary minigame 4 times.
Strip attack always trigger, not just on crit, and should give a reward like collectable CG or an H scene. Currently it feels like a gimmick, and after the second one i didnt feel rewarded enough to try it more

Items: C+
Lots of diversity in healing items...too much honestly. Unless these items are going to be used for fetch quests to improve girl relations, simplify it to just a few basic items.
Money is way too hard to earn if you spend your early allowance on healing items. Either have enemies always dropping 1-2 "Bum Market" items per battle (minimum) Or even 1 per enemy so longer fights feel more rewarding. Grinding is a game killer. **I read in the final creator message that there will be more ways to earn money, it should be at least 2x as fast as currently.**

Progression: ~
Too early to judge, but I hope you add in a lot of events that all start being accessible right after the first school defense
During training there should be moree feedback about progression. Having it stay at F for 5 activities makes the player think its a bug.

****Is it possible to minimize the text box?**** This is super important to add if its not in already, lots of visual goodness is being blocked from view by the text box. If it is added already, it should be in the Keyboard Config


BUGS:
--Sometimes when going to player bedroom the UI disappears and game must be restarted. The buttons still respond, but the visuals all disappear.
--Game crash when meeting gramps for the second time.
--School Depravity reset from 20 to 0...I am not sure why.
--When selling pictures it shows you are losing money in the sell menu, but properly give you money when you sell.

 

[fidless]

Feedback time:

Story: A+++
You have a great understanding of humor and character diversity, keep up the good work. I am at the point where the M girl joined the committee, and story-wise everything is keeping my interested.

Writing: A/B
Maybe someone can help you proofread the scripts, lots of grammar errors and some misused phrases/words. But the writing is great for tone and flow.

Character Design: A+++
You know what people like to see. And as an extra note of respect, I love the disclaimer about asian body types, a lot of stupid people don't understand that people of all ages come in all sizes. My ex gf is 155cm (5'1) and 40kg and more or less flat chested at 30. Petite doesnt mean kids!

H Scenes: A / C-
A for the girls and the context.
C- for how much time it takes to actually finish a sex scene because of the minigame. Its really tough to have a rewarding minigame when we are trying to fap, so generally just dont. You want to reward people for watching a meter instead of letting them enjoy the scene? Have rewards for fucking different girls or in different locales or situations that maybe require some checkboxes or random encounters. This minigame right now is a waste of time and a distraction. Having 3 phases should mean that there are different poses / actions in each phase. currently it seems they are all the same.

Combat: B-
The system is a great idea, I didn't realize the marks improved damage though (maybe it mentioned but i didnt see). I think it doesn't flow well though. Marks should be persistent through fights in the disciplinary minigame, often when i see a girl, I beat her up (and all companions) before getting the required marks for a combo. And missing even 1 attack and failing to get the mark just feels super bad because you have to start from 0 each fight. You might even consider starting every fight at 2 marks (opponent also). Currently I have never done the full combo with Kotora and I have done the disciplinary minigame 4 times.
Strip attack always trigger, not just on crit, and should give a reward like collectable CG or an H scene. Currently it feels like a gimmick, and after the second one i didnt feel rewarded enough to try it more

Items: C+
Lots of diversity in healing items...too much honestly. Unless these items are going to be used for fetch quests to improve girl relations, simplify it to just a few basic items.
Money is way too hard to earn if you spend your early allowance on healing items. Either have enemies always dropping 1-2 "Bum Market" items per battle (minimum) Or even 1 per enemy so longer fights feel more rewarding. Grinding is a game killer. **I read in the final creator message that there will be more ways to earn money, it should be at least 2x as fast as currently.**

Progression: ~
Too early to judge, but I hope you add in a lot of events that all start being accessible right after the first school defense
During training there should be moree feedback about progression. Having it stay at F for 5 activities makes the player think its a bug.

****Is it possible to minimize the text box?**** This is super important to add if its not in already, lots of visual goodness is being blocked from view by the text box. If it is added already, it should be in the Keyboard Config


BUGS:
--Sometimes when going to player bedroom the UI disappears and game must be restarted. The buttons still respond, but the visuals all disappear.
--Game crash when meeting gramps for the second time.
--School Depravity reset from 20 to 0...I am not sure why.
--When selling pictures it shows you are losing money in the sell menu, but properly give you money when you sell.

I Agree with the most things you said.

H scenes
The minigame will stay, I like interaction during the sex and it pauses several times so the player could get a nice view. I like the fact that you can control the thrusting speed that way giving the girl orgasm and that it's not just a single video. But I'll reduce the time required for the white bar to fill and make easier to achieve 100% satisfaction (make it achievable at 50% into the scene). I agree that right now it's borderline tedious. And thanks for the suggestion! I'll definitely implement that some scenes will have different poses at different stages.

Combat
Speaking about patrol activity. Current enemies are trash level, easy to beat. So it's no wonder you end the fight before you can use the combo. Encounter difficulty scales together with depravity level. Once the depravity increases (especially if it reaches above 80), encounters become more challenging, but currently, there are not enough ways to increase that and selling photos does little, unless you skip 20 days and sell all the photos you collected at once. Overall it's still in early stage and doing patrol activities shouldn't be a big part of the game in my vision.

Items
I guess I've made a mistake, just before releasing I increased clothes price from 1200 to something like 2500. It needs fine-tuning, thanks for the feedback.

About the first training steps, I guess you're right. It's confusing showing that skill increases but its rank stays the same. I'll look into it as well as making it possible to hide the text box.

Thanks for the feedback, really appreciated.

 

[Darkhound]

On that note, just a little suggestion. You already have a map for the City, would it be possible to make a map for school too? My overlook of the scroll-function to see all available locations aside it would make navigating easier.

But I have to agree that the items are a little bit to pricy for my liking and I already did resort to grinding a few days via patrol activities to get the first cam and the first clothes to further a quest. Perhaps a part-time job at the convenience store could help with it. Or the MC selling his precious idol posters

That aside, as I am at the point of repitition every day to get money for Kotoras side quest, is there more of the main story available after the fight in the backyard or is this it for the time being?

 

[fidless]

On that note, just a little suggestion. You already have a map for the City, would it be possible to make a map for school too? My overlook of the scroll-function to see all available locations aside it would make navigating easier.

But I have to agree that the items are a little bit to pricy for my liking and I already did resort to grinding a few days via patrol activities to get the first cam and the first clothes to further a quest. Perhaps a part-time job at the convenience store could help with it. Or the MC selling his precious idol posters

That aside, as I am at the point of repitition every day to get money for Kotoras side quest, is there more of the main story available after the fight in the backyard or is this it for the time being?

Maybe someday, but right now it's easier to add/edit choice based traveling.

Place a camera in the locker room and skip some days. It'll generate photos each day, sell them to pervert
There's some quest with Kotora and health committee girls.
Money won't be an issue, I just need to add more content and fine tune it. Don't worry, I won't make this a grindy game.

 

[Aiden_black]

Nice game. xD

 

[Darkhound]

Maybe someday, but right now it's easier to add/edit choice based traveling.

Place a camera in the locker room and skip some days. It'll generate photos each day, sell them to pervert
There's some quest with Kotora and health committee girls.
Money won't be an issue, I just need to add more content and fine tune it. Don't worry, I won't make this a grindy game.

yeah, that I did already to push money

ah and my suggestion regarding the navigation was not intended to wanting it fast. Even if you maybe decided to do it, I would suggest to doing it later and concentrate more on the game expansion. I like it very much so far and hope it will be completed someday.

 

[Lorric17]

H scenes
The minigame will stay, I like interaction during the sex and it pauses several times so the player could get a nice view. I like the fact that you can control the thrusting speed that way giving the girl orgasm and that it's not just a single video. But I'll reduce the time required for the white bar to fill and make easier to achieve 100% satisfaction (make it achievable at 50% into the scene). I agree that right now it's borderline tedious. And thanks for the suggestion! I'll definitely implement that some scenes will have different poses at different stages.

I played it and mostly liked until I got to the first sex scene. Then I deleted the game. It just takes too long, looking at the exact same animation play, while focusing on some bars and having to hold a button. Took the sexy out of the scene. If you do decide to refine the mechanics, I'd be tempted to try again.

 

[ThunderRob]

i am having a very hard time playing this game..my tears of laughter have blinded me holy shit that opening sequence was the funniest thing i've played on this site yet..lol
"girl satisfaction 100%" well DUH..of course it is
its a fact 9 out of 10 bald men are perverts..HAHAAAAA!!!!

 

[AlphaOmegaMale]

cant get pass the start of school day where you meet the dude you got the lighter from

 

[ThunderRob]

ok..those of you that see what i'm playing and try...this game is hilarious..some of the english is occasionally wonky but its very mild and is almost unnoticable..the gameplay is quite intuitive..while some of the "actions" sex,fighting..may take a while..its not too bad really...while playing..outside of the menu's for saving..accessing inventory etc..it is NOTHING like the standard rpgm..it plays and feels more like unity(but smoother and faster with usable options..LOL) the travel(the bane of rpgm games) is proper "map" with clickable locations..so its easy peasy seamless and what we are used to in the engines we generally prefer...in conclusion..this is a game well worthy of your time.

 

[longbong007]

Nice game, there's some random crash at talking with Kira, and random freeze after arriving our house. BTW, does work-in-progress quest means that I can't do it yet or I can just do apart of it. Such as "Yet another fight" quest; meeting the dude after school but I didn't see him coming. Can I unlock the abandoned factory yet? Finally, Can we have another better looking dude as MC ?

 

[Darkhound]

Nice game, there's some random crash at talking with Kira, and random freeze after arriving our house. BTW, does work-in-progress quest means that I can't do it yet or I can just do apart of it. Such as "Yet another fight" quest; meeting the dude after school but I didn't see him coming. Can I unlock the abandoned factory yet? Finally, Can we have another better looking dude as MC ?

Hell no! I like the MC, reminds me greatly of GTO only with less funny faces Though if he'd make them I would already suspect him to be his son, probably... surely... or so. (though it wouldn't be possible that GTO's son would be the suspect of bullying in his earlier years). And at least he doesn't look like the ones from Locker Room or Bathroom. (though Bathroom-Boy could be MC for another setting with his looks) Aside from that I bet that @fidless had his/her reason for making him looking like that. Better than your standard HS-MC you see in some games. (my opinion, could be mistaken, since I never really played HS with the available male options, too much fun fidling with the female settings)

Well work-in-progress means you reached the current end for these quests and have to wait for updates. But at least this game has some actual content and not just a few minutes of gameplay.

cant get pass the start of school day where you meet the dude you got the lighter from

Had the same problem. Saved just before that point (thank god for saving almost everywhere) and tried 2-3 times until I got past that. But Dev already said he will provide a fix for these if I am not mistaken.

 

[Scrot]

@fidless i encountered a bug it's the 3rd time that this happen and i need start again


btw your game is pretty good i loved the models and it is lot of fun i really liked keep it up
and relative to the bug is there anything i can do to that doens't happen?? cause i forgot save and now i need play back of game all over again :/ xD

-EDIT-
oh just saw now your warning ty anyway i really should read the OP more hahaha

 

[fidless]

Some news regarding NTR. In short, I'll be toning down on that.

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I played it and mostly liked until I got to the first sex scene. Then I deleted the game. It just takes too long, looking at the exact same animation play, while focusing on some bars and having to hold a button. Took the sexy out of the scene. If you do decide to refine the mechanics, I'd be tempted to try again.

I mentioned earlier, I'll be making sex mini-games shorter and easier.

i am having a very hard time playing this game..my tears of laughter have blinded me holy shit that opening sequence was the funniest thing i've played on this site yet..lol
"girl satisfaction 100%" well DUH..of course it is
its a fact 9 out of 10 bald men are perverts..HAHAAAAA!!!!

Thanks. That means a lot to me

cant get pass the start of school day where you meet the dude you got the lighter from

It's work in progress, the quest is not yet ready.

Nice game, there's some random crash at talking with Kira, and random freeze after arriving our house. BTW, does work-in-progress quest means that I can't do it yet or I can just do apart of it. Such as "Yet another fight" quest; meeting the dude after school but I didn't see him coming. Can I unlock the abandoned factory yet? Finally, Can we have another better looking dude as MC ?

Yes. Work-in-progress means I'm working on it. The gym and abandoned factory are not ready yet. And no, the ugly MC stays, he's adorably ugly

 

[Whitewolf7987]

Well color me sufficiently intrigued